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Stumble Christy Mack
Could you fill the empty spaces,
Could you change these staring faces,
Could you stop and watch for a little while,
Could you ever feel the way I feel.
I don't think you could,
I don't think you're strong,
You couldn't stand to see yourself,
You'll stumble, Before you fall.
Could you be there when I need you,
Could you see all the way through,
Could you show me what the shadow is,
Could you really feel the bliss.
I don't think you could,
I don't think you're strong,
You would scream so loud,
Trapped inside your walls,
And no one is listening.
Could you see through me,
Could you stay right here (with me),
Could you taste the fear in my eyes,
Could you hear the glare inside your lies.
I don't think you could,
I don't think your strong,
You cannot bear to watch yourself,
Clinging to your walls.
I don't think I could.
I don't think I'm strong.
I can't breathe it anymore.
And it's been this way for so long.
Do you like it this way?
Is this the way you play?
Everyone can see it burning,
But no one can feel the pain.
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"Yes Christy I will fill the empty spaces in your life. I will voyage to Baltimore and sweep you off your feet! By the way still no sign of No Name Rogers, much as I had assumed. Strangely enough no sign of Bennett Sims either (not that I mind). I've also posted that contest I've been longing to do for several months, because Tyna Aberdeen insisted I do it before leaving the board. It's blatantly labeled Fiction Contest. Yours truly, " -- AC Keane.
"Awsome poem Christy, you have such an awsome talent, never stop writeing babe." -- Christina.
"Lies lead to excellent pieces of work." -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"Excellent work indeed! You are a great writer Christy! " -- JM.
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