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If She Could Die by Fred Hardy (4)
"Fred, I usually like your work, no acception here. Couple of things though. You have some misspelled words. And I would consider reworking the chorus if I were you. It isn't catchy. It didn't grab me. But I did however like this stanza alot "breathing the air she molds her masterpeice moving her fingers feeling her heat she stares in the mirror as her image repeats her motion so smooth as she cuts in deep". " -- km.
"thanks for the reveiw, how i do need spell check .i agree with you on the chorus it needs help as it stands now it is only one phrase and pretty morbit at that.i will re write this and probably re title as well " -- fh, canada.
"Ouuch! ya gotta' watch out for km, she bites. take a look at my piece called Peaceful Grin. you should like it." -- nick marshburn.
"she is right the one phrase catch line is to strong with not much melody.thanks again" -- fh, canada.


Japanese Girls by Fred Hardy (4)
"i love this piece. alot different from most of your work. i laughed outloud. very, very funny" -- nick marshburn.
"thanks for viewing nick , i tried to go light with this one just something that popped into my head and i started writing it's good to have variety" -- fh, canada.
"I love this song!!! It's funny and catchy I can just see people singing along with this song. AWESOME JOB!!!" -- Mitch.
"thanks mitch i really liked writing this it came real easy and is real lite which is a nice change for me you probably guessed the tempo is fast so it moves along nice" -- fh, canada.


Somewhere Part 3 by Fred Hardy (1)
"a stranger in a strange land... i like that. good imagery." -- nick marshburn.


Learning To Fly (Revised) by Fred Hardy (6)
"I LOVE THE CHORUS!!!! Is this a slower song? I think it would sound good slower. " -- Mitch.
"thanks mitch for checking this out and your comments especially on the chorus this song is more mid tempo but it comes acroos real soft it is written for accoustic and I can't see an arrangement with this thanks again for taking a look " -- fh, canada.
"much better...definately an accoustic piece " -- mattie.
"Thanks mattie for the revisit and the comments " -- fh, canada.
"brilliant stuff, so emotive- gj " -- Dave Sutton.
"thanks Dave appreciate your kind words " -- fh, canada .


Rise by Fred Hardy (4)
"This is really good!!! I love how you tell a story in your songs, plus the rhyming make it flow nicely. " -- Mitch.
"thanks mitch this is kind of slow and almost like blues except the content of the lyric is about drug addiction the lines i think are not as clear as i wanted so i used the bridge to define what was going on and even that was a bit out there but thanks again for taking the time to read and comment" -- fh, canada.
"I'm seeing some changes in your work FH and I like it. more of a "story" theme to these latest pieces. Good work, as always!" -- nick.
"hey nick you are right alot of people have helped me along the way including yourself i've been told to make things a little clearer easier to understand more detail so it's great that you have noticed the changes .i think that is what this site is for " -- fh, canada.


California Gold by Fred Hardy (1)
"omg!!that is like so awesome!!its so deep,man.i wish i could write stuff like that!!omg!!i am just blown away!!" -- Keeper of Insecurities.


Where Did You Find That Girl (Revised) by Fred Hardy (9)
"I like this song espeically the chorus. It's like they say behind every good man there is an even better woman. :) " -- Mitch.
"hey Mitch thanks for the read I will repost this in a few days needed to add more to this and they are probably right a man or a band needs a good woman thanks again" -- fh, canada.
"I like this song. very creative. i love the chorus." -- Leslie, KY.
"thanks Leslie for the kind words I am going to re post the completed version today so many things I post here are first drafts thanks again" -- fh, canada.
"Hey Fred, nice song. Good writing. I like it. Good job....I am currently writing a couple of songs and hope to have them done and posted here soon." -- Jonathon Brannon, San Bernardino, CA.
"hey thanks Jonathon for taking a look at this and the kind words ,look forward to seeing you new songs" -- fh , canada.
"I especially enjoyed the chorus. Is it possible for you to get the word ass out of your song?" -- Pamela Taylor, Fairfield, USA, Maine.
"hey Pmaela yeah I can remove it ,never really liked it there but the first word I put there was rear and I didn't like that either I will look at this again ,thanks for commenting" -- fh, canada.
"Luogo abbastanza piacevole, lo godo completamente! bmw" -- Totti, ..., ..., ....


X Mas Day by Fred Hardy (6)
"great song. i'm trying to write a christmas song myself. already got a melody to it. as soon as i write it i'll post it." -- chad naquin.
"actually, can i use this one? i've been singing it a lot and i even have something on my guitar for it. i'm saving up money for a cd, to sell. the songs you let me use will have your name as credit." -- chad naquin.
"you can go ahead I think I'm finally going to get together with a few friends and try to bring some of my songs to life not sure why I waited so long maybe confidence ,anyhow not sure what songs to do but you can try this one. love to hear what you come up with ." -- fh, canada.
"hey fred. i like this new version. but the one i'm using is better in my opinion. you misspelled "brill ant." you meant to put "brilliant."" -- chad naquin.
"Chad I just can't find the right words for this so I keep going back to it I really like the whole song but I just have to make it write ." -- fh, canada.
"that is such a good song!!! I wish it was Christmas now! keep writing..." -- Nicole, Coto de Caza, CA, USA.


Turn Away by Fred Hardy (6)
"I like all the rhyming in this song. I am a really big fan of your work!!" -- Mitch.
"thanks micth i appreciate the kind words but do you know what this song is about ,am i clear enough in my writing to paint that picture thanks fh" -- fh, canada.
"I think it is clear what you are referring to in the song. There are just some spelling errors you might want to correct. They're vs. there. Do many people or everybody say it???" -- Pamela Taylor, Fairfield, USA, Maine.
"hey,Pamela,I can't spell .I try but spelling is tough for me 'if anyone really needs spell check it is me,I will look at those errors and correct them ,thanks this song is written about prejeduice and coming from a small town I seen lots of it and the stares and looks you get in a mixed relationship.when I phrased everybody said it I meant more of thats how it feels like ,if that makes sense" -- fh, canada.
"tare needs to be tear. great song. mitch might be a fan but i'm the number 1 fan. every song on here is awesome!" -- chad naquin.
"Thanks Chad for your time and comments I'll check my spelling on this ." -- fh, canada.


We All Just Fade Away by Fred Hardy (8)
"i love this." -- brittany.
"thaks for the look brittany ,i had to write this based on the opening line just one of those phrases that we not leave me alone ,i may tweak this a bit buti think it sticks " -- fh, canada.
"You have amazing talent, Fred. Connect with the audience like you do is very hard to do but you make it look so easy. This song really hits home. Yet again, good job!" -- Jak Balshaw, Northants, UK.
"Thanks Jak ,appreiciate the kind words .glad you could relate to this it's a bit different." -- fh, canada.
"can i use this? i think i could come up with something on my guitar for it but i won't use it unless you let me. PLEASE???" -- chad naquin.
"I cleaned it up a bit haven't looked at it in a while ,you can go ahead and try to work on this let me know when you come up with something.good luck with it" -- fh, canada.
"thanks. i'm putting some more on mine right now." -- chad.
"my storymania profile that is" -- chad naquin.


Can't Let You Go by Fred Hardy (7)
"I like this song, the chorus really rocks!!!" -- Mitch.
"hey Mitch thanks for checking this out and the nice comments ,but this song isn't there yet I'm happy with the opening verse but that is it so far ,any suggestions ,time to go work and try fixing this. thanks again" -- fh, canada.
"Wow...this IS a good piece...simple...emotional..I just cant let it go! Being a vocalist,i did a fast reading at your work and got a whole melody of how the song shold be..Again nice work!!Catch me at [email protected]" -- Adam limbumba, Dar es salaam, Tanzania.
"hey Adam thanks for the kind words .I'm not done with this just yet the 2nd verse I don't like and some of the timing needs work i will Email you the final product thanks again " -- fh, canada.
"That is a very nice song. After reading it, about halfway through I had a vision in my head of a guy and a girl sitting in that bar listening to that band. Great song once again, really drives an image for me, and not a lot of songs to that for me." -- Jason Murphy, United States.
"thanks for taking a look at this Jason I'm left to wonder which version to go with ,oh well I'll figure it out anyhow thanks again" -- fh, canada.
"The part where you talked about you being from the country and her being from the city reminds me of this girl i really like. i am from a small town and she is from a big city. great song. paints a real picture in my head." -- chad naquin.


Eric (Extended) by Fred Hardy (4)
"Woh! There is a lot here. Awesome work FH, once again. I've been out for a while but I'm back now. Today a put some music to I-40 and Back In Carolina. " -- nick.
"hey nick glad your back and great to hear you are putting music to some of your peices you words are always well detailed and i think you will put together some really nice songs with them good luck with that" -- fh, canada.
"I'm just taking the time to "leaf" through a few of your works due to you being quite a prolific writer and all. I really like this one due to the fact it tells a story in such detail- good work mate. " -- Dave Sutton.
"Thanks Dave appreciate your time and kind comments ,I always liked this as one of my favorite writes ,the ending is bit harsh but it's just the way it came to me .thanks again " -- fh, canada.


Jesse by Fred Hardy (2)
"This song has real emotion and I love the rhymes, they make the song flow really well." -- Mitch.
"thanks for reading this mitch i appreciate the comments" -- fh, canada.


A Country Road by Fred Hardy (3)
"This song is different from your other stuff, but I LOVE IT!!! Rock on!!" -- Mitch.
"hey mitch thanks for checking this attempt at country out sometimes you just got to change the pace anyhow this was quick draft and I will post the final product later, probably next week." -- fh, canada.
"Hey, I have to agree with Mitch it is different from your other songs, but it is still awesome...Hmmm...Well, keep it up. Peace Out!" -- Ryuichi Minamino, Bushnell, Fl, USA.


Can't Let You Go (Revised) by Fred Hardy (3)
"I really liked these lyrics a lot. " -- Rachel, Cookeville, Tn, United States.
"I really liked these lyrics a lot. As I read it, it almost felt like I had written them about someone I love. I'm glad there is a man out there who is feeling what I'm feeling." -- Rachel, Cookeville, Tn, United States.
"Thanks Rachel for looking at this I'm glad that I could write something that you found relatable ,appreciate the kind comments ." -- fh, canada .


(It Dosent Have One) by Cheryl MacLean (4)
"Good job!!" -- Sasu.
"I'm gonna attempt to rate "It dosent Have One" because i related to the soul behind it. It sounds inspired by a young yearning heart. I'd titled your song "Would Be So Hard"" -- Shirleymae, Sunbury, Pa, Northumberland.
"I'm back to rate your song!" -- Shirleymae, Sunbury, Pa., Northumberland.
"I would title this "wondering'" " -- Pamela Taylor, Fairfield, USA, Maine.


You Drive Me Out Of My Mind by Jonathon Brannon (5)
"Start reviewing others work, as they have made the effort...Too many people write, not enough review..be fair and you'll be rewarded." -- Buxton.
"I love this tune in my mind, it has something that not many achieve..Imagery." -- Buxton.
"I love this song! it reminds me of my b/f and myself!! the lyrics are great and i can almost hear a tune in my head just by reading it. great job! *~Les~*" -- Leslie, KY.
"Thank you to everyone who has left feedback of my songs. I really do appreciate it. Good or bad. I don't write as much as I would like to, but when a song comes to mind, I have to sit down and write. I am currently writing a couple of more songs that I hope to have completed and posted here within the next couple of weeks. Just thought i'd throw the titles out there..."I Breathe Again" which I started writing but got sidetracked with other songs. I have the first verse and the bridge done already, I just need the second verse and that will be complete. I already have something in mind for that verse. The song is about overcoming the negatives that life can bring. Whether it's from a broken home or a serious illness. To be stronger and happier with life because of it...This next song, I have the concept for and basically the chorus. It's titled "I Fall Down". Basically about someone doing the things that hurt the ones who love them. Everytime they try to do right, they always seem to end up hurting others. Coming to realize this and asking for forgiveness...The next two songs are about getting the most out of life. Going for your dreams. Making sacrifices, that maybe sometimes at the beginning people don't understand and think that leaving the life that you have behind to pursue some far fetched dream is being selfish. The song that deals with this the most is titled "Forgive Me (If I Seem A Little Greedy)" And what the hell, i'll give ya a little taste of the chorus here, even I don't like posting my songs until I am finished with the final product...Here's the chorus.... So forgive me if I seem a little greedy I just want it, gotta have it all for me The sun, the moon, the stars Yeah that's where those dreams are Gotta catch Haley's Comet before it gets away from me So forgive me if I seem a little greedy...... The other song titled "I Wanna Be" is about living life to the fulliest, recognizing mistakes and wanting to make a change and be the person that your loved ones see in you.. I love the concept of this song I have in my head and I will give you a taste of the chorus here as well to give you an idea as to where i'm going with this one.... Chrous: I wanna be the hero my son envisions Give more than i've been givin' And take back every hurtful thing i've said I wanna be the change in someone's life Grow old in love with my wife And be happier than i've ever been Out of all the things This means the most to me Oh, I wanna be...... I look forward to getting these songs done and having them posted here for everyone to read...I hope you liked the two little previews of the choruses I gave....Again thanks to everyone who has left feedback and to everyone who hasn't. I just hope you enjoyed them and look forward to more from me..I am glad to see that some of these songs (especially You Drive Me Out Of My Mind) has stuck with some people and can relate. That's what music is about and that's what I like writng.....Until next time!!!!!!!!!!!!!" -- Jonathon, CA.
"so many can relate to this writting, jonathon you really know how to make people feel things. your writtings are strong and real, and i just loved the 2nd verse it had me rotf! good to have a little love back in writting i love how you keep it positive...rather realistic!:)" -- de, ca, us.


Why Do I by Tyler K Osbourne (1)
"Again good work here Tyler, I really feel like you have a talent for songwriting...You may want to tidy up the 'wat' into 'what'...after all if someone see's this they may buy it..Keep the great work man. I like your style!" -- Buxton.


Voices In My Head by Amy Anderson (1)
"Hey i really like ur music,is awesome how frequently u can write and it all comes out good,when i try and write to much it all ends up as rambling and i sound heaps emo:P I really like this song,i can relate,i feel a little disturbed in my mind sometimes,nice work:):):)" -- Kasey, Maitland.


Turn-Row by Billy Wayne Schrock (2)
"Great song, I really liked it. " -- Lynn , Oak grove, LA, West Carroll.
"Cute, being a country girl myself. " -- Mattie.


This Is Your Heart On Abby by Matt R Kellaher (1)
"This is really good. I love that it has so much emotion." -- Mitch.


The First Days (Of The Rest Of Your Life) by Jonathon Brannon (1)
"this was a strong writting. it was very strong to begin kinda faded at the end, but very nice piece." -- de, de, us.


That's All by Jonathon Brannon (3)
"Start reviewing others work, as they have made the effort...Too many people write, not enough review..be fair and you'll be rewarded.....Cool song by the way!" -- Buxton.
"the rhyme scheme in the first verse is just a bit of but over all a nice write even though I'm not high on love songs ,and yeah I can't spell and buxton is right there are far to many people who just want there stuff read but don't comment or try to help others with there posts. i.m.o" -- jonathon, canada.
"Yeah, it was a little bit off in the first verse, but i really thought it was quite good." -- Em.


Taste My Blood by Alexander Petrov (2)
"this is really, I can see this as some nice lyrics. Change front to from..." -- km.
"Thank you for the correction. I couldn't see it for months (or never). " -- Alexander Petrov.


Sitting All Alone By Myself by Desi Williams (2)
"hey desi, i love the song... but just remember that you have me by your side, and well when you're feeling down and you need someone to talk to i'm here and i'll alwayz be there... love you lots, don't forget that... hugs and kisses...your bestest best friend ;)" -- carla.
"oh, by the way... wich song of mine were you talking about? a few of them came to mind." -- carla.


Nightcap by NelsonC (1)
"Nice mate, i love R&B, its the bomb, keep writing, peace." -- Hugh.


My Hero (I've Waited All My Life) by Jonathon Brannon (2)
"Start reviewing others work, as they have made the effort...Too many people write, not enough review..be fair and you'll be rewarded." -- Buxton.
"hey jonathon nice too see some lyrics posted with structure it makes it easier to follow . check the meter on some of your lines ,they don't deem to add up but maybe thats just me you have put some nice lines together and the chorus reads smooth on the first six lines but then it gets hard to follow ,anyhow nice write I look forward to reading more." -- fh , canada.


My Dilemma by Jonathon Brannon (1)
"I really liked the first verse in this and the course i feel is also stong the 2nd verse doesn't feel the same j.m.o anyhow real nice write " -- fh, canada.


Modern Concrete Cowboy by John Roberts (2)
"i like this a lot. it's got a natural flow and rhyme. nice work :)" -- rae.
"Thanks Rae ! Know anyone who can write a good tune for this ? :)" -- John Roberts.


Make It by Amy Anderson (1)
"I really like the chorus and the last verse!!" -- Mitch.


Make It Through by Jordan Holetzky (1)
"The song is good but at the end it doesnt exactly make sense." -- Terrisa, Brooksville, Usa.


Lost Within by C M S Sharpe (2)
"like i've said b4 call my name and i shall be there ^-^" -- am am.
"muder songs " -- mack_varol, agra, u.p, india.


Last Time by Steph Kidd (1)
"I love this song!! The chorus is awesome!!!" -- Mitch.


Just Hold Me by Carla Thomson (2)
"Hey Carla your too young to be dealing with all this hurt and confusion.Your at an age where you should be having the time of your life.But it sounds like you really like the boy you are writing about in this poem and he must be very special.Again I'm curious as to what happened on this weekend you keep refering to,will we ever hear about it?" -- David D.
"well i don't think that i'll write about that weekend... it was just a bunch of drama and most it doesn't make anysence even the people that were there have a totaly different outlook to what happend... so i'll just keep you all wondering...lol" -- Carla Thomson.


It's Always Been Ok by Nash (2)
"This is good but I really like these lines..."You can't hurt me this time, don't faltter yourself, you can't break my heart, cuz it's not yours to break, but yours is mine." " -- Mitch.
"Some good stanza's here, lacking on grammar, but make up for it with some good wording, and imagery....Loved the line ' you laugh at me, but I know what you have coming' ...so many thing's come out of that one sentance..absolutly fantastic line. Good work m8, thanks for sharing it.." -- Sasu.


Im Beggin You by Alec Moore (2)
"I like this song, I it more as a fast song. Is it?" -- Mitch.
"ya mitch, meant to be is the slow 1 i dont know how is a bit slower than this 1" -- alec moore.


I Dont Know How by Alec Moore (3)
"its great, THE BEST!!!!!" -- Brannen.
"It almost made me cry, (just to let you guyz now i was the girl he's talkin about in that song =x" -- Cecelia, mt pleasant, SC, US.
"It's really good. Maybe try to use differenty analogies that havent been worn out so much like the line "You were like an angel from above"... -Carole" -- Carole, Houston, TX, USA.


I Believe In You by Jonathon Brannon (1)
"very nice work jonathon, reminds me of tim mcgraw. it is easy flowing and i can picture it in my head. sounds very nice." -- DE, CA, USA.


He Talks To Angels by Jonathon Brannon (2)
"hey Jonathon I know the song your refering to the verse are different here but your chorus is almost the same I think this was originaly written by the rolling stones anyhow nice version " -- fh, canada.
"Great Words! You will definatly be going places! Great Luck to you. Best, R.J. Frey" -- R.J. Frey, Northport, ny, USA.


Friends Are There by Tyler K Osbourne (1)
"Nice song...I relate to this in ways..when I first moved to my new home town I felt the same way and was around the same age...I like your use of word's to keep the reader/listener involved..Hope to see more." -- Buxton.


Forget by E P (2)
"Start reviewing others work, as they have made the effort...Too many people write, not enough review..be fair and you'll be rewarded." -- Buxton.
"Why do you like such shit Buxton?" -- M. Constable.


Fly Away by Cheryl MacLean (2)
"i really enjoyed this great job" -- Jocelyn Bourqe.
"I enjoyed it, although there are maybe a few too many "fly aways" " -- Pam Taylor, Fairfield, USA, Maine.


Flag Woman by Nathifa A St Louis (1)
"Nice melody, pleasing voice, great potential is there. I'd look forward to some great R&B if she branches there." -- G J.


Empty Cries The Soul by Pete Atkinson (2)
"I like the way you create the feeling here..A lot goes said, and a lot more unsaid. Ive been through this type of pain, where the world goes dark, and the rainclouds follow you..But you need to believe that their is a sunset waiting just for you, or it will never happen." -- Buxton.
"Start reviewing others work, as they have made the effort...Too many people write, not enough review..be fair and you'll be rewarded." -- Buxton.


Draw Me Peace by E P (2)
"Nice work, I like your use of words to create a good vision..Peace can only be drawn together, not by one, two, or few. Thanks for sharing." -- Buxton.
"Start reviewing others work, as they have made the effort...Too many people write, not enough review..be fair and you'll be rewarded." -- Buxton.


Disappearing Beneath Myself by Desi Williams (1)
"desi all i have to day is wow, and i'm sorry that you have to go though so much. love you always and forever, your best friend." -- Carla.


Can You Take Me To Heaven by Jason Murphy (2)
"nice write jason flows well and holds together I imagine this as an acoustic sound ,one of the few things I have read here where i could see the music ,again nice write" -- fh, canada.
"that is a very good song im sure your grandpa would be so proud of you" -- Cheryl, Calgary, Alberta, Canada.


Beyond A Thought by Raychil Willow-Light Sandoval Withoos (1)
"Pain is a gift, or a weapon, I can see that you use yours as a gift, this song has potential.. Obviously it's hard to understand what singing style accompanies it..but I really like the style, and the word's create great imagery...thanks for sharing it." -- Tom Bomb.


Beauty Of Suicide by Amy Anderson (3)
"That was so beautiful! I loved the passion, and it was just amazingly written. " -- Emma.
"thanks a heap emma :) glad you like it" -- amy.
"It's really well written.. although im totally against cutting and suicide and such... It would be alot better withouth the curse words, but thats my opinion, i think curse words make songs sound trashy.. anyways its good.." -- Carole.


All That I Never Knew by Lisa Marie (1)
"Dear Lisa, I feel sorry for you at this difficult time. Your poem is used to express your feelings of how you feel and it is good to share it out- like pouring your heart out. I hope what ever the outcome of the divorce - your parents will aways be your parents therefore l hope you will keep in good terms with both of them whatever the outcome.God give you the courage and May God Bless you." -- Amy , Hayes, England.


Where Will I Go From Here by Jaseyboi Sutters (2)
"Nice...Good use of words, and some good imagery...Hope to see more" -- Buxton.
"Where will u go indeed, not bad a tad irrate kinda botched together. by this i in know way say its not good as i quite liked it and feel this lads skill will improve the more he posts/writes.." -- km, illinois.


When I Need You Most by Desi Williams (2)
"Wow, very powerfull, I loved it..Such pain, suffering, and constant wrestling with life..I could feel the words. This is a brilliant piece of work. I seriously think it has potential. Good Job, and keep them coming X" -- Buxton.
"That's a very good song! I loved the way you put your emotions and feelings in there! Very good job! Email me sometime, b/c you sound cool & I wanna be your friend." -- Jessica.


Tears Or Rain by Jaseyboi Sutters (9)
"Good use of metaphors jaseyboi, liked the style, although you need to work on Grammar, not spelling, things like 'u' just disnae cut it in ma wurld. All the same could really feel something of worth in this song." -- Buxton.
"Hey man good job, liked the feeling of emotion in this song...it's always hard when read lyrics without knowing the tune, but this one seemed to flow and I found myself humming along to some of the words...strange!!:)Good piece, thanks for sharing it with us" -- Sasu.
"Wow.....where did you get the inspiration to write this.?????? One word my friend:- Plaguerism.." -- James Blunt.
"After doing a google search for James blunt i found the song in question and its not the same, its just not the same.....such a shame....." -- bob.
"LOl, at the wannabe James Blunt... Not to clued up on his work, but Im sure it's not ripped off..." -- Buxton.
"I am a big james blunt fan an all i can say is this song is well written and compared to james blunt "Tears & Rain" isnt even in the same league altho its lyrically well written it has a long way to go before we can say "Plaguerism" Keep them coming jaseyboi" -- annmarie, america.
"very catchy are you in a band?, or do you write for a band? as i think you should be snapped up....another good one xXxXxXx" -- km, illinois.
"J, I can really appreciate the artistic expression of your inspiration. You really know how to get your feelings out into words...I love it. Keep it up! CG" -- CG, Savannah, Georgia.
"i think you put a lot of emotion into this song and i like it, but while i was reading it i kept wondering what inspired you to write it, because there was so much emotion in it.good job!-" -- Brittany, tonopah, az.


Stolen And Torn by Amy Anderson (3)
"Wow,i really like this song,its heaps deep and reveals the truth that nobodies lives are perfect,and most are jaded,nice work" -- Kasey Miller, Maitland.
"thanx kasey :) glad u lyk it" -- Amy Anderson.
"hai amy :D dats relli gewd!! i lyk it!! n i also lyk josh..hehe....meh...its gewd :) keeps up de gewd work :O iohnjfklngvfoldvc..." -- hott danae ;).


Not Original by Only Jennifer (1)
"Nice lyrics.....Good words there keep it up" -- Scotty.


Miles And Miles Away by Morgan R Allen (1)
"Makes me cry" -- cindy.


Invisible Scars by Amy Anderson (2)
"i think this is great but i do have one question....are the words true??" -- Brittany.
"Thanx Brittany :) yer it's all true.. " -- Amy .


In Your Awesome Presence by Desi Williams (2)
"I think these lyrics are amazing! I dunno how you can come up with such original material. I am also only just 14 and play in a band and i would love to be able to use these lyrics for a song. Please get back to me if I have your aproval. Thnx jolokovitch, [email protected]" -- Count Jolokovitch, Tonbridge, England, Kent.
"Very well written. You have a very special gift. This song is what I've been looking for my demo cd. Could you let me know ASAP if I could you your lyrics. " -- Corey Johnson.


I Wont Lie by Jaseyboi Sutters (8)
"itz great, hunny!!" -- joanne, Aberdeen, Scotland.
"Hmmmm this lad shows talent , could be a singer/songwriter with real feeling on the up n coming road" -- Tw33ty, scotland.
"absolutely fabulous dah-ling!! kisses!" -- jenna, aberdeen, scotland.
"Nice work JaseyBoi....A number one in the making ?!?!?" -- Buxton.
"An astonishing composition from Mr Sutcliffe, a flourish of creativeness with a captivating chorus....... An exceptional excerpt and superlative effort... -MunKy" -- Johann Sebastian Dark, Aberdeen, Aye ;), Scotland.
"good job, but you are right, if you were to check the spelling would be even nicer, yes?? Keep it up. Hugs. " -- dri.
"Hey...not bad. I write a few songs myself (haha)and this is way better than any of them. And i mean that. Enjoy the compliment, i dont give them often." -- Liz Quinlan.
"Again well written this is 100% better than your other attempt... I really like this infact ive came back 4 times now" -- km, illinois.


For A Moment by Desi Williams (1)
"This was very sweet...all to often we take for granted those we hold dear, for we are all only here for a moment. :)" -- mattie.


Chant by Leah Russell (1)
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Ballad Of A Pipeliner by Billy Wayne Schrock (12)
"I'm not a poem writer but this is a real good poem, and a true poem.I think all pipeliners or constrution workers that have to work away from home will love this poem and can definitely relate to it." -- Lynn Schrock, Oak Grove, LA, West Caroll.
"If you are a pipeliner or a pipeliner's wife, you can relate to this poem and it is very true. Some good and some bad things about being a pipeliner. This is good!" -- Bev, Oak Grove, US, LA.
"What can I say. For someone who is not a poet this is a very good poem. From what others have told me about pipelining all these words in the poem are so true." -- Ginger Bayless, Oak Grove, La., USA.
"This was a great poem. Reading this poem and thinking about how tuff that life must be makes me thankful that my husband gets to come home each night." -- Angie, Bush, LA.
"Hey Bill, I am impressed! I guess you find time to write poems/songs when you are not pipelining!!! Sounds great." -- Pamela Smith Neal, Ruston, LA, USA.
"This is so true! Sometimes it's exciting to go places you've never been but it's sad too that some have to leave their families behind just to make a living. Good job Billy Wayne!" -- Penny O'Neal, Forest, LA, USA.
"My Dad was a pipeliner who died away from home, age 53, in 1962. I have a photo of him in a dark hotel room with an open suitcase, his last letter and photo of his old truck with dual stacks. This song was his life. This poem brought tears to my eyes." -- Gabby, Kansas.
"How very true. I have been married to a pipeliner for 8 years now, and out of those 8 years we have lived together for one year. He is gone about 10 months out of the year, it is a tough life being married to a pipeliner but with love and trust a marriage can survive the pipeline life." -- tonya hampton, gillette, wy, usa.
"I like your poem a lot!!! It is very true. However my husband and I are lucky. We travel together. We spent a month apart last year and decided that's not for us. But your poem describes my aunt, and cousins life....I hate it for them. Families do need each other." -- Shannon, Lexington, KY, USA.
"I Love this song my fiance is a pipeliner and it sucks cause as the song says far from home always and sleeping in hotel rooms...Damn i miss him" -- Lynsey, Boswell, PA, usa.
"I LOVE this and I am sending it to my husband. I am a pipeliner's wife and this literally brought tears to my eyes and gave me goosebumps. I love it, you did such a wonderful job!" -- Kara Willis, Ohio for now, USA.
"Absolutely LOVE this! My fiance is a pipeliner, and this described his work life to a 'T'. Missing my man!" -- Nell, WI at times, PA for now when visiting.


Ain't Got Time by Jessica L Young (1)
"get behind me satan!" -- nick.


Age Of Absolute Hatred, A Collection by Jack (1)
"awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is this on a cd?" -- chad naquin.


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