Another Face Poem
What we choose to remember will form the person we are in life. Remember the negative and be miserable or try to enjoy what little time we have and file it under the good times
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Another Face Poem
The back of your face
Not a nice place
Pale and distant wonders caress a lifetime of memories
Divulgent dreams that berate a lifeless reality
Meaninless puzzlements time wasted some unknown sacrifices
Break the basement, where you've stored your time
And this is disease
Your life has left your mind at unease
The photos you've taken
Is what leaves you shaken
And all thats left is more time
Should you dwell
Or go outside
Enjoy your day
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"This really does suck lacks talent" -- John, Chicago, USA, IL.
"Thank you "John" for your constructive critism. I'll be sure to throw some of your valid pointers in my next poem and use your skilled assesment to make my work better. I'll be sure to throw in some smaller words that your caveman intellect may be able to decipher. Hey Gill, my name is John too!" -- Lj.
"Who? Get a Life Kid.." -- John, USA.
"Click.." -- Luke, USA.
"Thanks again retard" -- Lj.
"This is your last warning before you are in court." -- Patrick, Chicago, USA.
"Hey fuck you "Patrick"" -- Lj.
"Luke, John, Patrick and Matt...All the same retard. Ok got it" -- Lj.
"You will be served monday morning." -- Patrick, USA.
"Hey LJ were served Monday morning? lmao!!!" -- me.
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