Savage Grace (2)
Angel Obregon

 

And there she was, standing in the moonlight
like a gravy spot in a lace doily.

START MOTION

BLACK GIRL
Black turn you off?

SAVAGE GRACE
At least you’re coal black so you know who you
are; the light skinned ones are all crazy.

BLACK GIRL
I see that I am dealing with a man of taste.
(He has to laugh at that) Quite a performance.

SAVAGE GRACE
I cant get it into my hands.

BLACK GIRL
You express yourself very well with your hands.

SAVAGE GRACE
My feelings, they’re always doing something else.

BLACK GIRL
What feelings?

SAVAGE GRACE
How about fear?

BLACK GIRL
False limb sensations, like an amputee feeling
an itch in the foot they cut off. You express
everything you feel, but you don’t feel anything
at all.

SAVAGE GRACE
You’re losing your accent

BLACK GIRL
I know. I try to keep it up. It helps establish trust.

SAVAGE GRACE
What are you selling?

BLACK GIRL
Feelings.

She opens her hand. Inside is a thing that looks like a white butterfly
seen in multiple exposure. It’s impossible to see clearly.

SAVAGE GRACE
What the fuck is that?

BLACK GIRL
A soul. That’s what you’re missing.
you don’t have a soul.

SAVAGE GRACE
What’s the catch?
.
BLACK GIRL
Isn’t it obvious, if you have a soul, you can lose it.

SAVAGE GRACE
Where do I sign?

BLACK GIRL
That wont be necessary.

She slips the butterfly inside his shirt and presses it to his heart.

He picks up his guitar and walks back on stage. Suddenly he’s playing
better, much better, incredibly better. The rest of the group is too, just
trying to keep up. They’re flying and the crowd is in rapture.

INT. EVIL JOHN’S APT.

O’JOHN
Hey, Evil John!

But Evil John has managed to hang himself. His toes point straight
down. The Rottweillers are at the base of the tree, jaws on their paws
and whining worriedly. O’John finds a black felt tipped pen. He walks
to the group portrait and inks a large X across the image of Evil John
and wrote the date beneath it.

He picks up a phone book and looks for Thomas Rozzo. There are 15.
He slams the book shut. He opens it again. There are still 15, but only
one Thomas J. The book flutters closed.

INT. LAW OFFICE (DAY)

POV goes through an opening door that has Thomas J. Rozzo, esq.
on a brass plate. Rozzo is leading O’John to a rear office. Rozzo
is squat and thick. He has a towering hairdo that makes him look
like a dwarf.

ROZZO
So, it turned out there was still time to go
back to law school.

O’JOHN
Better?

ROZZO
It’s a trap like everything else. So...?

O’JOHN
Savage Grace.

ROZZO
Yeah, he was good, the best, that part’s true.
Goddamn that man could play.

O’JOHN
I’ll get a CD.

ROZZO
No, that’s the thing, you couldn’t can it, he came
across live, but on disk he was just one more
screamer. Like Coltrane. The passion was real,
but musically it was trivial.

O’JOHN
Savage Grace.

ROZZO
Yeah. I wish you could have heard him live.

O’JOHN
I might yet. He’s not dead.

ROZZO
They say that about everyone.

O’JOHN
In this case, it’s true. He’s alive.

ROZZO
That sucks.

O’JOHN
Seems to be the general opinion. I don’t
know why. I thought you made allowances
for things like talent.

ROZZO
You been talking to Evil John, that asshole.
He loves everyone, a real degenerate. NO.
If Graham is alive, I haven’t seen him. If I
did see him, I wouldn’t see him. It’s been
great talking to you, goodbye!

O’JOHN
I don’t understand.

ROZZO
Why should you? Look, I’ve got a client waiting.

O’JOHN
You know a red headed woman named Azriel?

ROZZO
There’s no need for threats. I’m cooperating
fully, but think for a minute.

He disappears and wants everyone to think
he’s dead. Contacting the people he used to
know would be the stupidest thing he could do.

O’JOHN
That’s right, but they all do it.

Rozzo shrugs helplessly.

ROZZO
He had a kid sister a lot smarter than he
was. She wouldn’t take any of his money,
if you’ll believe that. Her name is Meg.

She has a boutique, she had it, I think she
still does, a sex shop called The Triumph of
Aphrodite, Chelsea, 9th Avenue around 38.

O’JOHN
That’s Hell’s Kitchen.

ROZZO
It’s the flower market; they’re open all night.

O’John turns to go.

O’JOHN
But why run? Why fake being dead?

ROZZO
He was into some weird shit toward the end.

O’JOHN
Like what?

ROZZO
Like I expect you’ll find out.

O’JOHN
Straight answer.

ROZZO
The record company tried to talk him into
committing suicide to boost the sales of
his last CD.

O’JOHN
I don’t believe it. No, I believe it.

ROZZO
He wouldn’t so, the producer kept trying to
kill us. There was a bomb on the plane like
with Leonard Skynnerd, things like that.

O’JOHN
Why didn’t you kill him?

ROZZO
We did and then no record company would
touch us. It was time to quit.

O’John gets up, nods vaguely and walks off.

EXT. STREET (DEEP NIGHT)

The Triumph of Aphrodite: Aphrodisiacs is between 2 wholesale florists.
There’s a tall girl of 19 at the back counter. She has a round cheeked
cheer leader’s face. She looks like she bakes good apple pie.

O’JOHN (V.O.)
I found it on 9th Avenue between 2 wholesale
florists. A lot of the stores had their lights on
and their doors open, but the street looked empty.
(He checks his watch) It was 11:30, about 3
hours before the retail florists began showing up
to buy their flowers for the day.

There was nothing else to do so, I went in.

He walks in.
MEG
Excuse me, but you don’t look like
you need an aphrodisiac.

O’JOHN
I need all the help I can get.

MEG
Then you don’t like what you’re getting or you
lost your confidence. You wont find it here.

O’JOHN
I thought you were supposed to try to sell
this stuff?

MEG
I do, usually, but you’re a cop.

O’JOHN
No, I just keep my face blank with people I don’t
know. It avoids a lot of trouble in this city.

MEG
It avoids everything.

O’JOHN
Do I interest you or are you just practicing?

MEG
Do you care, Mr…?

O’JOHN
O’John. I was looking for the owner and you’re
too young to be her.

MEG
No I’m not.

O’JOHN
Excuse me.

MEG
Does that mean you did a bad thing and
didn’t mean it or you did a good thing and
I don’t know it?

O’JOHN
Why do you play these dumb games?

MEG
I guess I’m bored and you’re not helping much.

O’JOHN
I’d like to see you again.

MEG
Zowie!, Pow!, Zippo Bam! … At least you don’t
want to be mothered. The men who com in here.
…You remind me of my father, vaguely.

O’JOHN
That would explain it, but why make it so
complicated?

MEG
It’s not complicated, but you keep changing
the subject.

O’JOHN
I’m looking for Savage Grace.

MEG
See, that’s what I mean.

He takes 3 slow breaths.

O’JOHN
Let’s solve our problems one at a time. Your
brother isn’t dead. I know they always say that
about a rock star: it was a publicity stunt or the
only way he could escape the trap.

This time it’s true. Have you seen him?

MEG
Only in my dreams

O’JOHN
There’s a lot of it going around. There’s a woman
named Azriel looking for him.

She ducks behind the counter and comes up with a pump shotgun.
She lays it across the counter pointed at his stomach.

O’JOHN (continuing)
I changed my mind, I want to be mothered.

MEG
Get out.

O’JOHN
Who’s Azriel?

It’s clear that he doesn’t know.

MEG
That’s the name of the angel of death.
Look it up!

EXT. STREET (NIGHT)

He walks out and diagonally across the street and lounges in a
darkened doorway.

O’JOHN (V.O.)
I didn’t have long to wait. She talked frantically
on the phone and closed the shop with in 10
minutes.

She strides away up 9th into Hell’s Kitchen. He catches up to her.

O’JOHN
Can we talk?

MEG
Why do you want to kill my brother?

O’JOHN
Have you stopped beating your wife?

MEG
Which one?

O’JOHN
Right.

MEG
Make a choice: Which of us do you want,
him or me?

O’JOHN
I have to choose right now?

MEG
Or I choose for you.

O’JOHN
I choose you.

They pass an over-lit boutique. She points to a dress.

MEG
What do you think?

O’JOHN
It sets off your hair, but the color is a bit piercing.

MEG
That’s why I like to go shopping with a man.
(PAUSE)
Anyway, you couldn’t find him after all this time.

O’JOHN
Only if he wants to be found.

MEG
Strange thing to say.

They had pass Lincoln Center and are approaching the fierce
looking slums behind it. 3 3RD WORLD MUGGERS appear out
of an alley and close in on them, eyes half closed, mouths half open.

He puts his hand on his piece and smiles at them. They keep coming.
Meg starts to squeak and hangs on his right arm. He throws her off.

O’JOHN
Not on the gun arm.

and passes her around to his left. He has his gun out.
The 3 muggers do a 270 degree turn like it was close
order drill and saunter off.

MEG
Yes, there is something to be said for
having a man around.

INT. MEG’S APARTMENT (VINTAGE BOHEMIAN)

Meg’s cat takes one look at him and runs for it. No chairs, lot of
cushions. He’s sitting on the floor. She’s in the kitchen brewing
an enormous pot of powerful black tea. She pours him some
and fills the rest of the cup with cheap brandy.

MEG
Why didn’t you kill them, you had a perfect excuse.

O’JOHN
It wasn’t necessary.

MEG
I would have thought you like that sort of thing.

O’JOHN
It’s like any other kind of solitaire, you have to
play the game by the rules or it takes all the
fun out of it.

MEG
You’re quoting. Educated men use quotes
the way ignorant men use clichés, when they’re
afraid of the experience they’re having
and trying to get some distance from it.

O’JOHN
Hey, give it a rest, I’ve had a long day.
What am I doing here?

MEG
I’ve been wondering that myself.

and she sits down on the floor beside him. She puts her hands on his
thighs and eases his knees apart. He doesn’t react.

Are you afraid of me?

O’JOHN
I’m not that smart.

MEG
Let’s start with a back rub.

She turns him on his stomach and climbs on his back.

O’JOHN (V.O.)
She was good at it. It took a strangely
Long time to realize I’d been drugged.
Hog tranquillizer because the visions
were alive and powerful

EXT. STAGE OF A ROCK CONCERT (NIGHT)

The group Savage Grace is on stage and things are going badly. The
crowd decides to make their own excitement by rushing the stage. At
1st, it’s 1 or 2 at a time and security is beating them back with pool cues.
Then it’s 3 and 4 and 5 in a rush and it turns into a war.

Savage Grace smashes his guitar and the musicians retreat back
stage. Savage Grace takes another guitar off a rack.

O’JOHN (V.O.)
Apparently he used them up like Kleenex.

EXT. BACKSTAGE (NIGHT)

SAVAGE GRACE
I lost it.

EVIL JOHN
You never had it, so lie about it. We can get
killed out there, you know. It’s not impossible,
it has happened. Focus!

Evil John walks back on stage with the rest of the group, leaving him
alone. They begin to play some driving death rock that cools out the
crowd. Gen is there looking even more worried than usual. She starts
to speak to him then changes her mind. He doesn’t notice.

The BLACK GIRL appears out of nowhere and walks up to him.
This time Gen doesn’t walk away. She stands there trembling.

BLACK GIRL
Quite a performance.

SAVAGE GRACE
Sold my soul to break my heart.

BLACK GIRL
That isn’t what happened. More like the
Little Mermaid, don’t you think?

He has to laugh at that.

SAVAGE GRACE
I’m convinced. I want it back.

BLACK GIRL
There’s a price this time.

SAVAGE GRACE
I’ll give anything,

Something white flutters in her hand, something like a white butterfly.

BLACK GIRL
Anything? That’s quite an offer.

SAVAGE GRACE
Forget it.

BLACK GIRL
They’re waiting for you on stage.

The noise doubles. The crowd is getting meaner, it sounds like a prison riot.

SAVAGE GRACE
Alright. All Right ALL RIGHT!

He grabs the white butterfly out of her hand and runs for it.
The Black girl just stands there, receding fast without walking.
Gen looks disgusted and strides off. Something invisible
reaches out of a full length mirror and drag her through with
a yelp. Very suddenly she’s gone. He doesn’t notice.

He picks up his guitar and walks back on stage. Suddenly they’re
in synch and the crowd is in rapture.

EXT. STREET OUTSIDE MEG’S APT. HOUSE (FALSE DAWN)

Rozzo and ANOTHER FREAK are carrying O’John out of the building.
He’s semi-conscious, but unable to move. They’re holding him up and
pretending he’s drunk.

ROZZO
Come on, Manny, don’t act that way. People
are watching.

Meg comes running down the stairs.

MEG
No, this has gone far enough! This isn’t what
I agreed to. Stop it!

They ignore her then Vito comes out from behind a car with an army
.45 that rattles as he walks and Meg fades into the shadows.

VITO
Dishway, Black Powah, we got an IQ test
design for YOU.

FREEZE FRAME

O’JOHN (V.O.)
Which is kind of inappropriate since the clowns
carrying me are both fish-belly white, but maybe
that was the intention.

They had to stop to think about it and by that time
it was over. It usually is.

START MOTION

Rozzo & Co. put O’John in Vito’s car. Vito takes their watches and
money and shoes.

VITO
Drop the knife!

Rozzo & Co. look at each other. Neither of them has a knife. Belatedly
they realize the Vito is preparing to shoot them and they take off
running, bouncing off each other as they stumble around the corner.

Vito laughs, gets in the car and drives.

INT. CAGE ELEVATOR

O’John sees it upside down. Vito has him over his shoulder, holding
him around the knees. The elevator operator giggles and nods approval,
giving Vito the Black Power salute.

INT. VITO’S OFFICE (DAY)

When O’John wakes up. Vito is completing a bail bond contract with
an elegantly dressed BLACK COUPLE. Vito and the Black man smile
at each other conspiratorially.

BLACK MAN
Well, I like to do business with one bondsman.

BLACK WOMAN
Wait!, did you say you were going to need a
bondsman again?

They exit arguing. As soon as they’re gone and the door safely closed,
Vito pulls a .25 automatic out of his watch pocket and blazes away.

VITO
Now, you little bastard, I’ve been after you
for weeks!

O’John opens his eyes. Vito fires again. O’John sits up groggily, but
Vito is leaping around the room banging away. Vito bends over behind
the desk with the .25 in his teeth and holding an apparently dead rat by
the tail.

He sees that O’John is awake. He tucks the rat under his arm, the tail
hanging down his sleeve, and pours a cup of coffee. He holds it out to
O’John. He takes it. He tastes it. He pours it out on the floor.

O’JOHN
Azriel is the client you sent me.

VITO
You just figured that out?

He drops the rat in the wastebasket and turns away. The rat peeps
out to check that the coast is clear then runs for it.

O’JOHN
It’s too late now. He’s skipped, the sister
skipped. It’s over.

VITO
Run? from YOU? She’s probably at home
wondering why you don’t call.

The O’John sees the bail jumper girl he caught 2 days before. She’s
sitting in a straight backed chair with one wrist handcuffed to the door
knob of the closet. She’s been beaten. One half of her face is swollen
and discolored and she looks like a battered child. Vito is still talking.

He didn’t run either. He’s got a pattern going,
if he breaks the pattern, he’s naked. Nobody
skipped.

O’JOHN
She’s still here? Why don’t you turn her in?

VITO
What’s the rush? the hearing’s not for 3 days.

GIRL
Stop staring at me!

She claps her hand over the disfigured half of her face. O’John looks away.

O’JOHN
All this and she’s worried about how she looks.

VITO
Yeah, women, God bless ‘em.

O’JOHN
Let her go.

VITO
One musical comedy stunt and you think
suddenly you’re a nice guy?

O’JOHN
Let her go.

VITO
Hey, old buddy, why don’t you grab the girl
and shoot your way out.? Pull out your gun,
wave it around. Let’s see who’s got the
stronger magic. I guess you found out.

O’JOHN
Tell Azriel I quit.

VITO
Savage Grace said that too.

O’JOHN
One question. Why me?

VITO
A popular question.

O’JOHN
You want to lose an eye?

VITO
You’re here and you’re expendable.

O’JOHN
Then why save my life?

VITO
You’re a weak man. You like being told what
to do and that’s kind of lovable. (He makes
loud kissing noises) Now, fuck off.

O’John walks out, slamming the door hard enough to give the
frosted glass a new set of cracks.

VITO (V.O.)
The simple pleasures of the poor.

INT. CAGE ELEVATOR (SPOOKY AS SHIT)

ELEVATOR MAN
Don’t say it.

O/John nods solemnly

INT. ROZZO’S APT. (DARK)

The phone is ringing. Rozzo comes in the front door and
rushes to the phone in the darkness.

ROZZO
Hello…Why didn’t you check that you were
being followed…Oh, that makes a difference…
Yeah, I’m leaving tonight… No, I got an angle,
I can head him off of he shows up…I’ll watch
out, thank you for nothing.

He hangs up. O’John comes out and hits him in the kidneys
with a pistol butt.

What are you doing?

O’JOHN
Renegotiating the relationship.

He whacks Rozzo in the shins with the gun butt and Rozzo sits
down heavily. O’John kicks him in the stomach and Rozzo falls
over gasping for breath.

O’JOHN (continuing)
Tell me about it.

Then he sees an invitation next to the phone. It appears to be in Latin,
written in an angular medieval hand. He pockets it; Rozzo sees him do it.

ROZZO
The phone. That was him. Savage Grace.
He wants to talk to you about it.

O’JOHN
Why didn’t you say so before?

ROZZO
You didn’t give me a chance. Be on the
11:55 copter to Kennedy. From the 63rd
Street heliport.

O’JOHN
Sure, Baby, of course I will. Tell him I’ll be
sucking on a bread stick with a bullseye
pasted to my forehead.

He kicks Rozzo once more and then he leaves.

INT. WORKING CLASS BAR (NIGHT)

Cab drivers, hookers and small insular group of lab technicians wearing
white lab coats. O’John sits down next to one of them, a middle aged
black man with the air of a preacher. His name is HENRY.

HENRY
Where you been, Man? Good to see you.

O’JOHN
Henry, you studied Latin?

HENRY
Of course I studied Latin. I studied in a
Catholic school in the Islands where, if you
were called up on and did not know your
lesson, you received a concussion. Omnia
Gallia en tres partes divertes est…

O’John hands him the invitation.

It’s medieval writing, Man. The way they wrote
before the cursive script was introduced in the
16th century.

O’JOHN
Henry, what does it say?

HENRY

 

 

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