ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Hi! My name is Jasmine Batey, I was born in '94, so at the moment I'm 16, I enjoy writing poetry, lyrics and stories, I love listening to music, mainly rock and all of it's sub - genres, and i REALLY LOVE getting comments on story mania! so please leave feedback and I will update regularly! enjoy reading! [January 2011]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (31) Because You (Songs) um a song about love, when the person doesn't know that you like them [143 words] Before The Hero (Poetry) i don't know where to go with it after this [36 words] Don't Let Me Drown (Poetry) - [43 words] Every One Leaves (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes. [32 words] Every Things Alright (Poetry) - [110 words] God, If You're Up There... (Poetry) My prayer [39 words] Heaven... (Poetry) Another little poem about BOTHE suicide AND love. [140 words] I Love You Baby (Poetry) A small love poem [107 words] I Want You To See Me (Poetry) - [102 words] Is It Worth Being Alone? (Poetry) Again, a sneak peak into my Life [89 words] Jack The Ripper (Poetry) a small jokey poem, written for fun as a tongue-in-cheek thing. as the title says, It's about Jack the Ripper. [77 words] Just Open My Eyes (Poetry) - [135 words] Love Is A Despair (Poetry) - [92 words] My Release (Poetry) a small poem about cutting (as you probably guessed) I know some one cutting and thats what inspired it. [75 words] Nothings Wrong (Poetry) an inside view of me [13 words] Numb (Poetry) To a certain someone, you really hurt me. [43 words] One Of These Days (Poetry) I was dared to write a poem about a smile, I doubt that this is what she had in mind, but it IS a poem about a smile, so here is a poem, and i have 'Frankie' to thank for it. So thank you Frankie. [86 words] Pain. Betrayal. Hurt. Anger.... (Poetry) just a poem about how i feel sometimes... [29 words] Right Through Me (Poetry) - [161 words] Saving Grace (Songs) Love again -- funny, my songs are about love and my poetry death.... hmmmm [84 words] Take You Back Again (Poetry) - [119 words] The Cloud (Poetry) again, a challenge I accepted from Frankie, the beginning is a bit bodgy, (the first stanza) anyway, please leave advice and comments, and I hope you like! [121 words] The Devil Laughs (Poetry) - [85 words] The Nightmares (Why) (Poetry) - [61 words] The Only Casualty (Poetry) a small poem I wrote this morning -- haven't completed one about a smile yet but working on it!! -- It's not one of my best, it was a rush job so any feedback is not only welcome, but wanted. [59 words] The Rose - By Jasmine Batey (Poetry) A story of love, a rose, and in a way, a story about love. [62 words] The Screaming, The Anger, The Hurt And The Pain (Poetry) hope you enjoy and please comment -- not one of my best [108 words] To My Sister (Poetry) basically a letter to my sister that im not brave enoug to deliver to her myself. [200 words] When Summer Comes Again (Poetry) a small HAPPY poem :) [97 words] Why The Gun? (Poetry) Just a small poem [95 words] You Are The Beat (Poetry) This could also be transformed into a song...? About ome one famous -- see if you can guess who =P [84 words]
Ever Again. Jasmine P Batey
The anger I feel is unimaginable.
the hate I have is unbelieveable
The pain i feel is undeserved
and its all because of you.
the only thing sweeter than your kiss
was your blood dripping off my hands
and the only thing tastier than your lips
was the want to kill you again.
I'm a lover -
not a fighter.
but if you hurt me
I'll hurt you right back.
im just sorry.
because the one thing i cant ever do
is stab that knife in you.
ever, ever again.
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"hey there, pretty good, I would recommend rewording the last two bits, at least the last two lines of the third stanza and the last stanza is a bit confusing to me. anyway. pretty good :). good on ya" -- Chloe.
"I think the last stanza means that if the guy's dead she can't kill him again and get the satisfaction of thrusting a knife through a living body.However, check for punctuation errors like i, im, missing commas, capitalization deficiency, and replace periods with commas when applicable, or semi colons if you know how to use them." -- Michael J Williams, Redding, CA, US freakin' A.
"This was the shizzie! GOOD!" -- Kris.
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