DESCRIPTION
This is a song I wrote about having that feeling when your with someone you care bout or someone you just cant live a day without. Its that emotion of feeling like your life couldn't get any better. Its like your really feeling what its like to be ALIVE in this world.
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Fully Alive Joe Desanto
Verse1:
Forever is just a word
Together is just a verb
There’s no way to explain
If this will ever leave us pain
Were all living just to see
If we have found the one who is mean to be
Chorus:
Ive been searching
And feels like its been far too long
Ive been searching
Just to see who will belong in my life
Ive been thinking
If this how its going to be
So ill keep on searching far and wide
If this is what its like to feel fully alive
Verse2:
Tears are just an emotion
This game is just a proportion
I wish this life was that easy
To find the one who bleed’s like me
On this path im all alone
With no where else that’s left to go
So where all living just to see
If we have found the one who is meant to be
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"Again, good job! Few pointers. 1) If this will ever leave us pain - Not sure if this line means what you want it to mean... Just re-check on that. 2) Were all living just to see - I'm assuming its 'We're' and not 'Were' 3) In the chorus, you could change the line - Just to see who will belong in my life - to 'For the one to whom i belong' - this rhymes better. Hope my suggestions help! :) Good luck!" -- Deepa Seshadri.
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