Savage Grace (5)
Angel Obregon

 

look and takes off at a run. He reaches the entrance, but suddenly
the entire floor seems deserted. He walks to the stairwell, but there’s
no sound of footsteps going down. Dead silence.

Then he’s grabbed from behind. There’s one on each arm and another
with an arm around his neck . Denesh walks up and frisks him, taking
the toy magnum from the shoulder holster.. He points the toy pistol at
him then gestures for the 3 men to let him go.

DENESH
As a psychiatrist, I have always been
amazed at the traps intelligent men can
set for themselves.

O’JOHN
Easy, your madness is always a little
smarter than you are. Strange.

DENESH
It’s an interesting conversation, but we
barely have time for the ceremony.

O’JOHN
A shame, I figured I couldn’t die as long
as I kept talking.

DENESH
This way, Mr. O’John.

O;John lunges for the gun in the guard statue’s holster. The
killers just stand there watching, chuckling at his silliness.

The magnum is stuck in the holster, but they are giving him all
the time in the world. They seem to be enjoying it and dont
want it to end. Then O’John gets the gun out with a 2-handed
yank.

He shoots Rozzo as he brings the gun up and then another as he
flings the sights into position. Denesh pulls the trigger of the toy
.357 and is rewarded with a plastic click. O’John shoots him in
the stomach. And O’John shoots 2 more.

Denesh drops to a squat and reaches for a cigarette, but he’s
shaking too badly and the cigarettes fly out of the pack with the
jerking of his arm.

O’John plugs in a quick loader and keeps firing slowly and
methodically as the rest of them scatter to the rear galleries,
bloody, lurching and falling down.

He plugs in a 2nd quicker loader and waits. Dead silence.
No sound from below, no response to the shots. The building
seems deserted.

Denesh looks up at him with astonished and gentle reproach.
O’John picks a cigarette off the floor and puts it in Denesh’s
mouth. He lights it for him.

O’JOHN
Where is he or is it who? He’s here in New York.

Denesh bites the cigarette in two and begins hemorrhaging
torrentially from the mouth, then he falls over dead. O’John
holds his gun out in front of him in the police water-skiing pose
and walks slowly through the galleries.

Then suddenly a figure darts past him. It’s Octobrina and she’s
into the stairwell and gone, down the stairs at a gallop. He
chases her but she’s always one landing ahead, against the
wall and showing too little and too fast to be shot at. One
landing away from the ground floor the sound of high heels
on marble suddenly stops.

He leaps the last half flight of stairs He looks around. She must
be somewhere in the lobby. He passes a few bodies, drugged
or dead and looks around again.

There standing in the shadows is Octobrina. She had knocked
one of the ceramic skulls out of Jasper John’s Target With Five
Faces and is standing in for the one on the end.

She’s trying to keep her face stiff, but her face keeps twitching
with tension. It’s the only thing moving in the room. She begins
to cry noisily. He waits until she settles down to some muffled
sobbing.

O’JOHN
Where is he? Who is he?

OCTOBRINA
I don’t know.

O’JOHN
Of course you do. That’s what all this is about.
That’s why everyone goes crazy when I say his
name. Because I’m about to find him.

OCTOBRINA
I’ll take you to him

She comes out from behind the painting and leaps forward.
She grabs the gun in both hands and presses it to her chest
and pushes the trigger with her thumbs And then she falls
over dying fast.

O’JOHN
But why?

She smiles good naturedly and then she’s dead.
Suddenly it’s time to go.

O’John steps to the front door. He’s about to smash the glass with
his pistol when he sees that it’s open. It had been locked before.
He walks out looking no more worried than anyone else on a New
York street in the dark.

INT. VITO’S OFFICE (NIGHT)

O’John enters without knocking. Vito is playing solitaire. He looks
more ominous than before, a little less of a clown.

O’JOHN
Miracle to find you alone.

VITO
You waiting for a miracle?

O’JOHN
I’m counting on it.

VITO
What’s on your mind, old buddy?
This doesn’t feel like a social call.

O’JOHN
How long have we known each other?

VITO
I don’t know, I really don’t remember.

O’JOHN
That’s a long time but, you know,
I still don’t feel close to you.

VITO
If we were any closer, I’d be standing
behind you.24 hours don’t go by that I
don’t save your life.

No, we don’t go out drinking together.
That’s the way it is in this business.
You got to keep your private life separate
or you lose respect for yourself.

O’JOHN
You make what off me? 50,000 a year?

VITO
Nowhere near and it costs more than that
to keep you alive.

O’JOHN
Why? why do you keep saving my life?

VITO
I don’t need reasons for what I do. I can
get away with anything. But, yeah, alright,
in financial terms it was a mistake.

O’JOHN
Is it personal feelings?

VITO
What? You finally need a friend?
You must be awfully scared.

O’JOHN
I’m scared. There’s something out there,
something so monstrous I’d go insane if I
even saw it. You keep it invisible for me.

VITO
That’s right, old buddy, that’s exactly right,
but you’re going to see it soon. It’s you.

O’John nods agreement.

O’JOHN
Who does Azriel work for? You obviously
work for the same people.

VITO
How many times you ask me that? Is
there a magic number, already? I don’t
know. I’m like you, I don’t want to know.
Ask her.

O’JOHN
I did. She says she works for you.

VITO
She didn’t say that.

O’JOHN
But she does, doesn’t she?

VITO
You got a cigarette? Never mind,
I got another pack somewhere.

He opens a drawer in his desk, but O’John has his gun out 1st.

O’JOHN
Get real.

Vito pulls a pack of Pall Mall out of the desk. He opens
one and lights it, talking as he does.

VITO
You oughta learn to relax. You’re getting
to be like a wounded animal already.

O’JOHN
Who?

VITO
You forgot to put your gun away.

O’JOHN
Who? I’m going to see him soon so,
what’s the difference.

VITO
This is painful, old buddy.

He pulls out his .25 automatic and point it at O’John’s head.
O’John doesn’t move.

O’JOHN
You’re not going to shoot.

VITO
You know that?

O’JOHN
You mean you’d rather die than tell me.

VITO
Well, yeah.

O’JOHN
That’s weird. I didn’t know there was
anything you were willing to die for.
No, I haven’t lost respect for you.

He gets up and leaves, but outside the door he hears Vito
making a hurried phone call. He throws open the door and
shoots Vito through the head with the usual results.

He walks behind the desk and steps over the body. The rat
is squeaking in the garbage can. It’s the size of a cat, but
apparently quite tame.

He picks it up, wraps it in the garbage can liner and sticks it
in his shoulder bag with its head peeping out. He gets out
and walks to the elevator. AN OLD MAN has stuck his head
out the door at the sound of the shot.

O’JOHN
Some goddamn kids been throwing firecrackers
in the hall. You see which way they went?

There is no reply and O’JOHN keeps on walking.
The rat looks around and yawns.

EXT. APT. WINDOW (NIGHT)

POV is pointed in the window of Azriel’s apartment. Azriel and
her secretary are playing out a private ritual. Azriel is wearing
jodhpurs and riding boots and is naked to the waist. Her secretary
is wearing a white wedding dress and veil.

Azriel has her left arm out straight, but bent at the elbow with
the hand pulled back to her ear. Her secretary is lifting her veil
with one hand and lightly kissing the point of Azriel’s elbow.
They are smiling and whispering to each other.

O’John drops into the POV and walks along the ledge to
Azriel’s window. Not being on a fire escape there is no gate.

He unwraps the rat and heaves it through the window. Azriel’s
attack dog takes one look at the enormous rat and runs for it.
Azriel strides to the window, throws open the sash and looks out.

He shoots her through the left eye. The back of her head is
gone, but the message has already left her brain. She turns
and runs across the room straight into the wall. She falls over
backwards, but her legs continue running motions.

Her face is rigid, eyes staring straight ahead as though she
were concentrating very hard. He shoots her again, but she
keeps trying to run up the wall. After the 4th shot she lays still.

Her secretary is screaming, but the sound is muffled because
she has her fist in her mouth. She is hopping slowly from one
foot to the other, staring wide eyed at Azriel.

He’s about to shoot her too then notices the rat looking at him.
He looks at the rat then re-holsters his gun, changes his mind,
shoots her and climbs back up on the roof and disappears.

EXT. MEG’S APT. (NIGHT)

O’John is squatting on the window ledge, 60 ft. above the ground.
There is no fire escape. He opens the window with infinite patience.

INT. MEG’S APT. (NIGHT)

The window has a double locked gate, but he reaches in and
wrenches on the locks, slowly, without apparent effort. It’s the
strength of the insane. With the same silent patience he slides
back the gate and climbs through the window.

Meg is in bed asleep, looking childlike and innocent. He
stands over her staring down. He makes no move, but there
is something homicidal in the rigidity of his stare, the fixity of
his stance. Then Meg’s cat jumps up, meowing loudly and
demanding to be petted.

He pets the cat absently and the animal closes its eyes in
ecstasy, purring loudly as an alarm clock. Meg wakes up
sleepily, rubbing her eyes.

MEG
Sit down, I’ll make coffee. It’s made, I’ll reheat it.

She starts to get up. He just stands there.

O’JOHN
Go back to sleep.

She gets back under the covers.

MEG
You killed them all?

O’JOHN
All I know about.

MEG
You must be hungry.

O’JOHN
Go to sleep.

MEG
Are you coming to bed?

O’JOHN
Yeah, I guess so.

DREAM --- INT.MEG’S APARTMENT

O’John is in bed with Meg. He sits up sharply as though he
heard a sharp noise, but the room is dead quiet. This time
there is a sound: A persistent, impatient rapping. He reaches
under the pillow and pulls out a large black automatic.

O’JOHN (V.O.)
It sounded like a rat in the breadbox, a
large fearless rat. I needed a shotgun.

Gun in hand he advances into the room. He passes a mirror
full of hot white light, more light than there is in the room. He
looks into it automatically.

There’s Gen rapping insistently and emphatically gesturing for
him to come on through. Behind her is a scene with the dream
logic of a painting by Richard Lindner called THE MEETING:
The principal characters of the story, but shown of a size
according to their importance.

The cat is 15 ft. tall, Vito is barely 10 ft. tall, Azriel an easy 19,
Meg is maybe 4’11 and the girl of the 1st scene a bare 6 inches.
They are motionless, staring in to space oblivious to each other.

They are seated around a roulette table, but it looks like the
Wheel Of Fortune in the Tarot pack.

Behind them all and the size of character balloons in the Macy’s
Thanksgiving Day Parade are models out of a 1963 lingerie ad
in Harper’s Bazaar. They’re wearing shiny girdle things from
their armpits to just above the knee and posturing ecstatically
in sexual transport. They are the only thing moving.

Gen is in the wings smiling with a frozen gesture of encouragement.
He tries to walk through, but just bumps his nose. He smashes the
mirror with the gun butt. The mirror stays intact, but the image
shatters and fall off the glass like autumn leaves.

The mirror is still full of light, but it’s impossible to see anything in
the glitter and glare. He steps through the surface of the mirror
and as he does there’s a sudden breeze that ruffles his hair.

Inside the mirror is a CGI featureless black plain and blank non-
specular blue-green sky. Everything in the room is duplicated in
the mirror, but made out of cardboard cut-outs painted in carnival
colors. And instead of growing smaller with distance by the rules
of perspective, things are growing smaller physically.

As he walks deeper into the mirror, the furniture is ˝ normal
size, then Ľ then 1/8 and the ceiling keeps rising. Behind him
the mirror is a blazing white doorway which doesn’t seem to
illuminate the darkness.

Figures in the black ninja costumes of Kabuki puppet handlers
are scurrying impossibly fast rearranging the cut-outs. The one
of Meg in bed is instantly replaced by one that shows she’s rolled
over in her sleep.

There’s a twinkling on the horizon. He starts walking toward it,
but he’s moving much faster than he’s walking. It’s another white
mirror doorway with cardboard cut-outs arranged in front of it.
He’s approaching it fast and the black figures are swarming
around him like a cloud of flies.

He walks through the 2nd mirror and finds himself seated in a Chinese
coffee shop with a mirrored wall. The WAITER walks over.

WAITER
I’m sorry, sir, I didn’t see you come in.

O’JOHN
Coffee.

Suddenly, the Black girl is seated across from him.

BLACK GIRL
Make it 2.

O’JOHN
Things were almost getting interesting for
a minute. What now?

BLACK GIRL
You didn’t sign.

O’JOHN
It wasn’t necessary.

BLACK GIRL
It is now.

O’JOHN
No thanks.

He turns and walks through the mirror. She walks through and after him.
On the other side are cardboard cutouts of the coffee shop interior.

There’s a larger than life cardboard figure of the waiter holding
2 cups of coffee with a cartoon word balloon coming out of his
head saying: “Where’d they go?”

O’John kicks it over and keeps walking with the Black Girl beside
him. It’s like Hong Kong’s busiest street at rush hour, but the figures
swirling around them are all solid black.

BLACK GIRL
You could try to repent; that would be fun to watch.

O’JOHN
Repent what?

She laughs with delight

O’JOHN (continuing)
Well, for example?

BLACK GIRL
How many men have you killed so far today?

O’JOHN
I don’t know, but I always thought that, you
know, between consenting adults and all that.

BLACK GIRL
Sleeping with your sister?

O’JOHN
Well, not very often.

She laughs again with astonishment and delight. He’s walking
away fast, but she keeps up with him without moving.

O’JOHN
Anyway, (he jerks a thumb toward the sky)
he’s a pretty good guy so, you don’t have to
worry about him too much.

BLACK GIRL
That part sounds true.

O’JOHN
Oh, yeah, sure, so, I don’t understand why you
play these games. They prove the existence of
the Devil which proves the existence of God and
that’s the last thing a demon would want to do.

BLACK GIRL
That’s why we pretty much gave up doing it.

O’JOHN
Which brings up another point:
Where the fuck are the angels?

The wind roars up and the dark comes roaring down.

Automatically, pathetically, he reaches for a cigarette and tries to
light it The background is blacked out by the glare of the flame.
There’s nothing but the flame surrounded by darkness. POV pulls
back to show him sitting up in bed and lighting a cigarette. Meg is
still asleep.

THE SAME (MORNING)

He’s still in the same position staring at the phone.
Meg wakes up and looks at him sleepily.

MEG
What are you doing?

O’JOHN
Waiting for the phone to ring.
I guess she’s really dead.

THE SAME (AFTERNOON)

They’re sitting at the kitchen table drinking coffee. O’John
looks shell shocked.

MEG
Take it easy. Don’t try to talk. It’s a long
swim back to consciousness. (He nods)
We’ve got to find him.

O’JOHN
Find who?

MEG
Savage Grace.

He grabs his head with both hands and begins rocking side
to side. She grabs him and holds his head to her breast.

MEG (continuing)
It’s alright, Baby, I’m here, it’s alright.
But we have to find him.

O’JOHN
What for?

MEG
Because it isn’t over. It isn’t over till we do.
How many fireman were killed at the Trade
Center?

O’JOHN
430.

MEG
You’re well informed.

O’JOHN
It seemed important at the time.

That’s a little cold blooded even for him and, for a moment,
she looks at him in horror.

MEG
Yes, well, that’s not that many at all.
How do you find out their names?
The Hall of Records, yes?

IRONIC SIDESTEP: A 3-minute sequence of still shots each about
˝ second long, very much like the pysch test Warren Beatty had in
PARRALLAX VIEW. That was centered on figures of authority, this
should focus on rock concerts with a few quick supernatural inserts

And, maybe, Jimmi Hendrix, Janis Joplin and MaMa Cass choking
to death on their own vomit. And then dancing women falling through
the air with their hair on fire.

EXT. BATTERY PARK (DAY)

They’re standing at the rim, watching the boats drift by.

MEG
What are you doing?

O’JOHN
Trying to figure out how you got me out here.

MEG
Come on, it could take hours and they close at 4.

O’JOHN
No thanks.

He drags her away violently and very much against her will onto the
Staten Island Ferry.

EXT. REAR DECK OF THE STATEN ISLAND FERRY (DAY)

They sit on the last bench of the rear deck. She shivers and
looks at him accusingly, but says nothing. She looks over
her shoulder and makes a noise like a cat that’s had its tail
stepped on because there in plain sight are The Twin Towers
untouched and intact.

O’JOHN
I see it too.

He grabs her again and they retreat into the bowels of the ferry.
It seems to keep getting larger until they find themselves in an
ancient dusty room full of obsolete computers noisily chugging
away. A sign says: HALL OF RECORDS.

INT. HALL OF RECORDS (MUSTY)

They’re sitting at a long table with a line of computers. Meg reading
through a long list of names. She comes to the name ‘O’John’.

MEG
You were at the towers.

O’JOHN
A lot of people were.

MEG
It says you’re dead.

O’JOHN
They exaggerate. Let’s get out of here.

MEG
It’s not a common name.

She punches the keyboard faster, calling up images of the
dead fireman named O’John. It’s him. She looks up at him
questioningly.

MEG
You’re him. He switched identity with
you. You’re Savage Grace.

O’JOHN
They’re playing with our heads. You know it
isn’t true. They’ve been fucking with the data.

MEG
You said you killed them all.

O’JOHN
Not before they did this. It’s a false trail.
We have to try something else. Let’s go.

MEG
What if it’s true?

O’JOHN
Then you found him and we can go home.

MEG
Oedipus, schmedipus, so long as
he loves his mother.

Reluctantly she follows him out.

They walk downstairs and come to a floor with a long hall and many
doors. At the end of the hall is A CREATURE, A VERY TALL HUNCH
BACK. Without the hunch, He’d be at least 8 ft. tall. He has a huge
long face and his posture, bent over and looming forward, makes it
look even bigger.

His head is twisted to one side and he is drooling, eyes wide and
burning. He is gesturing frantically, pointing to a side door and
pantomiming holding something in his hands.
 

MEG
When we came in, we walked up one flight.
We have now walked down one flight and
we should be on the street.

O’JOHN
I know.

MEG
(majestically calm)
We are not and that creature at
the end of the hall is beckoning
to us. He seems to know you.
What is he trying to say?

O’JOHN
He's saying that he has what we're looking for.
Hang on to my hand very tight. We are going
to walk down the stairs.

They walk down another flight of stairs, holding hands very tightly.
But the next floor down is the same floor with the same creature
at the end of the hall, gesturing and shouting in his private language.

MEG
I begin to sense a trend.

O’JOHN
Nothing slows you down, does it? You’ll
sit up in your coffin to make one more
smart ass remark.

MEG
I’m standing up in my coffin right now.

They stare over the banister and see an unlimited number of
floors below them, each identical to the one they're on, each
with an identical gibbering creature at the end of the hall.

O’JOHN
I think that means we might as well
see what he wants to show us.

They walk down the hall and follow the creature through a door
and into what should have been an apartment. It’s a long narrow
railroad flat, but there isn't any furniture, just ceramic figures on
shelves from floor to ceiling. There are plaster statues of the
Virgin and of Spiderman.

There are Louis XIV and Hummel figurines and every other kind of
ceramic statuette. The creature keeps beckoning them farther in.
The walls have floor to ceiling shelves of statuettes. At this point,
the figurines begin to move, very slightly and with tiny intermittent jerks
like a fly in a glue pot. There is the sound of a bell or something like it.

As they go deeper into the apartment, the figures keep getting larger.
They’re the size of department store mannequins, the lingerie models
of his dreams and they’re moving, then larger than life: 7 ft. tall

Something is jingling in the rapid complex rhythms of African
drumming. The figurines are moving with increasing confidence
and the bell-like music is getting louder.

The room has narrowed like the prow of a boat and the walls
converge on a towering Egyptian mummy case. The creature
opens the door. Inside is a skeleton fireman’s uniform. The
name tag says “O’JOHN”

VITO (V.O.)
Never lost a bail jumper yet.

They turn to see Vito come up behind them. The music is in
time to the jingling of the handcuffs he carries. Meg begins to
cry loudly, sobbing and sniffling. It should be clear that Vito is
THE DEVIL, maybe, just a flickering red corona like the sun
in eclipse

MEG
No horns?

VITO
No, no horns. That’s the Babylonian
yellow journalism.

MEG
But the Devil is supposed to be beautiful,
clever, agile and you’re…

She gets slapped. Vito laughs.

VITO
As I was saying: The problem was…the
contract was due, but I couldn’t collect.
You lost your memory.

You were the metaphysical equivalent
of not competent to stand trial.

MEG
I want my lawyer present.

She gets slapped again. Now her nose is bleeding.

VITO
Your lawyer is present. I had to trick you
into finding out who you are and what
you’d done so I can collect.

O’JOHN
What happens now?

VITO
Nothing happens now. This is it.

In the middle of blubbering, Meg sneezes noisily.

O’JOHN
(absently)
God bless you.

Vito’s face contorts in absolute horror. All the figurines leap off the
shelves and run for it. The flat has turned into a telescoping tunnel
with a nasty red glow at the end.

Vito is shrinking and turning bright vermilion. Now he’s the size of
a rat and he scampers off after the galloping figurines.

The red glow goes out. The flat is completely empty and an
accelerated dawn is coming in the windows.

FREEZE FRAME

 

 

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