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I heard about the site through a friend. I'm REALLY looking for some feedback for my writing. Thanks. [March 2002]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4) 2am (Short Stories) This is my first contribution to the site. It's an excerpt from a journal I kept over the summer. Please review, I'm looking for feedback. [3,361 words] [Comedy] Aurora (Borealis) (Short Stories) Since I got so much great feedback, I thought I'd post something else from my summer journal. Please review! This goes out to you Aurora, thanks. [3,136 words] [Comedy] Jinx (Short Stories) Another entry from my summer journal, thanks to all who have responded. Please keep reviewing! [9,058 words] [Comedy] Just Like Old Times...(Plus Madison) (Novels) This is the last of my Senior Week stories that I am going to publish on this site. The ones coming are too personal to post here. Thanks to all who have repsonded in the past, though this one is so b... [12,561 words] [Comedy]
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"Wow, enter sandman good song to hum and to concentrate too. Guy talk, yup tis a wonderful thing. Man lifes a bitch when you wake up and there is a half naked girl next to you. Maybe you should have knocked on the window or something or touched bobby's car. bobby probaly has some mental alarm or somethin. Morning wood meets half-naked chick the battle of the century!! " -- Ryan L. Babcock, Baltimore, MD, United States.
"Now the story finally begins to get interesting. It seems that Bobby's introduction into the story has brought life to what has been an altogether unusual and painfully dull experience for anyone other than Mack himself. Hopefully more interesting stories will follow, and then Senior Week will have kicked into full gear and fulfilled all of Mack's dreams. With all the trials and tribulations he has endured, only good can come. I think it is time for Mack to "Show Me Something."" -- Booby J, Baltimore, MD, USA.
"it gets better and better !!! i still stay with the fact that you should stay away from madison and all of woman kind!!! stop insulting randy's pancakes... he is very sensitive. this is definately something i have been waiting for, so keep'em coming. o and to helping hands from chicago you were right... but he came throught after all... stay in touch " -- Aurora , macon, ga.
"hey, keep writing, it's really good, i can't wait to read the next part!" -- Christy M, Columbia, MD, USA.
"Very good story but the dialogue becomes a bit silyl at times with characters who appear close using too much formality. The line which describes the graduation gift as "stupid" seemed out of place. Yet all in all a very entertaining work." -- pat, Baltimore, MD, USA.
"Great job Mac. I wouldnt say that Bobby's introduction has done much as of yet. Maybe you could elaborate on the other chracters more, not just yourself and the women. I wonder whats instore for you guys during senoir week. I hope at the least you had fun!! I can't wait to read the next segment!!" -- Timothy Sams, Orange County, NY, Usa.
"Mac, another wonderful addition to your epic summer adventures. You should have ditched Madison somewhere along the road. I can't wait to here about the crazy things that you do or happen to you during the rest of senior week. Aurora I'm glad he pulled through in the end, but who knows what the future may hold? Best of luck to you in all things. It's great that you guys (Mac, Aurora and Randy) are such close friends everyone needs people they can count on to always be there. Till next time..." -- Helpful Hand, Chicago , IL, USA.
"I'm so glad you didn't stoink Madison...she doesn't seem to be your type (please God tell me you didn't do anything later with her either!). I still think you shoulda kicked Randy's ass for his behavior. ;) Oh well...good stuff kid. But now I'm ready for some REAL good stuff *wink wink*. *hugs*" -- Raye, MI, USA.
"hey mack great entry i love the character development but give randy some credit and when is this thing gonna turn into the steamy sex driven story any sr wk epic should be?" -- Ronnie Gnillits, Boston, California, Zimbabwe.
"HESH WANTS SEX!!!" -- Hesh.
"Jummy wants sex too. Hubba hubba hubba, Ima happy boy!!!!!!!" -- Ghost of Jummy.
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