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THE AUTHOR
I am a 17 year old writer who writes, essays, prose, poetry among other criteria. I also study philosophy, arts, religion, past authors, and etc. [February 2000]
I,, hemeroging the color of rust Or the bald pupil of an eye. I accelerate
Down the thumbs of you half cut onion Acceptance is what makes the heart beat, it is what peels out from the still black of a mind
It is great, like the sword of a 1,000 year old god of who stand upon hills displaying nothing. I, his unquestioning disciple
follow him like I follow golden ears of corn the toppling hills, I show no red inflamation drawn out from the hem of my green skirt.
absent, I am black and white, a mild vibration Like a mother begging upon knees instead of two feet. I shall come back in your broad day
1/16/00 tallen
01-17-2000
I, movements in automatic writing � 2000 Tyurina Allen
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"Hi! I liked your poem, and what a very interesting way to write it! Very surreal and abstract - impressive! " -- Pet.
"I like the tile. "I, movements in autmatic writing" is fitting for an abstract poem. Did you write it as a stream of consciousness or was it written slowly and/or revised?" -- John Amos.
"Too drenched in wannabe Plath images. Any interesting lines are choked by Plath's echo. Maybe try reading different poets- other than confessional wannabes(olds, scheck) and Sexton/Plath. " -- fellowdroogs.
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