DESCRIPTION
Vieled Enigmas is a twisting, turning mystery with surprise lurking around every corner. The reader will remained stunned as every scene brings out something new and the reader will not know the outcome until the very end. [4,972 words]
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I consider my writing to be a younger, new style of writing that I created through reading Hitchcock, Puzo, and King, that emphasizes heavily on certain parts and lightly on other events comparitive to David Lynch's films. [February 2004]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (8) A Little Note Saying Hi... (Poetry) A romantic, simple poem for a friend, lover, or whatever... Makes a great Valentine's Treat! [133 words] [Romance] Cellar Door (Poetry) A mysterious reflection on a couple's life seen through different viewpoints of a tragic world... [114 words] [Romance] Crimson And Clover (Poetry) Vivid and harsh acts of aggression intertwined with a woman's past... [215 words] [Horror] E.L.M. (Poetry) A variation from my normal work; light-hearted story derived from Aesop's Fables. A must read... [616 words] [Humor] Lies To Succumb To Her Passion (Poetry) A poem I wrote about someone that is sometimes dear to me and sometimes not... I believe all will enjoy the smooth flowing and twists! [151 words] [Romance] Of Love And Of Thy Compassion... (Poetry) The story of a past relationship I had best desribed in this poetic masterpiece!!! Short and to the point... I think all will enjoy!!! [94 words] [Romance] Simplicity (Poetry) Simple... sweet... sentimental... [118 words] [Romance] The Works Of A Mind Distraught... (Poetry) The evilness in the world around us and how one can be so easily persuaded or swayed to the other side... The things he/she feels and sees along that path! [145 words] [Horror]
READER'S REVIEWS (14) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"Awesome story man!!! Great storytelling and kept me coming back for me!!!" -- Justin, San Diego, California, U.S..
"That was a great story!! I really enjoyed you new style! what a thrill!!!" -- Alexis , Dallas, Texas, United States of America.
"An exciting mystery with good character development! You can tell who your influences are but you have a style all your own. Keep 'em comin', I'll definitely read more!" -- Robin, Louisville, Kentucky, USA.
"I believe that this story was very well written and left you wondering .. I however wish thre was more to the story .." -- Lisa.
"Incredible story-telling followed up with suspense and mystery that characterized the story! Fascinating and flawless!" -- Felix, Charlotte, N.C., USA.
"Thanks for all the reviews... Justin, Alexis, Robin, Lisa, and Felix - I've added a peice of poetry you will definitely enjoy if you loved Veiled Enigmas!!!" -- Reagan, Houston, Texas, USA.
"Perfect finish to a great story!!! I was in love with both women the whole story and rooting for them to come out victorious, guess you didn't see it my way. Nah, great work either way" -- Harris, Talladega.
"Definately an interesting desplay of writing. Some interesting phrases ("initiated with the waste removal process"), and a few spelling errors, but overall it was a decent read. I cant help but think that this might make a good short movie or something of that sort..." -- Miles Tugman.
"Not bad. Not bad at all. Nice work." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"Great story. Freakish, but great. I found myself reading faster in suspense to get to the end! And isn't that the whole point of writing? A job well done and a fine piece of work. You are going to be a general someday Gump! " -- Amanda, San Antonio, TX , USA.
"A more relaxed, less satanic, more family, version of "Dark Days"... still had the twists and turns and great storyline, but not off-the-wall evil!!! Great story..." -- J.J., NY, NY.
"The was certainly a twist or two! I had to really pay attention to all the characters to keep them straight- may I suggest a bit more character development? Otherwise, like Amanda, I just had read it to get to the end!" -- Tessa.
"PERFECT!!! 10 out of 10 Rothe!" -- JJ, The Miss.
"OKAY, OKAY, I finally found something I understood, enjoyed, and could follow thoroughly... Altough, I must say to my displeasure, that I'm more interested in DARK DAYS than this piece (don't get me wrong, it was very surprising and good) just for some odd reason I'm locked into DARK DAYS!" -- EJ Hennings, The Province.
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