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TITLE (EDIT)
The Burden Of Sight |
DESCRIPTION
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[161 words] |
AUTHOR
Rhiannon Price |
ABOUT
THE AUTHOR
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[July 2004] |
AUTHOR'S E-MAIL ADDRESS
[email protected] |
AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (4)
Deceptive (Poetry) - [133 words]
Fear In The Darkness (Poetry) - [91 words]
Living On The Outside (Poetry) - [111 words]
Tainted Poppy (Poetry) - [104 words]
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The Burden Of Sight
Rhiannon Price
I hear them all around me taunting me ready to pounce at any time
A noise, my gun lifts higher, the sweat cold, yet refreshing running down my face
Turning here turning there. I know they're there. I sense them
I�m vulnerable; weak my legs feel that they could cave in at any moment
I turn to find a long tube pointing at my head my eyes glazed with fear
Even if I wanted to attempt to run, I don�t think I could have, my legs would not move I�m paralysed with fear
I lift my eyes to his, his filled with hatred, mine with despair.
A click, my last vision; of abhorrence and destruction.
Abhorrence and destruction at every turn.
I to the ground, dead bodies covering me, smothering me
I watched the dark, scarlet blood trickle from me like water from a tap.
Closing my eyes I knew they would never open again,
Hatred and desolation no longer in my sights, just my thoughts but only for a few moments more.
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"this poem is very good! Your style is wonderful...I like have you use each word without waste...it is the key to good poetry!" -- e. rocco caldwell.
"Very interesting... The darkness and imagery is overwhelming. Keep it up." -- ryan severud.
"Probably the best title out of all 3 poems because unlike the commonly held opinion of sight being a gift you've perceived it as a burden, its very intriguing." -- Camilla.J.Way.
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COPYRIGHT NOTICE
© 2004 Rhiannon Price |
STORYMANIA PUBLICATION DATE
July 2004 |
NUMBER OF TIMES TITLE VIEWED
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