AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4) Done (Songs) This was my first rock lyric. In a way, it is my nursey. I marks the day My Hyde was born and what I first fed on. [469 words] [Self-Help] I Can't Be The Man I Wanna Be (Songs) I'm finally doing it! I'm finally telling the woman I love how I feel. But before I do, I need to know if whatv I wrote is good or crap. Any comment would be appreciated unless you are a dick. please ... [675 words] [Self-Help] My Biggest Fear (Songs) Guess who's back [722 words] [Self-Help] My Hyde (Songs) An inroduction to who I am; The evil and free part of otherwise pure and trapped young man. [635 words] [Self-Help]
Everyone's Bitch My Hyde
No more—holding back, its time for me to let it out
Time for you bitches to know what I’m all about
I’m silent on the outside all day long—
You never care—if anything is wrong—
You never see—when I shout
It is so easy for you to look down on me when I’m down here
You think I’m so weak and full of fear
You don’t know that my chest is filling up with rage
Swelling in that fleshly cage
Over not being able to stand up for myself,
To defend myself
Unable to say—what I have to say
Unable even—to walk away...
EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch IT HAS TO STOP
I’m done being everybody’s personal scape-hitch LIVING IN A EMOTIONAL DITCH
These chains are about to drop EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch The person they resolve to kick around
When life has got them down
Is about to come down—
On them
No more—hiding it, I’m done hiding my eyes
If you keep pushing me, you’re going to get a nice surprise
Everything you say to me—I always just keep to myself—
But I’ve about had it—with being your elf—
It’s about time for me to have some pride
I sit here and never fight back
While everyone in the free world climbs on my back
Too polite to fight—too scared to bleed
Even when the anger and heartache are about to burst out of me
Always criticizing me, always breathing down my neck
You’re pushing me too far, you just don’t know it yet
I can’t do this—every day
You even bitch at me for not doing—what I’m about to do anyway
You bitch at me over things that don’t matter at all
Well, my patience—is about to fall...
EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch IT HAS TO STOP
I’m done being everybody’s personal scape-hitch LIVING IN A EMOTIONAL DITCH
These chains are about to drop EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch The person they resolve to kick around
When life has got them down
Is about to come down—
On them
Some self-respect, some dignity
All these things have been denied to me
How am I supposed to be a man
When I’m not allowed to make a stand
I fell so trapped... Trapped in this body, trapped in this life
I can barely keep my heart alive
I can feel my dick getting smaller every day
To reverse that, I found a way
To free myself To say what I need to say
And now My Hyde—is out to play...
EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch IT HAS TO STOP
I’m done being everybody’s personal scape-hitch LIVING IN A EMOTIONAL DITCH
These chains are about to drop EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch The person they resolve to kick around
When life has got them down
Is about to come down—
On them
EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch IT HAS TO STOP
I’m done being everybody’s personal scape-hitch LIVING IN A EMOTIONAL DITCH>
These chains are about to drop EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch— EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m so sick of being everyone’s bitch IT HAS TO STOP
I’m done being everybody’s personal scape-hitch LIVING IN A EMOTIONAL DITCH
These chains are about to drop EVERYONE’S BITCH
I’m sick of being everyone’s bitch The person they resolve to kick around
When life has got them down
Is about to come down—
Is about to come down—
My Hyde is about to come down—
ON THEM...
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"Instead of deleting your reviews why don't you just delete everything you've posted. The reviews are far more interesting than your writing. " -- Lester.
"I did not delet them, your damn server did!" -- My Hyde.
"I'm slightly disappointed in you, Les, I expected more of a come back. Make you think twice, did I? Look, call me a wanna-be if you wish--call us all wanna-be's if you wish--but anyone who would've read our little conversation would see the truth. You are but an unhappy little man-bitch who, though obviously knowing nothing about literature, has to bring other people down to make himself feel important. If you had actually read the original book in your life, you'd know that the qualities That make up Mr. Hyde and My Hyde are different. Furthermore, you can hardly call my work unoriginal. The only reason you think it is such is because I use the names "Jekyll and Hyde", which, everyone knows but you, have become synonyms for the good and evil in people and in which I made my own. There is no such thing as a truly original idea--and you're a moron if you disagree. So I ask you, am I a wanna-be artist, or are you a wanna-be critic? I at least know you're a hypocrite,! because I can't find a scrap of your work anywhere on this site. Not only that, but this is a amatuer site. Of course we're amatuers! P.S. Will someone review me besides this uncultured loser?" -- My Hyde.
"You can barely spell culture, let alone contemplate its meaning. Pick out any published book, past or present. You will not find any misspelled words, incorrect punctuation or poor grammar. So before you call yourself even an amateur(please note the spelling) writer, I suggest you improve your English grammar, punctuation and spelling. Originality? Even the most objective reviewer would find it difficult to continue reading this after the first two stanzas (or whatever they are). The peice is juvenile, childish, and reads like the copycat creation of a little effeminate fruitcake, who spends too much time playing video games and watching sci-fi TV. " -- Lester.
"Lester, you whiney little bitch. Stop checking the grammer of unchecked and unrevised messages I write at five in the morning and address the fucking issue. You crtizie--as if you have any right at all--my work when the only proof I have of your so-called expertise (I might've spelledd that wrong, but I don't give a shit) is the pompous and snobby way you put down the work of everyone on this site. Simply because you don't understand a piece (note the spelling, asshole) doesn't make it bad. In your case, it most of the time means you are an insecure idiot who lacks poetic understanding of human emotions. I deal with your kind everyday of my life and I can tell you, I can see right through your thick shit. You have to constantly critize others to make you feel like the man you're not, while at the same time, you side step criticism. As for calling me juvenile, there are plenty of juvenile rock fans that would appreciate my work because the understand empathy and popular culture more than you ever will. Besides that, I am My Hyde. I am allowed to be juvenile and childish. You honestly think you insult me by saying that? I don't give a shit. PS: Be a man and answer my fucking questions!" -- My Hyde.
"Something just occured to me: that you are simply reaching for reasons to put me down. When I sealed up all relavent avenues--or avenues you were man enough to go down--you attacked me with something completely beside the point. Every time you do this, you only expose your own insecurity. You, Lester, are a sad, sad little man." -- My Hyde.
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