ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I'm a 24 year old male, and recently received a BA in philosophy, which is why not so surprisingly I'm currently (and hopefully temporarily) a construction worker. [February 2000]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) Eve And Adam (Poetry) A feminist reworking of the Garden of Eden myth. [113 words]
The Lake Philip Kuchar
The air is fresh, so must we go Where the dark lake's mist blows? "Come, my bride, too young are we To tread here, too fancy-free; It licks our skin, the haunting lake; What life we have the deep will take." "My dearest, no, its soothing touch Makes me forget so very much." So you swoon, splash, and disappear; Alone I wait, yet is it fear Delaying me or foolish pride? I remain at the dark lake's side Until I hear your luring call; Into the murky pool I fall.
Through weed and stone I search not long: I'm guided by your siren song; Your eyes are dark, your skin is pale; I whisper through the drawing veil: "In this cold void the touch of death Will surely steal your final breath; Let us flee for the summer air, And journey back, a better pair." Upon my plea you promptly drown; Atop your head a dull light crowns; I turn in fright: you blankly stare With frozen grin and floating hair; I swim and swim until I reach The summer air and sparkling beach; Yet a song, your song! it calls me still, "Come, succumb to the dark lake's chill."
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"You are very very good. " -- Meg.
"Your short poem called to mind the lady of the lake in the Arthurian legends and your writing truly evoked a mystical happening. I wonder if Keats and Shelley did a stint on a building site?" -- Martin Milner, Freehold, NJ, USA.
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