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Fooling myself thinking I can write :) [January 2007]
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Sis L Jay
No-one sees me when she is around, I am invisible.
She is the one that everyone loves but she doesn't notice.
I try to stand tall beside her, but i always end up hidden in her shadow.
She doesn't notice how hollow she makes me feel.
It's not her fault, and I don't blame her.
She has her insecurities too, she thinks that no-one likes her.
I know the truth, she is the one that everone sees.
She is the clown, the pretty one, the intellectual.
She doesn't notice how much I am jealous of her.
How much I admire her.
How much I want to be her!
READER'S REVIEWS (7) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I know how you feel, i have three older sisters and would love to tell them all of this!" -- Tamsin.
"An amazing poem, I am sitting at my desk with tears in my eyes as I read it....this is the way of sisters obviously, I think this of Tam and my other sisters! Keep writing L Jay, it's amazing stuff!" -- Tamsins sister (Briony Carvalho).
"Thanks to both of you for the reviews, sorry i didn't mean it to stir that much emotion, yeah It must be a thing of sisters. My brother doesn't think the same though :-)" -- l Jay.
"It's a stunning poem and you should be proud that you stirred so much emotion! Boys...thinking? ha ha!" -- Briony.
"Thanks. Have you got any stuff on here?? Yeah boy's don't ever seem to think, My brother never thinks or does anything apart from play playstation games." -- l Jay.
"I wish I was more like a boy sometimes..life seems so much easier for them! Yep - look at Briony Carvalho...got one just under yours in new titles at the mo" -- Briony.
"Man why anyone would want to be a boy is beyond me, they don't look good and they smell terrible! I did look at your stuff and I like it, I urge people to read anything By Briony!" -- l Jay.
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