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Get My Mind Off Of You Joe Desanto
Verse1:
Today ive been waiting
Tomorrow keeps on fading
My heart just never seems to stop
As I think about your face
Memories untraced
I just cant seem to let go of you
My mind keeps on faking
The dreams ive been making
Why cant I just move onto something new?
Chorus:2x
You are the blood in my veins
The cells moving into my brain
I just cant seem to get my mind off of you
These tricks that it plays
Just keep worsening my days
I just cant seem to get my mind off of you
These moving pictures in my head
keep on going and ill soon be dead
Verse2:
My soul is betraying
Everyday ive been praying
Just to keep my head on my shoulders
But now im starting to break down
Faster and faster into the ground
I don’t know how much more I can take
Memories of you
Are the only things that do
Seem to ever make me happy
So why cant I just move onto something new?
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"Hey! Firstly, i like the song... and the verses are quite strong. In the chorus, i'm not sure about the "The cells moving into my brain" line - cos it sounds more comical than anything else. Also, the below 2 lines is not required. "These moving pictures in my head keep on going and ill soon be dead" Or if u do want to keep it, then add "I just cant seem to get my mind off of you" in the end to make it sound complete. Otherwise - sounds good =) Good luck!" -- Deepa Seshadri, Mumbai, Maharashtra, India.
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