DESCRIPTION I - Was inspired by a relationship with a girlfriend. I wrote it after a bad night to express my feelings. It was the best way I could communicate with her, which was the original purpose of the poem. I sent it to her in the mail with no other explanation, just the poem. Moods - Comes for a strong belief of mine that life is what you make of it, and being in bad moods, hating, holding grudges only hurt the person doing those things in the end. That is who is going to be unhappy because of those feelings. It's about taking the initiative in leading a happy life, which is my goal. A Day In Lake Como - Was written in Italy at a resort called Lake Como where I was simply appreciating the beauty surrounding me, including the blue haze that was always there, mentioned in the poem. Under this Tuscan Sun - Was written at a friends house in Tuscany with the most unimaginably amazing view ever. Better than any movie and beyond anything I could picture without seeing it for myself. That Night Sky - Was inspired by the fact that there is little in this world which is more beautiful to me than the stars. I am astounded by them time and again when I sit outside in my house in Michigan at night for hours stargazing. Summer Days - Is inspired by my love for summer, and strong dislike for winter. I was outside one beautiful day this summer when I wrote it.
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"so many people have written about Lake Como in the poetry workshop I've attended. I suggest using more concrete visual detail in your poem. Show don't tell. As it is, theis poem is narrative and uninteresting in it's detail. I know Lake Como is beautiful, simply because of other poems my colleauges have written. Good luck.(and I'm envious you got to see Lake Como)(smiles)." -- d brenneman, pittsburgh, pa, usa.
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