Oh Heavenly Father by Desmond Naaten O'keeffe - [182 words]
My Island by Toni Jaquay Lynch My own secret meaning. [43 words]
Lunarurbanizedinsight. by Martin De Leon the space between the molecular structure of air and abstractness. (spaced out like sun ... [153 words]
La Physicalidad De Memoria. by Martin De Leon streaks of visual sound. cecil taylor meets christian marclay. "the dalai lama of t... [93 words]
In A Cardboard Box by Arthur Henry Isaacson Memories stored away but not discarded. [111 words]
I Believe (Love) by ~Blythe~ I wrote this for one of my best friends in all the world. I believe it was totally and 100% fa... [393 words]
Free At Last by Arthur Henry Isaacson The agony of divorce or separation. There are no easy answers. Nothing is black and white. [80 words]
Epitaph by Arthur Henry Isaacson Why are we here and who will remember? [164 words]
Crowded by Toni Jaquay Lynch Something I observed one day. [31 words]
Aurora. (For The Unknown Author...) by Martin De Leon Textual phonograph. The cyclical nature of emotional existence. Here/now. B... [119 words]
Asleep At Last by Richard Koss A man in a hospital bed is having difficulty falling asleep, but he soon will... [152 words]
When My Atlantis by Toni Jaquay Lynch Its a poem of something I lost a long time ago. [86 words]
Theos by Toni Jaquay Lynch Something that just came to me. [224 words]
The Attack Of Love by Erin D. Traynum (For Kantrell Who Gave Me The Title) The experience of living and fulfilling the purpose of... [88 words]
No Title by William W. Degravelles - [67 words]
My Unavoidable Hell
Life's Course by Erin D. Traynum Just about the pressure of living. [260 words]
I Look Quickly Away by Erin D. Traynum A poem that I wrote when I first kissed my current boyfriend. [115 words]
Heart Wide Open by Toni Jaquay Lynch I wrote this when I found out about the coming of my second child. [51 words]
El Vientre De La Mente. (Gray Noise) by Martin De Leon - [89 words]
Conformity by Erin D. Traynum About the pressures that I feel toward conforming to society and its views. [102 words]
Authority by William W. Degravelles typical pissed off teenager poem [44 words]
A Night Of Love Making by Erin D. Traynum Just a poem. [35 words]
What Kind Of Man Are You by Janae D Anthony The morals of a man. This poem was based on some things I've seen on television, compi... [225 words]
Thoughts Caught On Paper by Teresa Little A collection of poems. Little Bird - is about breaking away, to find the impression lo... [422 words]
Simply But A Mockingbird by Christy Mack A lonely person who finally figures out he needs love and when he might find it relize... [288 words]
No Title. (Verbalremixoflovepoem) by Martin De Leon this is a piece applying the aesthetic utilized in dj culture of remixing and... [156 words]
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TITLE (EDIT)
My Unavoidable Hell |
DESCRIPTION
Can't really explain, would appreciate any feedback that you would like to give.
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AUTHOR
Erin D. Traynum |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Erin is a person obsessed with writing. She has finally come to enjoy the passion that has been with her since she wrote her first poem at the age of four. Recently she began to write fiction. These are my first tries at short stories and fiction, I used to write poetry but for some reason I don't feel very poetic anymore, but I decided to put some of my past poetic works here also.
[December 1999] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
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AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (8)
A Night Of Love Making (Poetry) Just a poem. [35 words]
Conformity (Poetry) About the pressures that I feel toward conforming to society and its views. [102 words]
Fake Reality (Short Stories) Covers the thoughts and influences of a gold digger at the moment when she commits suicide. [1,034 words]
I Look Quickly Away (Poetry) A poem that I wrote when I first kissed my current boyfriend. [115 words]
Life's Course (Poetry) Just about the pressure of living. [260 words]
Plight, A Collection (Poetry) Plight - The description of how I lost the gift of poetry. [138 words] The Hunt - Anger and consequently the violence of a young mother at her husband for not living up to his responsibilities shows t... [379 words]
The Attack Of Love (Poetry) (For Kantrell Who Gave Me The Title) The experience of living and fulfilling the purpose of life - love. [88 words]
Through The Window (Short Stories) This story is about a nine year old girl who is being sexually abused. [1,211 words]
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My Unavoidable Hell
Erin D. Traynum
woe to those who believe in themselves-
who feel their Spirit-
who look deep inside for Righteousness.
ahead of them lies vengeance
at the hand of an Almighty force,
a jealousy that disobeys the seven sins
by living in His envy.
i am a victim of this misery and
will live in grief because
of the happiness that i attain.
the love that flows throughout my veins
will punish me with Joy's excruciating pain.
and i will sit and live-
enjoy the sun-
wait for death to end my suffering.
woe is me-
I will say smiling
and I kiss the face of Love.
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READER'S REVIEWS (3)
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"Read this over and over but I can't find any depth, only words. Your bio says you want only to live life free of conforming. Most of the people I've known who never wanted to conform to anything, lived boring lives, were unimaginative, rarely happy, and are broke, alone,or dead - or all three. Be careful what you wish for. " -- DK, Ohio.
"I've read other reviews by you and you seem to be the unhappy person that you are trying to portray me as. Maybe it's because you don't believe that you can be yourself in this world and because you are a puppet to society's ways. You need to re-evaluate the way you look at other people. From all of your reviews you seem to be very miserly, but if I'm wrong about you I apologize. And by the way, I'm young and full of life and only write because I like words. I am also very happy with my life and get along with just about everyone, so I do not fit within the bounds of your stereotypical non-conformist. If you need other postive examples why don't you do some reading about the Transcendentalist Movement." -- E.D. Traynum, Atlanta, GA.
"If you are such a happy person, why do you constantly write about your struggle against those who would have your conform to something you are opposed to? I find The same underlying, boring message in almost everything you've written. I'm not trying to be mean or overly critical. I'm just telling you the truth. Or is that being too much of a conformist for you? You might try writing about someone or something other than yourself. By the way, Jesus also threw merchants out of the temple for gambling. They were also non-conformists of their own time." -- D Koss.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2000 Erin D. Traynum |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
December 2000 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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