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TITLE (EDIT)
Singapore Excution Of Mr. Nguyen
DESCRIPTION
Since last week, l came across the excution news on the Australian Mr. Nguyen. l am shocked at the way this young mans life is going to end because of a mistake he made. We all make mistakes, we all get blamed for something or another But l think the Singapore Government should grant Mr. Nguyen,life in prisonment and not take his life.
[149 words]
TITLE KEYWORD
Humor
AUTHOR
Amarjit Bhambra
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
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[June 2007]
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Singapore Excution Of Mr. Nguyen
Amarjit Bhambra


xecutions! Going on in our day and age,
The retired hangman to get full wage,
l think it’s a rage, and have a few
days left,
before the rope pulls,
Tightly around his neck,
How can the World measure Mr. Nguyen life?
With a few ounces of drugs.

Everybody running around left right and centre,
But the Singapore Government is stubborn,
As the mule who was carrying the drugs.
Two days left now,
And only a miracle can save him.

When in his mother’s womb, he shared with
His other twin,
For him now, life is, not a win,
For the drug crime, in Singapore
is but a sin,
How can the other half of the twin,
Carry on living,
With his mother, whose heart is already
broken,
Her sons, life to be shattered into
million pieces.

l pray, to God to forgive him for his sins,
I pray to God to forgive the hangman
who l think is also causing sin,
I pray to God for a Miracle for
Mr. Nguyen.

 

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"Well it is good to see that someone has taken notice of this issue. I am an Austrailan and i suppose that we all had expected that he would have gotten off, it is however a great malfeasance that this has happened, however, there is also the other side to look at, how many people would have died indiectly from this drug that he has tried to bring into my country. However i guess i shouldn't pass judgement on a situation that i haven't lived through. Great poem anyway. Peace." -- Hugh.
"I am a New Zealander and I feel that capital punishment is totally barbaric. There is no excuse for it! It doesn't matter what the condemned person had done, or been convicted of. An excellent poem, but it shouldn't be categorised as humour. " -- Debbie Kean, Auckland , New Zealand.
"DEAR HUGH Thank for your comments, I speak from the heart - when l also read that the hang man was a Darshan Singh - ( i was totally disgusted with his job- he has tarnished our religion because the name Singh is my religion. We do not preach Barbaric, brutal, cruel degrading and inhuman acts. we preach equality, brotherhood justice and truth. Hence why particulary came interested in this topic. If you have time you are welcome to read a poem l have written called the sikh way of life. which was written on the type of people we really are - we are NO WAY LIKE DARSHAN SINGH the man who carried out over 4OO hangings in a Barbaric way." -- Amarjit Bhambra, Hayes, England.
"Dear Debbie, thank for the time for reading. I think this punishment was a harsh, Mr. Nguyen did not murder anyone - therefore he should have instead be given a chance to live. God resides in every heart. Mr. Nguyen had found God, he was praying the rosery before he died. The hangman killed him - he killed the God inside Mr. Nguyen. I am sure the Singapore's Government could have given him life sentence in stead and given his life a chance maybe to a job to clean the prison or made Mr. Nguyen a chance to study and showed the World - that Singapore stopped the hanging and changed to a Better Govenment by also stopping the hanging and showing the World that a crooked man and be made striaght. I think that Singapore is very narrow minded. I wouldn't dream of sending my family to Singapore (Just incase some one trys to put a small pack in my laggage.) can you just imagine it?" -- Amarjit Bhambra, Hayes, England.
"Mate (Debbie), i WASN'T trying to say that the judgement was deserving or that it should be allowed, i was simply trying to pose a different side of perception. Have you ever lost anyone to heroin, i am sure that if you spoke to a parent who had lost a child to such a disgusting... drug then you could perhaps have a different perception. Mate, did you know that the amount of heroin he was carrying would have equated to between $600,000 and 1 million on the streets, his brother needed only $40 000 for his debt, and dont tell me he would have donated the rest to charity. BUT, just so you know, i believe life to be sacred and the taking of it obscene, and that everyone deserves a second if not 3rd chance with most things. And Amarjit i am familiar with the beliefs of your people and i totally understand what you are and are not. Once again thank you for writing this poem and please continue to post. Peace." -- Hugh.
"hmmm... good poem. i loved it, but i have to disagree on the not killing him part. its meant to be a deterrant to let other people know that they shouldnt do it. besides, he knew the consequences." -- singapore girl.
"To Singapore girl, Whatever the consequences - l personally have my own opionion.i do not agree that doing drugs are a good thing because l have children of my own - just think that what if this was my child. Believe you me - my children do not and are not aware of what goes on in the World - and l think that maybe Nguyen was not aware of the consequences and might have been used as a guinea pig or a mule and not aware." -- Amy, Hayes, England.
"Today, A Heathrow British Prisoner was released from Pakistan, (he says that his thoughts are with the other prisoner in Jail there) Britain has helped with his release whereas N.Z did try to help the release of Nguyen was he had to face the Death sentence. Any comments. Some Priminsters Listen and some don't." -- Amy, london, UK.

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