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Ash Bester - The Devil May Care
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Ash Bester - The Devil May Care
Here are the first two chapters of my crime novel. I am looking for feedback and motivation to get on with it.

Ash Bester, war hero, boxer and Melbourne private detective in 1953, is about to fall victim to the very scam with which he makes a living.
[5,188 words]
Paul Leighland MacLaine
[June 2020]
[email protected]
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