I fly down from my cloud up in Heaven and sail over a mist-blooming sea. As I float to the ground, you are silently found at a grave and still mourning for me.
In your world, it's been almost a year now, endless time filled with gut-wrenching pain. We were husband and wife in a beautiful life, but we came to the end of our reign.
Still, our bonding goes well beyond feelings, which is something you've already known, for whenever you die and you're up in the sky, your past timeline and memories are shown.
But right now in that form you know nothing about how we were born as a soul and then ripped through the heart, loving halves torn apart, and our subsequent quest to be whole.
You know naught of the eternal struggle in corporeal darkness and light, or the miracle feat of how we came to meet, and how now our existence is right.
I've just turned down a chance to go mortal, to return to a bodily view, for in time you will be on a path back to me. Until then I'll be waiting for you.
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"one of the most moving pieces of poetry i've ever read. it brought me to tears. the author showed awesome insight." -- amy lynch.
"Thanks, Sis. I was surprised I could toouch you like that. Next time, I'll show you where the shift key is on the keyboard. ;-)" -- Richard Lynch.
"Rich, I should have read this one at home. I read it at work and started to cry. Absolutly beautiful. :-) " -- Heather, Wayne , Pa .
"I felt your pain in your poem. It was very well written. The whole thing flowed, which made it an easy poem to read and easy to understand. I also think many can relate to your poem. Keep up on writing great work like this poem." -- Rose Lynch, Bloomington/Normal, Illinois, United States.
"This is a truely moving piece of writing. It touched my heart. I hope that you continue to write more poetry like this. This piece of work plays on my emotions at a truely spiritual level." -- Kelly McClain, Normal, IL, USA.
"I see your art/poem work in your eyes. Thank you for putting it to paper. Beautiful expression of your hearts feelings." -- Jan Fiser, Atlanta.
"Richard, 2 hearts that beat as one and their souls are bound by destiny and ecstacy and fantasy and fulfillment...and like your poem shares, nothing can tear that love apart...not even death... So tragic. So real. Time on this earth so precious and together means every moment counts. Time on this earth with that special "someone" means time eternal. As you will know, I love your poem. Even the sadness and death show meaning in life in such a beautiful poem... Hope it means a future together, on earth and in death...." -- Helen, Marietta, GA, USA.
"Richard, this is by far the most touching poem i've ever read...I'm speechless..." -- Ryan Morales.
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