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Its a short poem i was doodling at home and someone said they liked it. Its really about me thinking about how people have let me down (to put it lightly) and why it happened. [99 words]
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Reasons For Happenings Elise Simmonds
Staring into oblivion. Once the place you put me in. but now i know i can come home and not be consumed by the dark.
Will the angels rain down another trap to fall into? And this time will they let it be, or will they twist and break the unbreakable.
Is it angels with reasons for sending sorrow? Or with intent to strengthen me? Is it Devils?
What is the reason for my existence? Does everything have to end?
Never again after a last chance shall i let them take me into darkness.
The red river ends.
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"i really like it, i think it would be a great song too!!! I was reading it and i made up a really god beat, im sything it now!!!" -- Alison Reed.
"Elise, no experience of life is wasted with God because He loves you so much. Trials are sent in love to strengthen us for helping others. Sometimes it is the devil but Jesus can work everything out for your good when you put your trust in him alone. Regarding angels, read Matthew 18 - they are there to protect us, not harm us. --Thankyou for sharing your thoughts with us. As the song goes 'I get knocked down, but I get up again'. Best wishes." -- ann gordon.
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