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The Old Enemy
I just hope I've got the names right.
Sue (Sooz) Simpson
I'm thirty nine, recently single again. I have two boys Cli' (pronounced clee) Real name Christopher and Mark. I'm a care in the community nurse and formerly (when I was married) an occupational Therapist working with the mentally ill on a secure unit. I love reading and writing and meeting people. I hate offal, seafood and intolerance. I keep dog, cat, polecats, rats and reptiles. And for seven years ran the second largest reptile sanctuary in Britain. Apart from having my lads, I think that's probably the most worthwhile thing I've ever done. Writing wise, I've been the main fiction writer for Legends magazine for three years.And have two books published 'Lizard's Leap' published by Quillusers, and 'Better the Devil You Know' soon to be released by Bestbooks.Um I drive a knackered old Astra, and ride a two litre trike. I live in the lake district of England, and am happy. :-)
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A Fork In The Road. (Short Stories) A paradox revolving round the lonely Holker Mosses in the dead of night. [2,835 words] [Mystery]
A Twist In The Tail (Short Stories) - [963 words]
Agony (Short Stories) The First in a series of Agony columns written by the unstoppable Aunt Nasty. (May be deemed offensive) [1,200 words] [Comedy]
Agony 2 (Short Stories) Morew from the irrepresible Aunt Nasty (May be deemed offensive). [1,077 words] [Comedy]
Angel Stew (Short Stories) The kitchens are in uproar. [826 words] [Comedy]
Anne (Short Stories) - [707 words]
Apple Of His Eye (Short Stories) Daddy's little girl, Daddy's little sweetheart. (May be deemed offensive). [1,742 words] [Drama]
Attractions (Short Stories) People stared at the sisters and called them freaks. [678 words] [Drama]
Bandit At Twelve-O-Clock (Short Stories) A sinister note drops through her letter box, but who is it from and what's it all about? [2,144 words] [Drama]
Barriers (Short Stories) Everybody's frightened of the prisoner in the cell at the end of the block. [2,913 words] [Thriller]
Breakfast In Bed (Short Stories) She loved her husband so much, and a sepcial man deserves a special breakfast. [1,633 words] [Horror]
Car Trouble (Short Stories) Boys will be boys. [496 words] [Comedy]
Cat's Chorus (Short Stories) - [1,332 words]
Cherry Blossom (Short Stories) - [435 words]
Cold, Cold Night.. (Short Stories) The night was beautiful but biting, she had to make her final farewells, a cigarette would help. [630 words] [Drama]
Creeping Up From Behind. (Short Stories) You can't ever really know what someone else is thinking ... unless they choose to tell you. [925 words] [Drama]
Dark Solitude. (Short Stories) A woman alone on the moors when a storm threatens, but this is no ordinanry storm and that is no ordinary lady. [1,434 words] [Drama]
Dawn Rising (Short Stories) He looked at his own personal sunrise every morning, yet longed for the warmth of the sun. [1,069 words] [Drama]
Deadly Persuit (Short Stories) Nature at its most cruel .. when it's interfered with by man. [1,541 words] [Drama]
Deep Blue Eastern Light (Poetry) I've never been to Budapest, but I saw an image on a postcard, it was misty and had a sort of dreamy quality about it. I wondered about the spirit of Budapest. Hope I've done her justicce. [204 words]
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Empty House (Short Stories) This had been her domain, now it was only a shadow. [649 words] [Drama]
Find Me A Place (Poetry) Everybody needs somewhere to run. [193 words] [Drama]
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Jinny (Poetry) - [176 words]
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Play With Me Please. (Short Stories) - [322 words]
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Rush Hour (Short Stories) - [419 words]
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So This Is My Life Then (Short Stories) - [517 words] [Comedy]
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The Old Enemy
Sue (Sooz) Simpson
Ivan sat waiting. It wouldn’t be long. He knew that when he walked out of the door He would be waiting for him. An overly psyched bully who was hoping to pound Ivan into the ground. Ivan felt a tide of fear that made him feel physically sick rising with the gorge in his throat, he swallowed it down and covered it with a mask of bravado that almost fooled himself.
His old enemy was far larger than he was in both stature and brawn, couple that with the predictability of a viper and Ivan had every right to feel scared.
He remembered the last time. The viciousness of the punches raining down on top of him, the force of the other one’s temper. The look in Mikes eyes when all reason left them and white-hot fury was all that remained.
Ivan put his hand up to feel his long healed ear. He could still feel Mikes teeth grinding into the tender cartilage, could still feel the swelling in his permanently spread nose and remembered again what it was like to have pounding headaches for weeks afterwards and eyes so battered that they were swollen closed. The Bastard wasn't going to do that to him again.
Ivander Holyfield walked into the ring with his head held high. He touched his hand to what was left of his right ear lobe and glared intimidatingly at Mike Tyson.
The crowd went into a blood lust frenzy. This was the grudge match that the boxing world had been waiting for.
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"What? That wasn't a review. If you're gonna give somebody a review, give 'em a real review, and not some oh that was nice but a little bad, and needs a good edit. What does that tell anybody?! " -- Author.
"I think one of us is missing something here, The Author. Sorry to state the obvious but that isn't a review it's a story. I admit a complete load of drivel of a story but a story none-the-less. For my reviews I sugest you check *other* people's work Duh! Will I ever do anyrthing right? Will anyone ever think quietly to themselves, damn that Sooz seems like a nice woman? Will I ever eat pizza and not put on half a stone overnight? No probably not." -- Sooz, Dalton, England, Cumbria.
"Errrrrrr...... Now I am thoroughly confused, Sooz. You left the exact same review (which is both negative and nonsensical) on my "A Really Very Gothic Poem". I apologize for my apparently overt stupidity, but I really don't understand these two reviews in the context of either work. I also don't understand why you said that you thought my poem was "clever", and then rated it a 3. I am not in the least offended, but it's rather bizarre to me. I don't know why you're lashing out at random people on Storymania, but if I were you I'd get that pizza you referred to out of my hinie and get over it." -- "Trying to Remain Neutral" " -- Wolfa.
"Sorry Sooz, but I'm with Wolfa on this one. We know these are your words and not somebody just pretending to be you. And we know that you'll now try to stammer and say it's all a misunderstanding or something. But you've made Storymania a very unpleasant place to be, and personally I don't want to be here anymore because of it." -- Cadillac Blonde.
"Eh? I didn't leave that review (See above review by "me") on "The Old Enemy", I left it on something by Cadillac Blonde. I think someone is posting reviews in places where they shouldn't be. O.o" -- Wolfa.
"And I think you're a horrible person, saying that about my work, and then making up excuses as to why you said it." -- ___.
".... wha?" -- Wolfa.
"Quick explanation for anyone coming to this later. someone was copying reviews (mine and other peoples) and pasting them on other people's work. I'm sure it kept them amused for at least a couple of hours. " -- Sooz, Dalton-in-Furness, England, Cumbria.
"Psst, it was Nic!" -- The Informant.
"Muzzle Flash’s Review: The Old Enemy Sue (Sooz) Simpson Ivan sat waiting. It wouldn’t be long. He knew that ***ax “that” and all other “that’s” in the work, then read, only where the sentence makes no sense without it. You will find you don’t need to re-add many.*** when he walked out of the door He would be waiting for him. An overly psyched bully who was hoping to pound Ivan into the ground. ***Sentence fragment.*** Ivan felt a tide of fear that made him feel ***ax “feel”*** physically sick rising with the gorge in his throat, ***Period, then new sentence.*** he swallowed it down ***ax “it down”*** and covered it with a mask of bravado that almost fooled himself. His old enemy was far larger than he was in both stature and brawn, couple ***change to “coupled” and ax “that”*** that with the predictability of a viper and Ivan had every right to feel scared. He remembered the last time. The viciousness of the punches raining down on top of him, the force of the other one’s temper. The look in Mikes ***This is a possessive case, so be sure to use your apostrophe.*** eyes when all reason left them and white-hot fury was all that remained. Ivan put his hand up to feel his long healed ear. He could still feel Mikes ***Remember that whenever something is being possessed and the possessor needs a “s” added to it to indicate that, be sure to add an apostrophe before the “s” to indicate a possessive relationship.*** teeth grinding into the tender cartilage, could still feel the swelling in his permanently spread nose and remembered again what it was like to have pounding headaches for weeks afterwards and eyes so battered that they were swollen closed. The Bastard wasn't going to do that to him again. ***Interesting turn of events, this indeed was a surprise.*** Ivander Holyfield walked into the ring with his head held high. He touched his hand to what was left of his right ear lobe and glared intimidatingly at Mike Tyson. The crowd went into a blood lust frenzy. This was the grudge match that the boxing world had been waiting for. ***Good twist. Many times I can see them coming, but you did it well by tricking the reader into believing they were playground children, and then showing us the reality of the situation. However the ending trails off, and without a proper conclusion it feels a bit empty.*** " -- Cam Davis.
"Thank-you, this one was never meant to be much of anything. Just a little pun more than anything. Thanks Cam http://members.lycos.co.uk/suesimpson/ " -- Sooz, Dalton-in-Furness, England, Cumbria.
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