ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I love to read and learning new languages. My favorite types of music are metal/punk and rock. [September 2005]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (6) Ex's Have No Rights (Songs) It's a song I wrote for my band, see it when it's recoreded on www.myspace.com/deadontheoutsiderock [144 words] Girl Downstairs (Short Stories) A girl meets another girl who steals the love of her life. [707 words] Love You Forever (Short Stories) Its something thats going to happen to someone who used to be my best friend. [327 words] Na (Songs) I wrote it and apparently it's good. Lots of thanks to Gordon for helping me with the ideas. Be warned there is a slight bit of swearing. [197 words] Stupid Teenagers (Poetry) - [41 words] The Last Sunset (Short Stories) It's the story of a girl driven crazy by taunting and heartbreak. [679 words] [Thriller]
Memories Past Alice W-M
Susie sat on her pink bed linen day dreaming about memories past, she thought about Gregory and the one summer they had together before his death.
A silent tear rolled down her cheek as she remembered the way he used to hug her so softly and the way he kissed her so gently.
Spider switched on some very loud music and reached for her knife.
She had been cutting herself since she was 10 and now she was 14 but no one had ever noticed.
She had started after she realised her parents were never coming back.
Her name, Spider, she had chosen herself because that’s what she felt like.
She was always making pretty things that people didn’t appreciate, because no one was there to see them.
Susie got up and walked to the window.
She looked over at the mysterious house next door as far as she could tell it had been abandoned but at night she saw someone walk out of the front door.
She had always thought it was just a hobo because they weren’t uncommon in this part of the town and on her street there were 6 abandoned houses.
She turned her head to watch the crimson sunset in the distance.
Spider scurried about the room looking for the bandages she bought every other night when she went grocery shopping using the large amount of money she had stored up in the cupboard in her parent’s old room.
They had left it there in case of an emergency.
She was almost out of medical supplies and so she would have to go out again tonight.
The phone rang in Susie’s hall; it was Dylan, asking if she wanted to go out tonight.
She said yes, a decision she would learn to regret. Later that night she was walking out of the house when she was grabbed from behind by a dirty black hobo style glove.
Spider dragged the girl inside; she couldn’t risk being found out by anyone.
The girl screamed but Spider put a stop to that by knocking her out with the baseball bat she kept for protection.
She had always been fascinated but the human body, now was her chance to examine it.
Susie came round and tried to speak but found herself gagged.
She tried to move but she was tied to a table.
She saw a dark figure standing in the corner.
The figure moved to wards her, in the figures hand was a knife, sharp and glistening in the moonlight that was streaming in through the window.
The figure advanced and she saw it was a girl about her age.
Spider took the knife and slid it across the girls’ chest; this was to be her best work of art.
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"it is very creepy!...i like!! but i think there needs to be more written in each section because there isn't very much about one girl until it switches to the other, also the last line is very powerful :)" -- Beth, cambs, england.
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