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It's about a little girl whose father is fighting over in Iraq. The little girl lives with her grandmother and always looks forward to the letters she gets from her father...But lately she hasnt been getting any letters. [349 words]
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Why Won't You Write Me? Alyssa B
Hey Daddy:
It's me your baby I hope you remember.
Were learning how to write in school,
so that is helping me write to you.
I got something to say and here it is-
I really hope this doesn't hurt you
because I swear this is not my intention but-
you broke my heart and you promised you would come home soon.
But its been three years and I have yet to see your face.
I saw the president talking on the news and he said
God bless our boys in Iraq who died late this afternoon.
When I dont get a letter I sit and wonder was it you who went to heaven the other afternoon.
I pray every night for you to just come home.
You said you wouldn't die and you wouldn't make my cry, but I still wonder why.
Why you aint written me in such a long time.
I'm starting to forget you, I forget your smile and your face.
I forget your laugh and your warm embrace.
I miss you daddy
why wont you write to me?
I miss the way grandma would run in the house with a letter saying this one's from your daddy.
I miss you daddy why wont you write to me?
I cant remember the last time I got one.
I even miss all the jokes you would write at the bottom.
They always made me laugh every time that I was sad.
I miss you daddy I been praying really hard but I dont know what to do.
Grandma said pray to Jesus but he wont answer me.
I guess he hasnt been talking to you.
Grandma said close your eyes and you'll see him in your dreams.
I dont want any of that, I want you to come home and visit me.
I miss you daddy why wont you write to me?
Are you lost in a jungle over there?
Or do you just not care that your hurting me everyday of my life?
I miss you daddy I dont have any tears left to cry.
I dont know what to say or do.
I just miss you daddy and as angry as I am.
I still love you so please come home soon.
Love,
Your baby girl
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"My dad is in Iraq and I tell you me and my sister go through the same thing when we dont get a letter from him for a while we worry like crazy. I just cant wait till he comes home! Dad-I love you and I miss you please come home!" -- Justin, Los Angeles, California, USA.
"I miss my dad...He has been gone for three years he calls alot and writes sometimes but I just want to see him...I love my dad so much he is my hero and I just want him to come home and be with me...Im not selfish I know he is a hero to alot of people and they need him there but its just not the same with out him here...He is so brave and I hope one day I can be just like him...I dont want anything to happen to him there...DADDY PLEASE COME HOME SOON I LOVE YOU!" -- Melanie, Fort Lauderdale, Florida, USA.
"This one brought tears to my eyes because I think about my father and my fiance whom are both over in Iraq. It sometimes hurts when I walk out to the mailbox and dont find a letter but I know they are busy and I know they love me, and I just want them to be safe and come home to me and my mother soon. I love you daddy! I love you Eric!" -- Holly, Orlando , Florida, USA.
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