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Baby Please Don't Go
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TITLE (EDIT)
Baby Please Don't Go |
DESCRIPTION
A girl leaving.....tired of being hurt...holding her head up high like a woman should....a man realizing he screwed up with her.....
[171 words] |
TITLE KEYWORD
Relationships |
AUTHOR
Donna Leigh Dennison |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Greetings Y'all...my submissions on here come from South Alabama, so anything you read of mine on this site you can pretty much relate it to country.....
[October 2004] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
nlite727@hotmail.com |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4)
I Wish This Girl Was Mine (Songs) - [176 words]
My Heart Can Never Mend (Songs) This is just about the hard feelings of hurting and believing the other side cannot understand the pain. [152 words] [Relationships]
Tell Me Why My Heart Hurts (Songs) Just another hurting song....please people, before you critique me too bad, please hear it as slow (country of course) [116 words] [Relationships]
The Pillow (Songs) Lonely nights of being a trucker's wife. [114 words]
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Baby Please Don't Go
Donna Leigh Dennison
Just as I was leaving
You stopped me in my tracks
Took me in your loving arms
I held the hurting back...
You asked, “baby where you going?”
And “when will you be home?”
I told you it was over
I need to get out on my own.
And you said......
Baby please don’t go
We can work this whole thing through
I need you more than ever
Tell me what I need to do....
I’m so sorry that I hurt you
And I hate to make you cry
Baby please don’t go
I don’t know how to say good bye.
Then I left your trembling arms
And headed for the door
Softly spoke my last words to you
“You don’t need me anymore.”
That’s when I think it finally hit you
And I heard you beg me please
From the corner of my eye
I saw you hit your knees....
And you cried...
Baby please don’t go
We can work this whole thing through
I need you more than ever
Tell me what I need to do....
I’m so sorry that I hurt you
And I hate to make you cry
Baby please don’t go
I don’t know how to say good bye.
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"i really like this song, very descriptive. one thought (and please don't get mad) should the verse that ends you don't need me anymore be 'i don't need you anymore', seems that might be more in line with the rest but it still is good." -- echo.
"Thanks Echo and I see what you mean and it makes sense what you say, but I looked at it the other way .....me saying to him that he don't need me anymore"....(guess it was a way of making him feel bad, he's doing all the sobbing and having the regrets, I was just being a bitch and sarcastic)....does that make any sense.....thanks again..appreciate your input and info....take care" -- Donna Leigh, Alabama, USA.
"I thought it was excellent. worded realy well, with no forcing. Good job!" -- km.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 Donna Leigh Dennison |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
October 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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