Caught (1)
Jack Hunter

 

                                                   

                                  CHAPTER ONE
  
 " Oh yes , lets do it right now , no ones here. ", John said to Tonya . John and Tonya were currently in an old 88 blue Chevy pickup truck. Not the most romantic thing but it was good enough for them.

     " I don’t know if this is how I want to do it", Tonya said to him as she taunted him by pulling at her plaid Daisy Duke that was twisted in a knot.

  " You like teasing me don’t you "

  " Would you rather me make it easier for you? "

  “Not really , I love the suspense , baby. "

  John and Tonya had been going steady for quite sometime, infact they were high school sweethearts. They were lovers from the beginning, even though they had never gone all the way with each other. Which was the funny thing, they always acted so seductive to each other.

  “I got the perfect song for this", she said as she reached into her purse and grabbed her Ipod. The pulled the chord that connected the Ipod to the stereo system out of the glove box. She looked down and turns it on by pressing the Menu button. John saw the Ipod light up and turn on.

  “What are you going to play?” John said in a seductive tone. She pressed play.

  She turned the I-pod to John.

  “Buttons, by the Pussycat Dolls .... Nice Choice. “, He smiled.

 Tonya leaned over to John and started to kiss his lips. With every taste of her lips a just thought about her in more positions than one inside of his head. John loved her with all his heart and he has always been in love with her from the first time he saw her. The reaction was the same for Tonya.

  She was a beautiful red head, with a body that would make any normal man faint at the sight. She was one of those girls that you would meet and never ever forget about for days and sometimes for even months. She was about 5 '4 and came up to Johns chest.

   “Are you sure you can handle this? “ She asked John as she backed up and started to undo the knot in her shirt. She started to unbutton the little buttons on her plaid shirt. She was sitting in the passenger seat turned towards John, her back against the window. She just looked at John with the most seductive eyes that any woman could look at a man. She was stripping for John. Teasing and taunting him was one of her flawless games. Her shirt fell off, she began to take off her shoes, and then her daisy dukes.

  “Your turn.....” She said charmingly.

  John began to take off his blue plaid shirt, Infect he was in such a hurry, He just ripped it off with one pull. John wasn’t the best in shape but that didn’t matter to Tonya. John was the guy that you just fell in love with regardless if he had the six pack abs and the physic of God.

  “I want you so bad right now. Damn these pants! “, He screamed out. She laughed.

 “Do you want me to help you with that? “ She asked.

 "Why yes infact I would like you to help me with this predicament."

   She leaned over revealing her backside. John looked over and saw that she was not wearing any panties of any sort. Thoughts quickly ran through his head. She unzipped his pants and began to pull them off of him.

  “I like, I do like." She said as she stared down at his crotch area. She rose back up and sat against the window.

  “How are we going to do this? Do you have protection?” She asked.

  “Of course I do", He leaned down to his glove compartment and pulled out a box of Trojan condoms.

  He leaned up against her and began to kiss her bare shoulders; he made his way up to her neck. Kissing every freckle and every little area all around. She grabbed the back of his hair and raised his head towards hers. They began to kiss.

   With a loud shutter and Eight inch pronged blade broke through the window right behind Tonya. The blade thrust straight through the back of Tonya’s head and out the back of John’s kneck. The blade killed Tonya instantly. John leaned against Tonya trying to scream as the blade was still lodged inside his throat. He screamed but no sound came out. He saw a glimpse of the figure that had done this. Then he passed out in pain and died.

     

                                            CHAPTER TWO



     Standing at the grave site of the two friends, Lana grew up with. Now, faced with pain and torment inside her heart.

    Lana was a sweet and innocent girl who was always loved by anyone. Tonya and John were her closest friends. Infact they had just left her party when they were murdered, or at least that’s what the police said.

She had received the call shortly after going to bed. That was one of the most difficult situations in her life that she had to face. She kept thinking who would do a thing like this.

  “You ok honey?” Lana’s mother said as she put her hands on her shoulders.

  “No mom, I’m not ok. These are my fucking best friends. What do you want me to say, I’m not fucking ok!"

  “Calm down dear, its ok ...” Her mother replied as Lana fell to her knees crying. Lana’s mother caught her before she fell to the ground.

“It’s going to be ok, I’m here for you. You know that. This was freak accident. "

“Oh really a freak accident, that’s it? They were murdered mom, fucking murdered. ", Lana said crying loudly.

  The other mourners looked at her and just sobbed with her. It was a difficult day. John and Tonya were favorites among the community. John was soon to be joining the service to fight for his country. Tonya was an about to get her Bachelors Degree. The whole town new that they were soon to be married, everyone saw their love for each other all around.

   “Let’s go home honey.” Her mom said picking her up .

  “They were supposed to get married ya know.” Lana said as she starred out the window.

  “I went with John to pick out the ring, Mom, it was beautiful. He needed an extra $1000 to get it, so I helped him out."

  “That was sweet of you dear.” Her mom responded.

  “But now she won’t even get to see it or anything."

  Lana started thinking about when they were younger.

                              6 Years Earlier

    Lana was the new girl in school. She transferred to their high school at age sixteen due to some disagreements with some of her previous teachers at her other school. She remembers it like it was yesterday. She was sitting at a lunch table all the way in the back of the cafeteria. She was wearing a blue skirt and a red spaghetti top. She wanted to make a good impression on everyone, but all she got was shrugs and bad looks. Lana was a beautiful girl, the type of beauty that would piss any blonde bombshell off. She didn’t have to do much with her looks; she had the natural beauty that models longed to have.

   Tonya walked up and sat besides her.

“So your the new girl everyone is talking about huh? “ She said laughing.

“I guess, I feel so out of place here for some reason.” She replied.

“Don’t feel bad, it’s normal, most of the girls here are sluts and they are jealous they don’t have a killer body like yours. I’m Tonya.” She said handing out her right hand for Lana to shake. Lana shook her hand.

“I’m Lana."

“That cutie right there is John, My soul mate.” Tonya said flirty.

“He is a cutie, congratulations.” Tonya smiled.

"Baby, Come over here and meet the new girl. She’s one of us.” Tonya yelled.

“One of you? “ She questioned.

“Yes one of us, you’re now in our group, we are kind of like the outsiders, but the only thing is that people want to be like us. And most are jealous of us, but do we care? Fuck No! ", She said high fiveing Lana and then kissing John.

" I think I could get used to this . " , Lana said

" You better cause we got a party tonight. ", Tonya said smiling.

"Wanna meet the rest of the crew ? ", She asked.

" Sure....", Lana responded.

"Hey guys !"

A group of people turned around.

" Get the fuck over here .", She loudly laughed. Four people walked over . One caught her eye. He was about 5'10 and he had ash blonde hair and the bluest eyes.

" This is Jay , He's the stud of the group. And guess what ?"

"What?"

"He's single too.", She smiled and whispered something in his ear.

"This is Louis , Hes the smart guy of the group. But he's taken by her ", Tonya pointed at someone right behind her. She turned around to see who it was. But to her surprise it was a poster. The poster was of a beautieful swimsuit model. The model seemed to be enjoying herself at the beach , wearing a pok-a-dot bikini at the beach. It looked to her that she was advertising some new Sun Screen,

"When does she get back in anyways ? ", Tonya asked looking at Louis.

"She gets back in two weeks and I am stoked, She had a new shoot in Florida .", Louis responded confidently.

  " Is she in school with us ? ", Lana asked.

 " Yes , technically , She is mostly homeschooled , but she'll graduate with us .", Louis replied.

    Two other girls were standing there with Louis and Jay . One was really tall , She had red hair and green eyes. She was also a red head which reminded her of a girl she once saw in a magizine. The red head girl glanced back at her and stuck out her hand.

 " Im Jayme ."

" Lana ", She replied .

 "And this is our friend Sonia ." Sonia looked at Lana and gave her a dirty look. Something just didnt seem right to Lana about her. She was silent.

   Jayme leaned over to Lanas ear.

" She's a bitch at times , it takes her a little while ti warm up to someone new."

"Gotcha , no worries.", Lana whispered back.

 " So tonight , We are gonna have a party. And Lana You are coming ! ", Tonya said pointing her finger at Lana .

                      Present Day

  

Cell Phone Rings

 Lana wakes up to her ringer.

 She looks down at her cell phone and sees who the caller is. The screen says:

      Tonya is Calling



"What the fuck?", She said silently.

" Hello?", She answered.

 No answer

" Who the fuck is this !?!", She screamed at her phone.

"This is not a good joke!", She cried into the phone.

" It has only just begun." , A whispering voice said.

" Who is this?", Lana asked shaking.

"Wouldnt you like to know." , CLICK , the phone hung up .

"Oh my God.", Lana cried and threw her phone down.



                                                      Chapter Three



    

      Jay was across town working at Joes Bar . He has been a bartender there for the past four years. He was thinking about going to college but he made such good money there everynight he figured why quit . His good looks did pay off . He made at least $200 a night in tips. The women that came to the bar all fell in love with him. He had a smile like no other , that was is trademark . After he brought a drink to the ladies , he would just sit there and smile at them and the next thing you know , the ladies would slip him a twenty dollar bill.

   " Alright , buddy , Go be with your girlfriend. She needs you.", His boss said to him,

   " You sure , I can stay a couple more hours if you need.", He said to his boss.

  " Naw , no need , you have to be with your girl , and you need to take some time to mourn. I tell ya what , leave now and take it like a suspension with pay. Just be back by next friday.", His boss replied.

  " Your a good guy , thanks Boss ." , He said , The reason he called him Boss , was because Boss was his actual name .

   Jay walked out the front door and his cell phone rang. He answered without looking to see who it was.

" Hello? "

" Jay , where are you !", Lana screamed in the phone.

 “Baby, what’s wrong?” He said concerned.

 “I just got this phone call from Tonya’s phone."

"That’s impossible.”

"I know but it was freaky Jay.” She said crying.

"Baby, calm down, Im on my way. Boss just gave me till Friday off. Are you at your house?” He asked.

“Yes, and Im scared, I don’t know what to do. I want to call the cops.” She said.

“Hold on, Im on my way. Let me get Louis to come with me, He has something that can track your phone calls."

  “Ok, hurry up please."

“I will, and baby?"

"What?"

"I love you."

"I love you too.” She replied and hung up the phone.

    Lana and Jay started dating right after the party that Tonya had threw for everyone. Their relationship started with each of them calling each other playing phone tag. It was a cute thing between them. It got to be when they were in class if one of there phones rang, the teacher would call them out. Sometimes the teach would even answer her phone for her.

   One time while she was taking a test , her phone rang. Her teacher walked over to her desk and picked up her phone.

  " She's taking a test right now , Jay. Can you call back later?", Her teacher said into the phone.

  " Yes , Mrs. Tucker, Can you tell her something for me, though ?", He asked.

  "Sure , what is it?", She replied.

  Lana just looked around and everyone was staring at her giggling. Everyone knew who it was when it rang . Everyone liked both of them so no one ever minded the ring.

  " What ? Are you serious?", Mrs. Tucker said to the phone.

  "Ok bye Jay.", She said and hung up and walked to the front of her class.

"Oh and Lana....", Mrs. Tucker said.

" Yes , Mrs. Tucker.", she responded looking up.

" Jay said he has just finished with football practice and he's is gonna be using the Fruitful Fragrance you bought for him at Bath and Bodyworks."

"Oooo La La.", Lana purred. The whole class erupted in laughter.

  One thing about Jay was that he knew how to treat a woman, even though he would sometimes so innocently embarrass them. He treated Lana right, the way a real man does. He was the romantic type of guy and always left his girlfriend pleased. She just loved Valentines Day. Once he drove her to a park and gave her a beautieful promise ring. It was her birth stone. He always knew how to touch that one spot that would make any woman cry. And he loved Lana. He would do anything if she asked him. He wasn't whipped at all, he was just in love and the same was for her.

  Jay walked to his car and got in. He picked up the phone.

"I got to call Louis." He said to himself.

"Louis pick the damn phone up.", He said as it rang.

“You, Jay what’s up bro.?” Louis answered.

"Dude, ya got to come with me to Lana’s house. She just got a strange phone call from Tonya’s phone."

"Tonya’s phone?”

"Yes and we need to find out who called her , Cause form what she said it sounded like it was a threatening call. She didnt tell me what the person said, but she was pretty upset."

"Ok, I got it, you want me to bring over my tracker."

"Yep, I'll be at your house in twenty minutes to pick you up. I just got off work."

“Ok, I'll be ready, Later bro. ", Louis said hanging up the phone.

  Louis put down the phone and stared at his computer. He was reading an email he had just received while on the phone.

   “What the heck is this?” he clicked it open. He began to read.

    

    “Choices were made and now they are new choices to be made. You thought you all have gotten free from it. But you all are terribly wrong. You are all going to pay for what you have done. You thought you got away with a clean slate. But now it is time you pay for what you all have done “-End email



"Oh my God......... Not this ......anyone knows...........” Louis said panicking.

 He scrambled though his inbox but the message had disappeared. Whoever sent the message new exactly what they were doing and they were obviously skilled at computer encryption.

 Louis lived alone in a huge house his parents left for him after they passed away a few years back, so he was in a big place that could scare anyone if they walked inside is two stories house.

   Why was this happening to him? He fell back in his bed and just thought about whom else knew. He walked into his bathroom and began to urinate. He turned around and in front of him he saw a figure. This figure was about his height. The figure was wearing all black and gloves. The figure had a mask on so he couldn’t tell if it was man or a woman. He looked into the masks eyes and tried to see who was behind the mask. There was no chance. In the mask it had a covering over the eyes, where they could see you but you couldn’t see them. The mask was a mask of a little boy, a very demonic looking boy.

  “Nice mask Jay. But this isn’t the time for these kinds of jokes, especially only four hours after our best friend funeral."

 “Jay take off the damn mask! “ He screamed at the figure.

 The Figure tilted his head like Michael Myers had done in the first “Halloween ".

"You’re freaking me out Jay.” He began to back up.

The figure started to shake its head. The figure reached into its coat and pulled out a 6 inch butterfly knife.

Louis stood there in silence. He gulped.

"Your not Jay are you?” He asked shaking.

The figure nodded his head side to side in the form of the answer no.

"Your not going to hurt me is you?” Louis said while pissing his pants in fear.

The figure nodded yes.

Louis lunged at the figure knocking it down. Louis rose up and started to take off down the hall. The figure rose up almost Jason like. The figure looked back and jumped to its feet and flung the knife open. Louis looked back and screamed as he ran trying to get into the rooms in his house. But this killer was smart. It locked every door leading into the bathroom, even Louis' own room.

"What the fuck do you want with me!? “ Louis screamed backing up against the wall. There was nowhere else he could run to. He screamed for help but they were in they were on the second floor and he had no neighbors so screaming wouldn’t do anyone much good.

   The figure pointed the knife at Louis.

"No, please, Im sorry, it was an accident.” He screamed at the figure.

The figure was still pointing the knife at Louis and all of a sudden the blade shot out straight towards Louis hitting him square in the chest. Louis quenched the knife. He fell to his knees and fell to the floor. The figure began to walk towards Louis. Louis looked up.

"Im sorry", He said as he spit up blood. The Figure kicked Louis over. Louis was now lying on his back. The figured leaned over Louis and looked him in the eyes. Blood was now pouring out of Louis' mouth and nose. The figure slammed its foot on top of the blade that was in Louis' chest, crushing every bone and slicing every nerve in his spine. Louis unfortunately was still alive. Paralyzed but alive. The figure ripped the blade out of Louis’s' chest. The figure placed the blade against Louis' throat and slit it from ear to ear. The blood poured out and he was now dead.

  “Louis is you there? “ Jay screamed from the outside of the front door. He called Louis' cell phone but no answer. He opened up the door with a key that Louis had given him awhile back for special cases. He walked in and yelled.

"Louis where the fuck are you, come on we got to go now!”

  He checked the living room, the kitchen, the back room and he wasn’t there. He began to walk up the stairs. He smelt something in the air. It was a stench that he had never smelt before, heck it was a stench that he didnt want to smell. He covered his nose as he reached the top of the stairs. He looked down the hall and he saw Louis lying on the floor.


“Oh my God, Louis! “ He screamed and ran down the hall.

 He crept up slowly , and stood in horror. There was his best friend lying on the floor with a huge hole in his chest and his kneck slit. He fell to the floor.

"Louis , no! not you. Not you !!!!!!!!"

" Your next ........", A voice whispered in his ear.

He quickly turned around and saw the figure then it all went black. Somethig had hit him in the back of the head and knocked him completley out.



                         Chapter Four





     Waking up to beatings on her door. Lana rose suddenly ina daze.

“ Lana , dear , listen to me , Everything is going to be alright”, Her mother mother quietly said.

“Mom what are you talking about?”, Lana said as she stretched.

“Louis has been murdered.”

“What , No he was supposed to come to the house last……”, She paused and realized that Jay and Louis never came to her house the night before. She must have passed out while she was waiting for them. She couldn’t blame herself , after all , how else is your body supposed to react with no sleep for three days straight. All kinds of thoughts were running through her head, cause she had spoke to Jay earlier the night before about him going and picking up Louis to come to her house.

“Do they know who did it?”, She whimpered.

“No, they don't , but they did find a red Varsity Jacket. They think it may have belonged to the murderer.”, Her mother replied.

“Mom , Jay is the only one that has a red Varsity Jacket in this whole town. They gave it to him when the school ran out and told him that he should wear it with pride since now the spotlight would be on him.”

“I’ve got to call him.” She said reaching into her purse and picking up her cell phone.

“I’ve got a text message from him”, she opened up her phone and it brought her to the Text Message screen. She stood in horror as she read what the Text said. She dropped the phone and ran into her restroom.

Her mother starred at the restroom in shock.

“Dear , are you ok.”, She said as she put her ear to the door to hear anything she could.

“Im fine ! Leave me alone ! Get out of here !”, Lana screamed through the door.

Her mother hung her head low and sighed. She walked out of her daughters room and shut the door behind her.

“ This cant be , this cant be, No one knows. This can’t be….”, She said crunched up with her arms around her legs in a fetal position against the restroom wall. She heard a noise outside. She slowy rose up and walked to the restroom window. Looking at the window with pain , she was scarred to even go near it. She reached out and unlocked the window and peered out. Down the street , some children were playing street hockey, the noise was the hockey puck hitting the side of the post they were using as a goal.

   She slowly sat up and walked over to her door. She opened it and looked into her room. She was so scarred , she didn’t know what to think. Someone was watching her and she knew it. The scary thing is , she knew why but not who it was. She walked over to the side of her bed and picked up her phone. She stared at the screen. It was a picture of her last night sitting in her bed , talking to someone on her phone, and underneath the picture was the caption:

 

     Tisk , Tisk you think he can actually help you



   She deleted it quickly. She looked outside to see where the angle of the picture was shot. The only place that would have gotten a good picture of her , must have been shot from outside her window. Why would someone go through so much trouble to make her life miserable. She knew what they had done was the worst thing anybody could possibly live with. Besdies it was a long time ago and no one knew, or so she thought.

                     5 years earlier



   John , Tanya , Jayme , Jay, and Louis had all gone out for some fun in the sand. It was a past time that the kids did , get your friends together and then go to the beach and drink a few beers and party.

“John , grab me a beer.”, Tanya demanded.

“Yes miss queen of all.”, he replied with a snobby tone.

“When you gonna ask her to marry you John?”, Louis said while opening a beer.

“Well , we haven’t decided if that’s exactly what we wanna do. We haven’t even fucked yet.”

“ JOHN !, that’s noone of their fucking business”, Tanya screamed from across the fire.

“But they wanted to know.”,He said sipping his beer.

“ So , why haven’t you guys fucked yet , Tonya?”, Jayme asked ina mellow tone.

“ Im waiting for the perfect night. I want it to be special and I don't want to loose it ina drunken spree.”, She replied.

“Ya know , that’s really a good descision.”, Jayme added.

“But the cock does feel sooooo good.”, She laughed , Tonya pushed her off the log.

“Your funny , your realy funny miss.”, Tonya said laughing.

“Im beng serious , venture out , get that thing popped.”,Jayme laughed.

“Ya and I want to be the one doing the popping , Wanna join us Jayme?”, He said inquireing.

Jayme looked at Johna dn gave him the finger.

“I know you want to but im taken baby.”, John laughed.

“What about me ? I don't wanna be the extra guy that never gets laid.”, Louis added.

 

 

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