Infidelity by R Bennett Okerstrom When a husband ignores his wife, a marriage will crumble and the wife will stray... [98 words]
Worm´S Feeling by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Bizarre poem. [199 words]
Laid Heavy In The Suicide Chair by Olef Ransom Saulles - [35 words]
Word Count; An Excerpt - Illusions, Shimmer, Palestine by J Colleen Deep inside, we all long for something so intangible tha... [357 words]
Bosstwon, Massojoos-Hits. by Olef Ransom Saulles My first chapbook. Looking for a publisher. [1,163 words]
Sorry by T.C. Beto - [70 words]
Push Me Away by Vianne-Marie Fortier This is about some, well actually, a lot of heartach someone is going through. And, she can't brea... [126 words]
Paper Boat by Vianne-Marie Fortier I wrote this poem after getting inspiration from the Winkin, Blinkin, and Nod story. Enjoy. :D [47 words]
Paint A Sky Gray by Vianne-Marie Fortier This is about someone who's lost a love, and he/she wants someone to understand how it is. [136 words]
November Sun by Vianne-Marie Fortier This poem is about a girl falling in love with a poet, after she finds inspiration in him. [250 words]
Nothing Known; The Jester's Fancy; Feather by Sean Rich Nothing known... an insight gained from watching my boy. Jester's F... [144 words]
Mother by Ashley Burdett A poem about how a mother looks at her child before it is born. [175 words]
Missed by R. D. Partee Boy meets girl, boy falls for girl, girl moves on to someone who doesn't write for free, boy writes poem... [108 words]
Denise by Rita A. Wheeler A rememberance poem written for my cousin who was killed by her ex-boyfriend. [59 words]
By God by Vianne-Marie Fortier This is about someone who's really annoyed with society. [80 words]
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Angel by Ashley Burdett A poem about a breakup and heartache caused because a guy felt he was not good enough for his girlfriend. [327 words]
Acrósticas by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Poemas acrósticos. [181 words]
Wishful Thinking by J P Just the way everybody probably feels sometimes. [20 words]
Winds Of Change by Kishore Daswani Well it is for you to decide... [42 words]
Why by J P More teenage angst. [13 words]
Who Are You? by N.V. Matthews This poem is about when you think you know someone but you really don't. [207 words]
Wherein Dwells My Love Of Yore by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Mournful poem. [94 words]
Where Silence Is by Jane Byron - [76 words]
What Makes Me Frown! by Peter De Dee Feelings of the so called ELITE? OF this world. [106 words]
Up Late by Shannon Bee Wilson This is a poem about my life. I seem to be functioning more and more during the wee hours. It reflects... [49 words]
Unconditional by J P Just that feeling when you're blinded by love when you have a crush but the feeling's not returne... [10 words]
True by J P About how people judge each other on appearance instead of what's inside. [19 words]
To The Lady I Loved by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Mourning poem. [113 words]
To Normandy by Ashley Burdett This is a poem to immortalize the D-Day seize at Normandy. [1,173 words]
Tidal Purgatory by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Mourning poem. [119 words]
Thought by J P About how nothing exciting happens or something like that. [22 words]
The Hermit by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Mystical poem. [127 words]
Self Doubt! by Peter De Dee A tormented mind of mixed understanding, and pain. [73 words]
Scales Of Fate by Kishore Daswani Again.... for you to decide. [51 words]
Sacrifices by Jeanette Lero - [123 words]
Pals! by Peter De Dee Childhood friendships. [72 words]
On Being Invisible by Nitro Has anyone ever really heard what you have to say? If they did, would they care? [354 words]
My Vaulted Love by Fermin Moreno Gonzalez Gloomy poem. [182 words]
Mother Earth! by Peter De Dee Will we ever learn it doesn't belong to us. [74 words]
Lost Remorse by Alex Wellington The poem itself is an expression of the hopelessness of life in this day and age and a loging for ... [26 words]
Letters From Terrestre by Jane Byron hm. [332 words]
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Innes by J P Just about having a crush. [103 words]
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I Am My Own Greatest Enemy. by Olef Ransom Saulles - [16 words]
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Gentleness! by Peter De Dee To learn, To teach! [86 words]
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Just Be My Friend by Susan T Fisher Learning to be "just" a friend. [103 words]
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Defeated by Rita A. Wheeler - [56 words]
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Over The Pass And Home by R. D. Partee A love affair between a man and his place in the world. [68 words]
King Arthur by Ashley Burdett There is a story often told by the natives in Dover, England. This is a retelling of that story. In... [1,512 words]
High Haiku by Carl It's a haiku about me, Carl. [15 words]
Herod's Christmas List by Glyn Norman As I was walking one day, the stunning and horrific thought hit me that what Herod wante... [207 words]
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Dismay by Sarah Levine Sahara It's about my school...won an award for most oppressive school in America [133 words]
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Lee And Katers by Sarah Levine Sahara Just a poem about a lovely day... [89 words]
I Want Burning by Lissa N Metz-Gomez - [62 words]
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Carrier Waves by Richard Lynch - [584 words]
Aloness by James S McClinton About a person who spent most of his life alone. [102 words]
The Story Of The Ages Is Under The Still Limelight by Mary Jo Javier - [100 words]
The Poet by Robert M Hensel - [161 words]
The Old-Fashioned Nature Of Conflict by Mary Jo Javier - [120 words]
Romeo And Juliet by Ashley Burdett Love is unexplainable especially when it happens between two people who truly deserve it. [155 words]
My Love In My Dreams by Ghulam Mujtaba, Muji Shaikh My love comes in my dreams Iike a model showing her beauty I love her very much In real... [90 words]
Kite by Ashley Burdett Does anyone know who truly calls us when they say our name? This is a perfect example. [96 words]
Infatuation by Ashley Burdett This is a poem about how much you can love someone and how it can makes you feel. [162 words]
Gossip by Christy Mack Deceitful people. [31 words]
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Church by Ashley Burdett A poem about the differences of the people you see in church each day. [241 words]
And That's The Going by Jennifer Marie Hendy To a "true" friend. [76 words]
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An echoing sadness perched on the rim of oblivion.
I'm going to drop some free-style right...now.
Added 5/9/01 - Someone asked me what the "Brass ring" means. In early amusement parks (Think Atlantic City, here) you could ride Merry-go-rounds and try to grab brass rings from a pole to win free rides. My comparison is winning a free ride on a merry-go-round to finding purpose in life. The past makes what we do and who we are insignificant. The "Nothingness" represents the vastness of time, space and history. 99.9% of us on this spinning orb are non-factors in what actually happens, and our only legacy will be the small granite or marble gravestone that bears our names, but not our stories.
The feeling I wanted to evoke from the piece is a person's perceived insignificance to the world and the other people in it. This person bumps into a man on the street, and is tormented by the idea that in 20 seconds the stranger will have forgotten him.
We learn history, but do not become history.
Enter The Gregor
I enjoy writing, but don't consider myself serious enough to keep my thoughts in a book. Anyway, life changes, and so does art. I'm 25 and live in Omaha, NE. I'm really a cheerful, happy person, although my writing would cause most doctors to prescribe medication. I find it easier to write about pain and dementia because more people in this world can identify with that.
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*Edible Universe* (A free-style poem by N Gregor)
My back to the world and their eyes blind to me.
I scream but my voice is lost in the ripples of nothingness.
See but not seen, hear but not heard.
Surrounded by emptiness
Walking the path to oblivion.
The world is a revolving wheel of misery,
The brass ring forever beyond my grasp.
I walk the path
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""Nothingness" is such a vast concept. You used good visual imagery. Keep writing." -- J. Nabity, Omaha, NE, USA.
"what the heck does this mean? where is nothingness? your edible universe makes me hungry. tell me about the brass ring, too vague." -- Mr. E-man, your town, anywhere, usa.
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