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TITLE (EDIT)
Faded U |
DESCRIPTION
Your Drivel in a Land of Make Believe Kid
[80 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Art |
AUTHOR
Luke Mahossal |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[May 2011] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (16)
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Derailed Scam Artist (Poetry) After Years Of Scamming people Today is Your Day [35 words] [Art]
I Don't Call 911 (Poetry) Private Property Stay Out.. [33 words] [Art]
Im Rich Your Poor (Songs) Lie Ya Way To Hell Kid. [116 words] [Art]
Its A Gift (Songs) YOU SUCK.. [135 words] [Art]
One Day You'll Know (Poetry) A Lesson in Life [53 words] [Art]
Sitting On Top (Songs) Staying The Best [140 words] [Art]
The Best Ever Made (Songs) #1 Spot Do Ya Want That Want That.. [115 words] [Art]
The Darkness Of The Light (Poetry) Finding your Way [48 words] [Art]
The Fever Is Gone (Songs) Country Star and Pop Star Faded Away.. [124 words] [Art]
Turn The Heater On (Songs) Watch them Fry [143 words] [Art]
We All Gonna Die (Songs) Leave Your Mark [98 words] [Art]
We Once We're Something (Songs) Stars That Faded.. [165 words] [Art]
Whatever Celebrities (Songs) Yea Yea Yea [149 words] [Art]
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Faded U
Luke Mahossal
Now its my turn to start the ride
as I brush your drivel aside
you trying to be like me is fun
but I'll always be number 1
I think you are a joke 4 shore
now watch as the publishers close the door
I see you with a mop in hand
as I lay out in the beautiful sand
you remind me of this girl I knew
she also I bet wouldn't like you
your all talk and no game at all
Now watch as your little fame will fall.
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"This one shows exactly what I'm talking about. Thanks for being the pathetic bitch you are. Making fun of you is starting to be my favorite thing to do.....You know you spell "for sure" 4 shore in all your trash and now you think you have a girl too, please.....not even an ugly ass chick would hook up with an idiot like you. You are the number 1 retard on this site. You probably think you have some type of talent for getting feedback from poetry.com You probably even paid them to publish you. You are one weird fuck. Your like that lady from that movie Catfish. For real ha ha...That IS who you are! At least you can thank me for teaching you how to spell drivel" -- Lj.
"Soon My Boy Soon" -- Luke, USA.
""4 shore" yo" -- Lj.
"Luke, you make yourself look like a big dufus. You don't seem very clever or entertaining and obviously not very intellegant either. Lj your kind of funny though and your poetry is not that bad but what do you mean by catfish" -- L
"actually a 200 IQ and attended best school in the country ty for ya comment kid." -- Luke, USA.
"Oh a "200" iq, didn't know it went up that high. Well I guess I'm dealing with a genius then. Enlighten me Catfish genius. Make something clever up, hopeless idiot. Stupid ass bitch" -- Lj.
"Soon I will know everything running files now." -- Luke, USA.
"You know whats funny.....I'm on public access so even if there were a way for you to "run files" it wouldn't do any good...." -- LJ.
" 4913 East 83rd Avenue Merrillville, Indiana 46410" -- Luke, USA.
"Lie ya way to hell kid.. ha" -- Luke, USA.
"Yeah, your one to talk. What you leave your address for you want me to send you a letter or something" -- Lj.
"Nice made up address ha classic material.. satan awaits 4 U" -- Luke, USA.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2011 Luke Mahossal |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
June 2011 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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