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TITLE (EDIT)
The 5-String |
DESCRIPTION
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[152 words] |
AUTHOR
Thomas Maddener |
ABOUT
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[October 2000] |
The 5-String
Thomas Maddener
It was so that the tobacco made sense,
that my blood was up and I crossed the street.
What is that gaze they give the camera for? What happens?
And then I see the quiet intersection, the brick resting in the dark,
hateful nieghbours asleep,
cross. The wood swings in my hand, I am still alive, and maybe... but no.
There is nobody home.
Grand is the border, the ghetto lies away stirring, and I'd love to hit the pipe, empty out a little, make 'em feel better, a good laugh for 'em, but these are just footsteps and it's but a half a block.
It's slight, but I'm now unlost and I open the door, and I can just hear it..."this guitar isn't mine and neither is anything else, let's rock....!"
And when the string snaps it shatters everything, for a millisecond, but I can still play the songs, and finally, it doesn't really make a difference.
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STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
October 2000 |
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