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It's about being with the one you really love and just being there for eachother is all that matters as long as you love eachother. [166 words]
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Just The Two Of Us Ranay Mueller
sitting in your arms
in your warm embrace
lights are turned low
in front of the fire place.
nobody around
just me and you
got anything in mind?
anything you want to do?
I look into your eyes
you look into mine
we lean in
and our lips entwine.
kissing for awhile
your hand goes through my hair
after the kiss stops
we both just stare.
you take my hand
and kiss the top
there's no way
of making this stop.
you kiss my lips
and then my neck
sweet little kisses
not just tiny pecks.
we go on and on
like this all night
adding in a little more
to make it just right.
we kiss and play
ending up on the floor
I can tell
you want a little more.
your shirt comes off
i give you a kiss
on your neck
and then onto your chest.
we snuggle and cuddle
under the moon light
nothing else in the world
could feel so right.
READER'S REVIEWS (3) DISCLAIMER: STORYMANIA DOES NOT PROVIDE AND IS NOT RESPONSIBLE FOR REVIEWS. ALL REVIEWS ARE PROVIDED BY NON-ASSOCIATED VISITORS, REGARDLESS OF THE WAY THEY CALL THEMSELVES.
"The only advice I could give you is to make this piece of writing into a poem. I really enjoyed reading this; it was so sweet. The writing made me feel very happy. Great job." -- Jessica Parise, Normal, IL, USA.
"This poem is well written but it seems to give the idealistic view of a perfect relationship. It gives the reader the thought that this is how it should be and how perfect you can feel knowing someone is there with you. This definitely gives off the warm and close feeling." -- Gina Parise, Normal, IL, USA.
"great,but i agree with jessica.make it into a poem,it'd be explosive1" -- kennedy, lagos, nigeria.
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