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Jaded Time Brandon Cummins
convictions...
decisions...
premonitions...
another world beyond my small glass cage...
i sit in awe as i further gaze...
trivial as it may seem...
what is there past my window that only minds may dream...
as i tumble down the rabbit hole...
all is lost but my little soul...
floating amongst the deep blue clouds...
i fly within the whitest skies
confused...
diffused...
reused...
my shell is cracking...
i'm breaking through...
the lights all seem blinding...
but that's just the shine that is you.
Get out..
Come Back In..
You're coming but always leaving...
Stay Back..
But not that far..
It's time to see that it's time to see
when the time runs out, what will we see.
you & me.
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"I liked this one the best of all i've read so far. my favorite part was the last few lines...the "stay back but not that far" part. reminds me of how i handle stuff often times." -- Stephanie.
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