ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
Hi everyone. I love to write about love, but occasionally dip into other subject matters, I write mainly lyrics but will rarely post them up here. I'm a younger writer and am looking forward to get some proper feedback on my poetry. Thanks- Misery [July 2009]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (7) I Want To Be A Porcelain Doll (Poetry) About being perfect and untouchable [30 words] Our Night (Poetry) It's a short love poem, Written quickly. Would love any feedback. [36 words] [Erotic] Passion, Desire (Poetry) A night of passion, desire and love. [60 words] Satisfied (Poetry) A bath of oils and lust [79 words] [Erotic] Song Of Desire (Poetry) love poem. [38 words] [Erotic] That Summer (Poetry) About a sad summer [138 words] The Sun (Creation) (Poetry) About nature and the sun. [73 words]
Bleeding Mess Misery
It's lifeless, dying, dead
The mess poured on the floor
How could you ever have missed it?
The hurt, the pain, the tears
You ask what that mess was
The lifeless, dying dead
Mess poured on the floor
It's what's left of my heart
READER'S REVIEWS (2) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"wow, very emotive, really good! I don't know what to say =] but you did leave out a comer on the second 'the lifeless, dying, dead' but this is really good!" -- Jasmine B, AUS.
"And you miss Jasmine, you spelled comma wrong :) Thankyou for your review" -- Misery, Author.
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