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TITLE (EDIT)
As Told By Me
DESCRIPTION
Short Story about a kid that gets caught up in the wrong stuff.
[6,534 words]
TITLE KEYWORD
Drama
AUTHOR
Parker
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
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[February 2003]
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
nailbunny16@aol.com
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1)
A Tragedy Of Love (Poetry) Short little poem. Please review, thanks. [111 words] [Romance]
READER'S REVIEWS (2)
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"“You know that rule that says the good guys always win and the bad guys always get what’s coming to em?" Normally I would have stopped at this sentence, but I make some of these mistakes too. Delete "That" everywhere you can. It is a fill word, and you kill the reader with them. Second, is this someone speaking? It doesn't read like it is, so don't use "em". It should read in proper grammer, using words. Dialect is achieved with word choice, not making up words, and if it isn't someone speaking don't do it at all. "I must warn you it probably wont be what you suspect." Punctuation errors everywhere. Won't has an apostrophy, and this sentence needs a comma. I will stop here. You get the idea. Edit your work for basic errors, there are several." -- Sylvia Browne.
"Is that Sylvia or JA St George? LOL. This story is OK, but Sylviia's right, there are some grammar mistakes. JA St. George told me never to capitalize a whole word, because it suggests shouting. So, ALL GOOD and WRONG need to be fixed. This story is off to a good start, but It sort of reads slow and it's repetitive. " -- Steven T.

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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
February 2003
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