ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am 12 years old, and have been on the swim team since the fourth grade. That is also when I started writing poetry and other things. I just moved from Washington State. [December 1999]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) Storm (Poetry) A short poem, set to the rhythm of the swaying trees and howling wind... a grandmother tells a story.... [35 words]
Alone Sabriel
Alone
My sweet left, annoyed by my needs, My love left me alone, when I am a groupie, He left me to reap what I sowed, When all I had were three seeds.
The lonely willow weeps The single wolf howls The abandoned chick peeps cowering from the owls
How loud the lightning seems When you are all alone A whisper is a shout When everyone is gone
When I needed him the most, he vanished away When I grew sick of him, he came to stay I depended on him and he hasn't been seen Since last May
The lonely willow weeps The single wolf howls The abandoned chick peeps Cowering from the owls
How loud the lightning seems When you are all alone A whisper is a shout When everyone is gone
I asked a million times for a thousand things Not knowing if he would really leave But he did, and the reality that I drove him away Still stings
The lonely willow weeps The single wolf howls The abandoned chick peeps Cowering from the owls
How loud the lightning seems When you are all alone A whisper is a shout When everyone is gone
He came back, tired of life without comfort But I met someone else, who did not mind me So I left him, him with all of his un-efforts
The lonely willow weeps The single wolf howls The abandoned chick peeps Cowering from the owls
How loud the lightning seems When you are all alone A whisper is a shout When everyone is gone
Now I am half of one whole I am part of one soul I love my new love, and give him more love And he is not frustrated at all.
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"I like this one. It's real. You can write well, especially for your age." -- Christy Mack.
"wow I'm impressed! You sure you're only 12?" -- Michelle.
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