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TITLE (EDIT)
You Let Your Jealousy Overtake You |
DESCRIPTION
Dumb feelings thatare already gone from my soul.
[111 words] |
AUTHOR
Omar Longoria |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[November 2000] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (9)
And Then You Wouldn't Want It Any Other Way (Poetry) close your eyes. see the snake. one red eye and one green eye. 7 miles long. deadly. all the history of the world on it's scale. [69 words]
Don't Fall On My Living Roots (Poetry) I drank to much last night... my head. and then you call me. [109 words]
It Never Ends (Poetry) see i try, to look up to, to the sky, but my eyes burn! [117 words]
Leave It Alone (Poetry) What seems important now won't last forever. [67 words]
Make Sure Their Dead My Dear (Poetry) don't go no not over there [109 words]
Oh Baby (Poetry) - [115 words]
Screaming Wind Knows (Poetry) You ever feel like your falling into a dream within a dream? [72 words]
Stranger To Myself (Essays) “Look in the mirror. The face that pins you with its double gaze reveals a chastening secret.” [1,225 words]
We Care Carebears We Care! (Poetry) I have know idea where this came from. Goofy... but I like it. [75 words]
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You Let Your Jealousy Overtake You
Omar Longoria
Consider this friend.
Your jealousy became too much for me.
Words behind me, you back stabber you.
Oh but you have one thing.
You’re just so cool.
Wrong.
That’s your arrogance shining.
First came the lying.
Followed by the all to deadly sin envy.
Then came the river.
You became a Mr. “P.” “I.” “G.”
Oh but you stopped drinking the poison.
You think you better than us?
Now look at you.
Biggest fucking hypocrite of our time.
Why don’t you take your dick out of your mom’s ass,
just be yourself.
Well at least you found a little bitch.
But I know something that you don’t.
Horror.
You wanna know where you went wrong with me?
You let your jealousy overtake you.
It was sorta kinda funny at first.
Now it’s just sad.
Friend.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2000 Omar Longoria |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
November 2000 |
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