The Verification (3)
Stanley Heisler

 



      	Good, I'll pick you up.   
         
      BLACK   
         
      Loud raucous music and loud CHEERS are HEARD.   
         
      FADE IN   
         
      EXT/INT KITTEN CLUB - NIGHT   
         
      Bright blinking neon lights illuminate the club.   
         
      An endless row of incoming cars are being parked by valets.   
         
      Young and older men pack the club, their faces alight with excitement,
                        as they gaze at    
         
      Young women with only G strings, performing their bumps    
      and grinds around long silver poles.     
      After several beats, the performance ends.
                        There is a round of cheers and applause.
                        The dancers take their bows in front of the stage.   
         
      Howard and Alan sit at a corner table.     
           
      				HOWARD   
      	Do you want to pay your respects?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	No thanks.   
         
      In front of the stage a line of men wait their turn to    
      insert their bills into the dancers G strings.  The      
      dancers then walk off the stage.    
         
      				ALAN   
      	Are we leaving now?   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Relax, the best is yet to come.   
         
      Alan shakes his head in resignation.   
         
      There is a loud drum roll with a trumpet fanfare.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Get a load of the next act.   
         
      The curtain opens.  Standing on stage is POLLY, a young,    
      attractive, curvaceous woman with long black hair.  She    
      wears  a long tight gown.  The music begins.  She sways    
      with the music, as she starts to shed parts of her gown,     
      until she is left with only her G string.  She is a symphony    
      of legs and curves.   
          
      The audience HOWL with animal lust.   
         
      Polly wraps herself around a pole, gyrating her body in    
      various exotic positions, coupled with bumps and grinds.   
         
      The audience CHEER and APPLAUD.   
         
      After several beats, the performance ends.     
         
      Polly takes her bows and accepts the bills that are    
      inserted in her G string with a sparkling smile.     
         
      Howard walks up to Polly.  He points to the table where Alan    
      sits.  Polly nods her head in agreement  The music ends.    
         
      The musicians leave the bandstand.   
         
      Howard returns to his table.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	So how'd you like the show?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	The last dancer was very professional.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	That's Polly, She's a college student.      
      	She'll be joining us soon.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	It's getting late.  I'll take a taxi.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Don't be a wet blanket.  Stay. You might   
      	enjoy yourself.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	All right, just for a while.     
         
      After a beat, the musicians return and start to play.    
         
      Several more dancers appear on the stage.  They dance with   
      bored abandonment.   
         
      Polly approaches Alan's table.  She is dressed in a simple     
      skirt and blouse.   
         
      Howard and Alan get up from their seats.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      			(to Polly)   
      	This is Alan.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	How do you do?  Howard talks about you.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	It's nice meeting you.   
         
      They all sit down.   
         
      Polly runs her fingers through her long hair, which make    
      it billow outward and fall on her shoulders   
         
      				POLLY   
      	You've never been here before.  Have you?   
      				ALAN   
      	I haven't   
         
      				POLLY   
      	I would have noticed if you were.   
      				HOWARD   
      	Alan usually stays home.   
      	   
      				POLLY   
      	What do you do at home?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	I read books.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Books can take you to far away places.   
         
      A waitress dressed in a skimpy costume approaches.     
      She chews gum energetically.     
         
      				WAITRESS		   
      	What'll it be?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	The usual.   
         
      				WAITRESS   
      	One champagne cocktail.  And how about		   
      	you guys?   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	We're all right for now.   
         
      The waitress ambles away, her hips swaying with the beat   
      of the music.				   
         
      				ALAN   
      	Howard tells me that you're going   
      	to college while you're working here.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Dancing pays for my tuition.      
         
      				HOWARD   
      	She's burning candles at both ends.   
      				   
      				ALICE   
      	Howard wants me to give up my job here   
      	and move in with him.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	What are you studying?   
      				   
      				POLLY   
      	I'm interested in the field of human genetics.   
      	I'm a Pre med. student.   
      	   
      				HOWARD   
      	Polly's very independent and doesn't want 			   
      				HOWARD (cont'd)   
      	any help from anyone.   
      				   
      				POLLY   
      		(to Howard)   
      	I like your friend.   
         
      The waitress arrives, serves Polly her drink and leaves.
                        Polly lifts her glass.   
      				   
      				POLLY   
      	Here's to the human species.   
         
      Alan and Howard lift up their glasses and drink.   
         
      Polly stares at Alan searchingly.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Tonight could be the beginning.   
         
      				ALAN   
      			(confused)   
      	The beginning?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	A bud blossoming into a beautiful   
      	flower.   
         
      After several beats, the dancers finish their performance.    
      They start to mingle with the patrons.  The music is soft    
      and slow.  Several couples dance on the dance floor and on    
      the stage.   
          
      				POLLY   
      			(to Alan)   
      	Let's dance.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	How about Howard?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Howard doesn't dance.   
         
      Alan stares at Howard.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Go ahead.  Enjoy yourself.   
         
      Polly grabs Alan's hand and they walk to the dance floor.   
      Alan and Polly start to dance, their bodies closely    
      entwined.  Polly smiles at Alan who is a bit ill at ease.    
         
      				POLLY   
      	What do you think of me?   
      				ALAN   
      	You seem to know where you're going.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Is that all?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	I'm not here to pass judgment on you.   
         
      Polly suddenly kisses him hard on the lips.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	The next time we meet, you'll know more.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	I'm involved with someone.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	You're not married and neither am I.     
      	   
      Alan shakes his head.  The music ends.  Alan and Polly    
      return to the table.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Let's have another round.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	I have an early class tomorrow morning.     
         
      Howard beckons the waitress, who hands him a check.   
      Alan starts to take out some bills from his pocket.  The    
      jade amulet drops out of his pocket and onto the floor.     
      Radiant, blazing, multicolor lights glow from the amulet.     
         
      Polly's eyes light up, as she stares at the amulet.  Alan    
      retrieves the amulet and places it back in his pocket.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Put away your money.  I've got it.   
         
      Alan puts the bills back in his pocket.  Howard looks at the    
      check and drops some bills on the table.   
         
      They start to exit the club.   
      				   
      				POLLY   
      	That jade that came out of your pocket.     
      	What is it?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	It's a good luck charm.   
      		   
      				POLLY   
      	Where did you get it?   
      				ALAN   
      	From a close friend.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	How much do you want for it?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	Why would you want to buy it?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	I could use some luck.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	It's not for sale.   
         
      Howard gives the valet his car check.   
         
      LATER    
         
      INT. ALAN'S APARTMENT - BATHROOM - NIGHT   
         
      Alan, dressed in a bathrobe, brushes his teeth.  The bell   
      rings.  Alan quickly rinses his mouth.  He moves to the   
      door and opens it.  Standing at the door is Polly.     
         
      				ALAN   
      	What are you doing here?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Can I come in?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	Sure.   
         
      Polly enters the apartment.  		   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Would you have a drink?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	Some whiskey?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Thanks.  I could use some.   
         
      Alan walks into the kitchen, while Polly sits on a couch.   
      Within minutes, Alan returns with a bottle of scotch and a    
      glass.  He starts to pour whiskey in a glass.   
         
      				ALAN   
      			Tell me when.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	That's fine.   
      He hands Polly the glass.  She gulps it down quickly.   
         
      				POLLY   
      `	I apologize for barging in on you like this.   
      	   
      				ALAN   
      	Does Howard know that you're here?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	Howard is just a friend and nothing more.   
      	   
      				ALAN   
      	Why are you here?   
         
      				POLLY   
      	You know why.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	The jade?    
         
      Polly moves close to Alan.  She presses her body close to    
      his.  She kisses him long and hard.  He pushes her away.   
         
      				POLLY   
      	I would do just about anything to have    
      	the jade.     
         
      				ALAN   
      	You made an unnecessary trip.  It's not    
      	for sale at any price.   
       		    
      				POLLY   
      	I could do a lot for you.  If it's not money   
      	you want, I can give you wondrous things you've    
      	never dreamed of.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	I made a promise that I must keep.   
      	   
      				POLLY   
      	Can I see the jade?   
         
      				ALAN   
      	It's late.  I think you should leave.   
      \  			   
      				POLLY   
      	Just let me see it, then I'll leave.   
         
      Alan leaves the room,  Within minutes, he returns with the    
      amulet.  Multi color lights radiate from the amulet.     
         
      Polly's eyes glisten with hungry excitement, as she grabs the    
      jade.  She screams and drops the amulet.
                        Her palm smokes with burning flesh.   
      Alan picks up the jade from the floor.     
         
      Polly still screaming, dashes out of the apartment.			   
         
      EXT. POLICE STATION   
         
      JIM, a husky FBI man sits with Casey and Barbara in a room.    
      				   
      				CASEY   
      	Several calls were made between you and   
      	Ben Gold from the Braddock motel.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	I've already told you that Mr. Gold was   
      	hired by my father to find my husband.   
         
      				CASEY   
      	On the last call you made to him, what    
      	was the conversation about?   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	He had found my husband and that he was   
      	going to see me the next day.   
         
      				JIM   
      	Why did you hire a private detective?   
         
      				BARBARA   
      		(glaring at Casey)   
      	Because our police are too busy to spend   
      	time on these small cases.   
         
      				CASEY   
      	This isn't a small case anymore.   
         
      Jim takes out a photo from a folder.  He shows it to    
      Barbara.   
         
      INSERT     
      				   
      				JIM   
      	Is this your husband?   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Yes, but what is he doing there?   
         
      				JIM   
      	That's what we'd like to know.   
         
      				JIM   
      	The motel's security system photographs	 	   
      	all incoming and outgoing cars from the    
      	motel.  This photo was taken on the night    
      	that Ben Gold was murdered.   
         
      END INSERT   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Are you suggesting that my husband killed   
      	Mr. Gold?   
         
      				JIM   
      	It's possible.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	My husband wouldn't hurt a fly.   
         
      				CASEY   
      	Thank you for coming.  If he should contact    
      	you, call us.   
         
      Barbara exits the room.   
         
         
      EXT/INT. APARTMENT - WASHINGTON- DAY   
         
      Jim knocks on the apartment door.     
         
      				MORTON (O.S.)			   
      	Who's there?   
         
      	`			JIM   
      	Jim,   
         
      The door unlocks and opens.  MORTON SMALL, appears.  He is    
      in his mid-fifties and wears thick eyeglasses.   
         
      				MORTON   
      	Jim!  It's good to see you.  Come in.   
         
      Morton escorts Jim to the parlor.   
         
      				MORTON   
      	Can I get you a drink?   
         
      				JIM   
      	No thanks.  How's Helga?   
         
      				MORTON   
      	She left the hospital a few days ago.   
      	They didn't operate.   
         
      				JIM   
      	There's no hope?   
         
      				MORTON   
      	None at all.				   
         
      			     JIM   
      	Does she know?   
         
      				MORTON   
      	I think she does.   
         
      				JIM   
      	Helga was such a hell raiser.  It's   
      	hard to think of her this way. 			   
      	   
      A door is heard opening.  HELGA SMALL. A thin frail looking    
      woman appears.   
         
      Jim embraces Helga and kisses her on the cheek.   
         
      				HELGA   
      	So how's the bachelor?   
         
      				JIM   
      	My status hasn't changed since you   
      	refused to marry me.   
         
      Helga wearily sits on the couch.   
      				   
      				MORTON   
      		(at Helga)   
      	A drink?   
         
      				HELGA   
      	Some tea for all of us.   
         
      Morton exits the parlor.   
         
      				HELGA   
      	So how are things at the FBI?   
         
      				JIM   
      	It's bigger and busier.   
         
      				HELGA   
      	Don't waste your life.  Find a nice   
      	woman for yourself.    
         
      				JIM   
      	How are you doing Helga?   
         
      				HELGA   
      	There's a very sweet girl working in   
      	Morton's lab.  You'd like her.   
         
      Morton returns with a tray of tea and cookies.   
         
      				MORTON   
      	Here we are.     
      Morton pours the tea,  They drink tea and eats cookies.   
      				   
      				MORTON   
      	It's a treat having you here, even   
      	if it's only for a short visit.  You    
      	bring back good memories.    
      	   
      				JIM   
      	I wish we did have more time together.   
         
      After a beat, Helga gets up.  She embraces Jim.   
         
      				HELGA   
      	It was good seeing you Jim. Remember   
      	what I told you.   
         
      Helga leaves the room.   
      				    
      Morton and Jim exchange doleful looks.   
         
      					   
      INT. TAYLOR'S HOUSE = FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT   
         
      Barbara knits a sweater.  Leah and Tommy work on a    
      crossword puzzle.  Radio music is played.   
         
      THE DOORBELL rings.  Barbara turns off the radio and moves    
      to the door.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Who's there?   
         
      				ALAN (O.S.)   
      	It's Alan.   
         
      Barbara whips the door open.   
         
      Alan's duplicate stands at the door.  He is immaculately dressed    
      in a high fashion designer suit.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Heavens! Alan!  I'd just about given up   
      	hope   
         
      Alan's duplicate kisses her.   
         
      The children walk slowly up to Alan.  They stand off at a    
      distance.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Aren't you going to give your Daddy a hug?   
         
      The children begrudgingly give him a hug.   
         
      Stella, the dog sniffs him and moves away.   
      				   
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE   
      		(sitting on couch)   
      	It's so good to be home.   
         
      Barbara sits close to him.  She holds his hand.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	You look different.   
         
      				ALAN DUPLICATE   
      	How?   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	You never dressed like this before.   
      	Where have you been?  We've been    
      	worried sick over you.   
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE    
      	You won't have to worry anymore.   
           
      LATER   
         
      INT/EXT. HOUSE -BREAKFAST ROOM - DAY   
         
      Barbara and the children are finishing breakfast.  She    
      feeds Stella and hurriedly drinks a cup of black coffee.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Come on children.  Get your things together    
      	and let's go.   
         
      They gather their bags and exit the house.    
         
      They get into the car and drive off.   
         
         
      INT. CAR   
         
      				LEAH   
      	Where's Dad?   
         
         
      				BARBARA   
      	He had to go into town early this morning   
      	on some business.  He'll be back tonight.   
         
      				LEAH   
      	Tommy and I don't like him anymore.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Why do you say that?   
      				   
      				TOMMY   
      	He doesn't play with us anymore.	   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	He's been very busy.   
         
      				LEAH   
      	He doesn't love us.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	I'll talk to him.  I'll make sure that   
      	he spends more time with us.   
         
         
      EXT. PARK - DAY   
         
      Couples in casual dress walk through the park.   
         
      In a band shell, a concert band plays a Sousa march.   
         
      People sit on the grass, listening to the music.  Barbara,   
      Alan's duplicate and the children are sprawled out on a blanket.
                        The   music ends and the audience applauds.     
         
      Barbara and Alan's duplicate fold the blanket.
                        They and the children walk away from the area.
                        They come to a line of swings.
                        Leah and Tommy get on the swings and swing energetically.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	I'm glad you're spending more time with   
      	the children.  I hope there'll be more   
      	days like this    
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE   
      	I'm leaving for Washington on a business    
      	trip tomorrow.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	When will you be back?   
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE   
      	When my business is finished.   
         
      Barbara's face flushes with anger.   
         
      The clouds suddenly darken.  Thunder and lightning splits    
      the sky, as torrents of rain pummel the park.   
         
      Barbara, the family and people rush to the exit of the park.   
         
         
      EXT. SEAPORT - DAY   
         
      The sky is blue with whisps of clouds.   
      Ships enter and leave the seaport.   
         
      George and Barbara walk along the port.   
         
      				GEORGE   
      	Are you happy?   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	I guess I am.   
      		   
      			     GEORGE   
      	You guess?   
         
      		      	BARBARA   
      	He's made a hundred and eighty degree turn in his life and he's    
            everything I ever wanted him to be.   
      	Yet, there's something very strange    
      	about him.      
         
      				GEORGE   
      	What are you saying?   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	The children feel the same way.  Even Stella    
      	treats him like a stranger.   
         
      				GEORGE   
      	He's made a remarkable change.  That's why      
      	he acts differently.  The only thing I    
      	can't figure out is how he got to look so    
      	much younger.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	Have you heard anything about him.   
         
      				GEORGE   
      	I hear he's running for a political   
      	office.   
         
      				BARBARA   
      	He doesn't tell me anything.   
         
      George and Barbara exchange doleful looks.	   
         
         
      INT. FBI OFFICE - DAY   
         
      Jim sits at a desk cluttered with stacks of files.   
      Alan' duplicate, dressed in a designer suit, sits in front of him.
                        He studies a photo.   
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE   
      	That could be me.   
      				JIM   
      	The motel's security systems takes photos   
      	of all incoming and outgoing cars.  And    
      	that's you coming out of the limo.   
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE   
      	It's not a very clear picture.   
         
      				JIM   
      	Were you at the Braddock motel on the night   
      	of the twenty ninth of May?   
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE	   
      	Not that I remember.  Even if I was there, it     
      	doesn't prove that I was involved in a murder.   
          
      				JIM   
      	Thanks for coming in.   
         
      Jim rises from his chair.  Alan's duplicate also rises.    
      their eyes lock on each other.   
         
      				JIM   
      	We'll be in touch with you.   
         
      				ALAN'S DUPLICATE   
      		(a sneer across his lips)   
      	It's reassuring to know that we're in    
      	the protective hands of the government.   
         
      				JIM   
      	Is that so?   
         
      Jim stares at him with unwavering hatred.
      Alan's duplicate leaves.   
         
      Jim picks up a phone and punches a number.   
         
      INTERCUT   
         
      LT. CASEY AT POLICE STATION   
         
      				CASEY   
      	Hi.  What do you have?   
         
      				JIM   
      	I've just interviewed Alan Taylor.   
         
      				CASEY	   
      	So what do you think?   
      	   
      				JIM   
      	Too slick for my taste.  He thinks he   
      	has all the answers.   
      	   
      				CASEY   
      	That doesn't sound like the Alan Taylor    
      	I know.   
         
      				JIM   
      	Shrewd and overconfident.  They always   
      	trip themselves up.  Just wait and see.   
      	What's doing over your neck of the woods?   
      	Anymore leads on the Braddock case?   
         
      				CASEY   
      	There's a few more.   
      			   
      				JIM	   
      	I'll be in your town tomorrow.   
         
      				CASEY   
      	See you then.   
         
      				JIM   
      	Okay.  Keep me posted.   
         
      Jim hangs up.   
         
         
      EXT. COUNTRY ROAD - NIGHT   
         
      The fog is thick.  The rain pounds the road.   
         
      INT/EXT. CAR   
         
      A woman drives a car.  Fear storms her face.     
         
      The windshield wipers are not completely clearing away the    
      rain from the windshield.   
         
      Oncoming car lights are blinding her.  A truck horn blasts    
      its horn, as the woman quickly turns her wheel to avoid    
      crashing into the truck.  The car careens through a winding    
      road.   
         
      The car wheels SCREECH.  The car swerves off the road, flips    
      over like a kicked beer can, rolling, crumpling and crashing    
      into a tree.   
         
      The woman's body is smashed against the windshield.   
         
      The rain splatters over the crushed car.   
         
      LATER   
         
      Two policemen attempt to extricate the woman's body from    
      the car.  They stop and stare at each other, their faces    
      a mixture of horror and disbelief.   
      The woman's eyes are completely cut out.   
         
      Lieutenant Casey appears.   
         
      				FIRST POLICEMAN   
      	Lieutenant, look here.   
         
      Casey looks at the body.   
      	   
      				CASEY   
      	Jesus! Don't move anything until the   
      	examiners come.   
         
      LATER   
         
      T FACE="Courier">INT. ALICE'S HOUSE - NIGHT   
         
      Alice, is dressed in a high fashion designer dress.     
      She feeds Buddy in the kitchen.   
         
      She walks into the parlor and turns on the television.  Her    
      eyes glisten, as she watches a program.   
         
      The doorbell RINGS.  Alice moves to the door and whips it    
      open.   
         
      Alan stands at the door, stunned, as he stares at her.   
         
      Alice kisses him and pulls him into the house.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	You're so beautiful.   
         
      Alan picks her up and twirls her around several times,     
      Buddy leaps up at Alan and attempts to kiss him.  They    
      enter the parlor and sit on the couch.   
         
      				ALICE   
      		(caressing Alan's face)   
      	Your prayers for me were answered.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	I can't get over the change.   
          
      				ALICE   
      	You look exactly as I pictured you.   
         
      				ALAN   
      	We should celebrate.  What would you    
      	like to do?   
         
      				ALICE   
      	I want to see all the beautiful things    
      	of the world     
      				ALAN   
      	We'll see them together.   
         
         
      INT. BOOK STORE NIGHT   
         
      Alan and Howard are in the process of closing the store.   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	Well, have a wonderful vacation.       
         
      				ALAN   
      	I'd like to put something in a safe place   
         
      				HOWARD   
      	You know where.   


 

 

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