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TITLE (EDIT)
Forgiveness (Song) |
DESCRIPTION
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[364 words] |
AUTHOR
Fred Hardy |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[July 2007] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
javafh@hotmail.com |
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Forgiveness (Song)
Fred Hardy
last time I played Jesus
found you lying in the rain
your eyes were closed completely
love was in your veins
you asked me for forgiveness
you said you couldn't explain
you tried to tell me you were sorry
you were feeling so much shame
so I offered up my temple
you broke into my home
you took liberty girl
you busted up my comfort zone
now why am I still listening
why am I so confused
why am I still contemplating
what we are going to do
ch
I tried to talk to you
I tried to see inside
I thought there was hope
but you kept talking lies
you opened up nothing
you sealed your soul away
now what am I suppose to do
tell me
what am I suppose to say
break
I'm not talking about what happened
no,I'm not talking about denial
your not living on the edge
and your not talking suicidal
I just want to try an understand
whats going on inside your head
whats with all the things you did
and everything you said
it must be your pretty face
that keeps me hanging on
I can't think of any other reason
why I keep letting you treat me wrong
maybe it's just your fragile smile
and your soft teary eyes
maybe it's your broken voice
that cuts into my pride
ch
I tried to talk to you
I tried to see inside
I thought there was hope
but you kept talking lies
you opened up nothing
you sealed your soul away
now what am I suppose to do
tell me,
what am I suppose to say
break
now every second Tuesday of the month
you go over to confess
you walk out of here screaming
your trying to do your best
you always say your leaving
I'm the reason for your pain
but the addiction never leaves you
it just keeps happening again
I tried to talk to you
I tried to see inside
I thought there was hope
but you kept talking lies
you opened up nothing
you sealed your soul away
now what am I suppose to do
tell me,
what am I suppose to say
outro
the last time I played Jesus
you left me hanging in the rain
my eyes were full of anger
my fingers full of pain
you asked me for forgiveness
you said you couldn't explain
now what am I suppose to do
tell me
what am I suppose to say
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READER'S REVIEWS (5)
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"cool song, love or addiction or both maybe." -- curious.
"thanks for reading and commenting ,not a nice topic ,I need to do some more editing on this .I'll try to make it clearer I think it's a bit confusing. thanks again" -- fh, canada.
"Fred, I don't know if you ment it to or not but while I was reading, I was kind of jamming out because the rythm of this song was very much like Bob Dylan. I'd like to see if I'm close. I apologize if I'm not" -- kwilt.
"Thanks for commenting on this Kwilt if there is any similarity to Bob Dylan it is accidental as I know very little of Dylan stuff ,not much of a fan and have never listened knowingly to any of his music even knocking on heavens door I remember as a GnR tune ,but thanks for the comparison I do understand he was a tremendous writer.thanks again and have a great evening." -- fh, canada.
"Wow, that's a huge surprise....I really thought I nailed it Must have just been a case of when you have the radio on, with the tv on mute and everyone talking looks like they are the ones who are singing. Sorry about that....Dylan is in fact a lyrical genius, in my opinion, anyway" -- kwilt.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
August 2007 |
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