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TITLE (EDIT)
Big Things Come In Small Packages |
DESCRIPTION
This story is about a boy who loves playing the piano and wishes to be a pianist but is severely disformed. This is a short story - I would recommend it for teens. I always want my stories to have a message teens can relate to/think about, so look out for the hidden message!
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TITLE KEYWORD
Teenage |
AUTHOR
Alessandra Mace |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am 13 years old and many people say my writing is very mature. I wish to be an author when I am older.
[January 2003] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (2)
Mums The Word (Short Stories) 16-year-old Sky is mortified when her careworker, Jack has to leave for the US for the birth of his new baby. Sky, and the rest of the residents are wven more mortified when they meet thier new care a... [3,830 words] [Teenage]
Sleep Tight. Nighty Night. (Short Stories) This story I wrote before 'Big things come in small packages' see how is has matured. (if it has) It is a classic example of how a young child (or teenager in my case) should carry on writing and inmp... [1,282 words]
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"I think, after reading this story, that you have a lot of potential Alessandra. Especially at just thirteen years old. I do, however, have some criticisms. Firstly, the whole stint where the parents of the pianist are introduced and married and whatnot, while well written, could be left out. It just allows for better story telling if we are introduced to the boy early on. Also, after you do introduce the parents and they have their son, the story seems to enter the realm of telling us what's going on instead of showing us, which is how you started the story. I have problems myself with that, and I'm 21, so I don't blame you. Thirdly, there are a few misspellings. But all things considered, this could make a great novel, the struggle of the life of a disabled and aspiring young pianist. That is, of course, if you'd be willing to commit to it. Maybe later on down the line. Anyway, keep writing and take care. " -- Michael, Detroit.
"Wonderful Story . Especially for a girl of your age. Girl, keep on writing. You will definitely get to the Bookers one day for sure. And to top it all, you do write in a very mature way... Never could picture a 13 year old Kid writing such a touching and grown up short story. Keep it up Alessandra ... -- Your Brother, Ram" -- Ram Menon, Bangalore, Karnataka, India.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
January 2003 |
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