TITLE (EDIT)
I Am Not The Problem |
DESCRIPTION
Discoveries :)
[259 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Relationships |
AUTHOR
Illy Hameed |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[February 2015] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
illy_16@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (19)
Anxious Love (Songs) Based on restoring faith in love to couples who reunites after breaking up. [240 words] [Teenage]
Big Problem (Songs) Biggest problem in a relationship [224 words] [Relationships]
Coffee And Cigarettes (Songs) [233 words] [Drama]
Don't Stop (Believing) (Songs) It's a dedication to those who lost their self esteem within their breakdown. [178 words] [Psychology]
Falling Into The Blue (Songs) An Encouraging Song [207 words] [Motivational]
Help Me Forget (Songs) Potential Break up song :/ [192 words] [Teenage]
I Ain't No Good Girl (Songs) Being you and just you :) [289 words] [Biography]
I Talk To My Reflection (Songs) Your Own Pep Talk to Yourself [255 words] [Motivational]
If It's Not Our Call (Songs) Lyrics for couples in one of those 'Complicated Relationships' [179 words] [Relationships]
It's Time To Go (Songs) Song about a suicidal girl [146 words] [Psychology]
I've Tried My Best (Songs) The Ultimate Bipolar Song :) Stay Strong! [189 words] [Motivational]
Lightening's Gonna Strike Again (Songs) One sided Hope in a relationship that can no longer proceed. [135 words] [Relationships]
Long Story Short (Songs) A mother telling her daughter/son about his/her father for the first time. [172 words] [Teenage]
Marry For Money (Songs) Every girl's hidden wish ;) [285 words] [Motivational]
To Be Okay (Songs) This song is about being treated wrong and suffering because your partner doesn't give a sh*t. [114 words] [Psychology]
Twisted Professions (Songs) Star Crossed Lovers! [199 words] [Romance]
What It Takes (Songs) - [185 words] [Drama]
Wont Hold It Against You (Songs) . . . . . [280 words] [Relationships]
Your Wake Up Call (Songs) A song for all the dumb guys, for leaving the perfect girl behind. [207 words] [Relationships]
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I Am Not The Problem
Illy Hameed
When I'm all alone
I'm all on my own . . .
(Verse One)
I'm not the problem
And you're not too
We're as close to, finding out the truth
You left a peice of me
that I was bound to solve
You said you resented me
And that I was my own downfall
(Chorus)
When I'm all alone
I'm all on my own
You showed me no mercy
I'm as far as it gets me
But I needed you there
But I needed you there
Good thing I've managed to let go
When I'm all alone
I can't call it a home
You showed no selfworth
I'm as hurt underneath
But I needed you there
But I needed you there
Good thing I've managed to let go
(Verse Two)
I'm not the saint. you
tend to belive
I've crossed that ocean
with all that strenght in me
You left a peice of me
that I was bounch to solve
You said you resented me
And that I was my own downfall
(Chorus)
When I'm all alone
I'm all on my own
You showed me no mercy
I'm as far as it gets me
But I needed you there
But I needed you there
Good thing I've managed to let go
(Bridge)
All the stars combined
Can't make me whole
You say better luck next time
Now it's just me and my soul
(Chorus)
When I'm all alone
I'm all on my own
You showed me no mercy
I'm as far as it gets me
But I needed you there
But I needed you there
Good thing I've managed to let go
When I'm all alone
I can't call it a home
You showed no selfworth
I'm as hurt underneath
But I needed you there
But I needed you there
Good thing I've managed to let go
I'm not the problem
And you're not too
We're as close to, finding out the truth
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READER'S REVIEWS (2)
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"A lot of rambling. Lyrical structure is totally unpolished. You'e probably the only one who understands what you're trying to say. Sounds like the mumbling of young people like yourself who think they know what relationships are all about. You have much to learn about what's really important in life. Good luck. " -- Richard.
"Thank you for your review. I am not a professional lyricist. I just like writing lyrics and I post them here for myself not for anybody else. Once again I really appreciate how you pointed out how my lyrics are unpolished, to which I totally agree with you. It's noted but I do not appreciate how you have portrayed me as someone who doesn't know what's important in life. My songs are mainly all about relationships but should you jump into conclusions? No I don't think so. I am sure no one likes to be judged by the words of their lyrics. :) But still, thank you for your response. I will do better and try my best." -- Illy.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2014 Illy Hameed |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
September 2014 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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