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This is the story of a girl (Katie) and her friends that go to a cabin for the weekend. What was supposed to be a carefree weekend turns into a nightmare that none of them will forget, if even get out of. What is going on with the hooded figures? Why does Katie seem to have a connection to this figure? Who are the black armed men that accompany them? All these questions will be answered and will give you chills at what it is NOTE:--This is the very belated updated version. [15,968 words]
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READER'S REVIEWS (4) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"hey, not bad. i look forward to seeing the completed version. i think you should add more at the end, not jsut have it end so abruptly. but good job!" -- jack.
"For examinations" -- Crystal Baldeo, Port of Spain, St Helena, Trinidad and Tobago.
"Interesting. Good title. I recommend delving deeper into the lives of the main characters. Because this story has been told many times before you're going to have to lean on the craft of screenwriting to make this plot unique. Just something to think about................peace!" -- Richard Evans.
"This was pretty good. The dialogue seemed to at times seemed to need a little tightening up, but overrall it was good nontheless. I liked how you ended the story with the circumstances of the boyfriend, and his back and forth Katie. You also seemed to be writing the script with the eye of a director, writing lots of instances where you guide the camera yourself. I thought that the was the director's job, and that's what he or she would get done once the script has been approved. But I only have two sci fi scripts to my name, so what do I know? Overall, a good solid effort. Keep it up." -- Michael Harris, Detroit, MI.
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