Tired Of You by August Nyghts - [157 words]
There… by August Nyghts - [46 words]
Somethings by August Nyghts - [76 words]
Racing by August Nyghts - [185 words]
In Soulitude by August Nyghts - [205 words]
In My Garden by August Nyghts - [183 words]
Random Acts by Peter Rivendell Written by writing lines at random and then organising them into a more "organic" kind of flow - an... [204 words]
Your Gonna Miss Me by Ralph R Martinez - [136 words]
Without Her Pretty Face by Ralph R Martinez - [93 words]
Who Is My Mom? by L A Winterburn A soppy poem I wrote for my mom on her birthday. [65 words]
White Washed Walls, A Collection by Pearl S Acollection of verse: White Washed Walls: Something that came to me while I w... [707 words]
Whispers On The Wind by Judith Goff Something ghostly this way comes... [92 words]
Weep by Kendra Johnson A poem that personifys emotions. [115 words]
Unconciously Wanting by Alberto Pupo Wanting unconciously to reveal.. [108 words]
To My Muse by Alberto Pupo An ode to her. [118 words]
To Enlighten by Alberto Pupo A most noble quest to stroke the ego. [95 words]
Time For Goodnight by David W Ledger A poem I wrote as a lullabye for my children. [122 words]
This Man Of Mine by Judith Goff - [95 words]
The Two Evils by Stuart Eric Longridge There is something wrong with the law,criminals protecting criminals. [119 words]
The Flood by Stuart Eric Longridge A bit wet. [220 words]
Tardy by Flipanmc About being late in high school. Boy, can you tell I was a good student? Actually this is about my friend... [79 words]
Super Bowl High by Judith Goff I've been a Bucs fan from the first inauspicious fumbling in the dark to tonight's awesome Supe... [109 words]
Summer Squeeze by August Nyghts Title says it all. [90 words]
Suicide by M Q Walters Standing on the edge. [137 words]
Standing On The Edge Of Depression by R Bennett Okerstrom Self-worth, self-pity and self-confidence. [137 words]
Spoon by Tessa This poem is for Jonathan- as requested (demanded?! J/K). My promise has been kept. This came out of a co... [45 words]
Speaking Of Which by Alberto Pupo To speak. [96 words]
Sleep Wars by Flipanmc I am and always will be a night owl. This is about (not) getting up for school. I wrote it back in h... [92 words]
Slave by Rae You decide who/what it's about... [58 words]
Scarecrow by David B Doc Byron A poem about a scarecrow. What else can I say? [80 words]
Soon by L A Winterburn A love poem. [61 words]
Primal by Judith Goff - [26 words]
Opening Up by Peter Rivendell Am I no longer enjoying my job...? [198 words]
Mind Trap by Stuart Eric Longridge - [93 words]
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Memories Of Her by Alberto Pupo Only a memory. [102 words]
Makes No Difference by Pearl S Not the Sum 41 song. [120 words]
Love Drug by Stuart Eric Longridge Transforming times. [115 words]
Jailed In Her Heart by Ralph R Martinez A poem about seeing a girl in a room. [81 words]
Iraq Attack Part 2 by Stuart Eric Longridge A better explanation of events. [346 words]
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Emergence Of The Optimist by Alberto Pupo Emerging from the ashes of the Pessimist. [160 words]
Dreamscape: The Thirst by R Bennett Okerstrom It even happens in your dreams. [77 words]
Dream State by Stuart Eric Longridge Reflection. [258 words]
Detroit Begging by Tessa Ok - I was pretty annoyed this morning that I was asked for some change by this panhandler who ... [269 words]
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Deliberate Intentions In The 4th Dimension by Stuart Eric Longridge Create your own reality. [244 words]
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Craving by Tessa I wrote this in about 5 minutes and it probably shows- but I was craving and had to write it out of my ... [34 words]
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Ambiguous Art by Alberto Pupo Delve deeper to find meaning perhaps... [83 words]
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I couldn't get this Devil (a poet, no less!) out of my thoughts any other way but to write him out... I'm wondering if the repetitive whispering works in this poem? Let me know. It sounds good without all the repetitive whispering too... I'll change it according to review...
Haven't written in awhile, using this to express feelings and emotions on... hold. And for spur of the moments thoughts too.
Note: Most of my writing is metaphorical!
|AUTHOR'S OTHER TITLES (27)
Anguish (Poetry) Found this poem recently. Wrote it in high school. My, was I a sad, sad girl. I remember those depressed days of blasting NIN while I contemplated death. Glad I'm over it. [93 words]
Betrayed (Poetry) Friendship- some people don't know the meaning. Anyway- this one probably needs more work too, but ah well~ I'm mad and had to write it out... suggestions welcome. [101 words]
Contemplating (Poetry) Wrote this after I wrote Illumination when the Damn Devil was still hunting me... not sure if it's done, but ah, well... [81 words]
Craving (Poetry) I wrote this in about 5 minutes and it probably shows- but I was craving and had to write it out of my system. [34 words] [Erotic]
Detroit Begging (Poetry) Ok - I was pretty annoyed this morning that I was asked for some change by this panhandler who would not give up. When I said no, he asked me to check my coat, or maybe go back to my car to see if the... [269 words]
Exhausted (Poetry) Rainy days... are sometimes downright depressing. Where is the sunshine?!?! This is what came out of one of those sucky days... I think it needs work, suggestions are welcomed. [45 words]
Exorcism (Poetry) For The Devil- I'm going back into the Light. I cannot stay in the dark- eternal damnation is just not my thing. [98 words]
For The Devil (Poetry) - [118 words]
Furious (Poetry) Still so angry at an ex-boyfriend that turned psycho stalker on me. He put me through hell, caused me to have to move, and made me guarded and distrustful of all men. I saw him this weekend and sparke... [151 words]
Hangover (Poetry) This is for Andrea... (And maybe Wade too, since he supplied most of our drinks!) For our night of craziness at 5th Avenue and Sevin involving kissing girls (not by me!), getting kicked off of the sta... [139 words] [Humor]
Haunted (Poetry) And still he whispers... as I try to hang on. Temptation... can sometimes get the best of you... but I'm trying not to give in. [118 words]
His Shirt (Poetry) Funny how a piece of clothing can stir up moments in time... [102 words]
Illumination (Poetry) Hmmm... Salvation was already taken... Ah, well... [119 words]
Into The Darkness (Poetry) For The Devil. Thank you for corrupting my soul in the sweetest, slowest, and most gentle way possible. Damn you. =P [229 words]
Jaded Eyes (Poetry) - [54 words] [Relationships]
My Addiction (Poetry) I find myself addicted... [169 words]
Prayer (Poetry) Trying to save myself... [195 words]
Run Away (Poetry) I'm restless and have this insane need to get away from everyone and everything... maybe I just need a vacation? Anyway, I was just trying to write it out of my system. [87 words]
Spoon (Poetry) This poem is for Jonathan- as requested (demanded?! J/K). My promise has been kept. This came out of a conversation on cuddling and how great cuddling is... and then I guess the Devil got in my head a... [45 words] [Erotic]
Stolen Kiss (Poetry) Thinking about this and reliving a nice, stolen moment... [214 words]
Submerge (Poetry) Started in October 2003 and decided to work on it again. Not much of a free verser... Changed the name from Drawn to Drown (not available, so changed to Submerge), makes more sense with the new lines.... [37 words]
Suffocated (Poetry) Writing things out as usual... [72 words] [Relationships]
Tease (Poetry) I was recently told that I'm a tease- I guess I kind of am because I've stayed single and abstinent for over a year now. But, isn't teasing the funnest part? ;) This was just something I had fun with.... [216 words]
Unbound (Poetry) This is pretty short, but I don't know, it seems to say everything for me. This is for Jon. [16 words]
Waste (Poetry) Saw a picture and got mad again. Hate having him in my thoughts, so, I tried to write him out. Shall I replace "goodness" with kindness, integrity or decency? Lemme' know, I'll change it according to ... [20 words]
Welcome (Poetry) (Reposted) My muse endeavored to inspire... Jonathan, this is for you. Don't forget to leave your door unlocked. Welcome because you always say I am. Welcome because you won't accept my thanks. [98 words] [Erotic]
Window (Poetry) Broken hearts... Seems to be what's most written about. Found this last night. Written 01/28/96 after a heartbreaking fight at 6am in the morning. I watched my first true love sit in his car and cry a... [140 words]
The Devil knows my name
Softly of love
Offers me ecstasy, eternal release
Seduces me with words, dark poetry
Causes aches, burning desire
Entices, arouses, crafting a fire
For my soul, for my heart
Of weakness, futile struggles
Entranced with his spells
Words like gentle kisses upon my neck
Verses sensually caressing
Lyrics burning, igniting my thirst
Rhymes awaken my need
Beckons me to come undone
Inviting to darkness
Turn from the light
I am now his
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"I like it as it is but maybe you want to put another one up without. " -- Just A Guy.
"I was thinking the same... but I wonder if it will change the effect I was trying to get across of these feelings being "always on my mind"?!?!" -- Tessa.
"Well Tessa, if you have them both up people will tell what they think. Mostly good folks around here it seems." -- JAG.
"I thing one "He whispers" per line, rather than two. Doesn't change the seduction of it, but offers less repetition. Maybe "He whispers, whispers". I like it though." -- Sylvia.
"Thanks for the suggestion Sylvia! I think it flows better now!" -- Tessa.
"Any time. I like it better too. Glad I was able to help." -- Sylvia.
"I liked this a lot! Didnt see it in its original form, but I like it like this. I like the idea of someone whispering to your subconscience ;)" -- Michelle.
"Nice work again Tessa. You must have a good source of inspiration. I typically write without specific inspiration these days, but there are enough dark thoughts in my head to write for a very long time. Thanks for the reviews!" -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"My inspiration has got my creative juices flowing... " -- Tessa.
"I like these kind of whispers! Good stuff. By the way, if you liked my story, ''Pulp Affliction,'' check out my new one, ''Podunk.'' Doc" -- david ''doc'' byron, weirdsville, usa, ind.
"very sensual, i like it." -- August.
"i like it.its better then my peoms. i think my peoms are weird. lol but i guess its just cuz i made them. but yours are good mine are just about my life and depressen." -- angel tears, oklahoma, oklahoma city, USA.
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