ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
I am a 22 year old film major at UCSC, I enjoy all forums of entertaining, poetry, hip-hop, music, acting, etc..., I am trying to get exposure to help with a foundation I have in the works, the Annabelle the Ant foundation, this foundation will help with disease research, rape prevention, and physical and mental abuse prevention. My favorite color is blue. [September 2000]
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (1) Annabelle The Ant (Children) An 80 line poem/children story about a little curious ant and her over protective mother, and the adventure she has, the struggle, and how she overcomes adversity and is reunited with her mother. [716 words] [Motivational]
The Muse John Thomas Barragan
If beauty had a name it would be yours. You are the woman I haven't met yet, and every girl I've ever seen. Shall I compare thee to a SUMMER's day or not even bother as it would do you no justice. You are the mother of my children, the keeper of my heart, and I see your smile on the faces of every woman that has walked the earth, is walking the earth, or who has yet to grace the earth with her pressence. You are the reason painters paint and sonnets are sung. My complete opposite, that completes me as if you were myself. I have not found you yet, though you have already found me, we had lunch last week, talked on the phone, passed by eachother on the street. Or if you haven't seen me yet in physical formthen you've held my hand in a dream like I have held yours. To be near you, to kiss and hug you. To be a virgin that has made love to you an infinite ammount of times. To have only really kissed three women yet have shown the passion that gave Cassanova his fame. Like the truth you are out there. So I write you these words and hope you read them again.
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"I'd hate to burst your cute lil' bubble and all, because I appreciate the gender flattery, but we women are not all THAT great. Some women are just... wrong. And ugly. But, if someone wrote that for ME, I'd blush like a merry schoolgirl and probably marry him without another single thought in my lil' blonde head. Damn stereotype! But I like your high view of women a lot, and it shows times HAVE changed." -- Kimberly De Liz.
"I thought that the poem made little if no sense. It did nothing but remind me of a commercial. Good thought though. The only thing that ruined it for me was the way he talked about the girl as if he didn't know her at first then like he knew her. If the author had kept it the same thoughout then it might have made more sense to me." -- Andy Howard, Normal, Illinios, USA.
"Well done! The contradiction used is a very effective tool!" -- Camryn Chase, NS, Canada.
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