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Yes, No, Or Maybe by Barry Lee Hutchison Sr (7) "HEY YOU GUYS CHECK THIS OUT AND COMMENT...I WANT TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!" -- Barry Hutchison, Sr.. "hey Barry real good structure and it flows real nice the rhyme are consistent and I think the story is o.k you may want to try to dig a little further maybe add something uniqe to the story line just my opion again nice write ,good luck with it " -- fh, canada. "Sounds like a pretty good country song to me. I especially like the chorus. It's very clever." -- CW, Oklahoma, USA. "Damn I love this! It's REALLY good! I'd bet this one will get done by a big name soon! Hope you're trying to pitch it on the row." -- RB, TX. "This is extremely well written! It's got top 10 all over it man! Hell of a job...no joke! I can see Alan Jackson or George Strait doing this one!" -- Sam, Louisville, Ky. "I appreciate the kind comments from all of you guys! This site seems to have a bunch of knowledgable and talented folks on here. I'm glad that I found it and can be part of it to support our art and passion! You guys are great!" -- Barry Lee Hutchison, Sr., Nashville, Tennessee, USA. "I think that you are a very good writer and have a keen sense of getting to the core of a good ballad. Keep up the great work and remember that making it won't happen over night." -- Tony Taylor, Dallas, Texas. Give Me A Gun by Fred Hardy (2) "yeah,i didnt like it at all no offense! i mean, it all rhymed and it was good, except for the part about the gun! nice work...i think!" -- Sam. "thanks, for reading this over Sam ,I put this on the shelf for now ,it's a very sarcastic write and a complete mock on the american love affair with the gun,and there lack of gun control ,maybe this shouldn't be written by a non american so I put this away,thanks again " -- fh, canada. Coming Home (Revised) by Fred Hardy (2) "I liked this...a country ballad?" -- mattie. "Thanks for checking this out Mattie every so often I come up with a country peice this is actually something I wrote last spring that I finally finished about two months ago thanks again" -- fh, canada. Someone Like You (Song) by Fred Hardy (2) "fh I liked this...what genre of music would you put this to?" -- mattie. "hey Mattie thanks for taking a look at this ,this is a real rough draft and it will look alot different on a repost the music is complete for this and I would probably say it is a soft pop ballad .but I have put a twist on this and with a rough vocal I hear it as alternative maybe the way I sound everything has an edge to it ,hope I'm clear enough sometimes music is hard to label thanks again" -- fh, canada. Come Over Here by Fred Hardy (2) "I related to this in a strange kinda way...especially liked the line,"it's all about how many times we survive". Hard to survive sometimes...tell me more about this song..." -- Mattie. "thanks Mattie for taking a look at this ,the music is composed and was written before the lyric which always limits you to your ideas ,I'm still working on the second verse to make it fit in a little better the idea behind the lyric is the girl wants to be an actress and has faced disapointment alot,the guy has stayed by her side all the time through thick and thin .I hope it makes sense thanks again for checking this out" -- fh, canada. 21 Days( Away From You) by Fred Hardy (6) "this is really sweet. i wrote a poem a while back called 21 times...check it out. " -- km. "thanks for checking this out need to make some small ajustments but really it's just one of those missing you type songs thanks again I'll check out that poem ,take it easy" -- fh, canada. "Fred this is really good. I like that is sexual but not raunchy. Ya know?" -- Mitch. "thanks Mitch ,haven't seen you in a while hope to see you post something soon" -- fh, canada. "I am really liking your skills. Please get in touch. I have a few things to go through with you. [email protected]." -- Jak Balshaw, UK. "i loved this one.. i know that feeling.. wanting to be back home with the one you love... this summer was away for a month... 300 miles from my home... " -- Carla Thomson. Zzx by Fred Hardy (2) "what's up with the name? Zzx" -- chad naquin. "just a place to put down my thoughts" -- fh, canada. Now Is Change by Karen Miller (1) "Once again, i love your rhyming, and especially how you make your intro and ending to your writings. great stuff" -- Enzo. Lost Without You by R Bennett Okerstrom (6) "I think I like this song better than the first one. It seems like something that could really make it on a pop station." -- Kendra. "Thanks again Kendra. I wrote this over 10 years ago, but it seems like it still applies..." -- R. Bennett. "This brought out a lot of emotions in me. So much so, that I don't think I can read this again. A compliment to your great writing. Thanks, R,B." -- JM. "Thanks again JM. " -- R. Bennett. "Interesting for me as I have recently started converting some of my own poems to song lyrics ( see on StoryMania ! ) This one I think works really well, and just needs a good 'kicking' tune to go with it. Well written !" -- John Roberts, Northampton, UK. "Thanks John! I appreciate your review!" -- R. Bennett. Like Intertwined Vines On A Post Gothic House by Tim D Ryan (1) "Ehmm..m. Sehr gut Seite! Ich sage innig..!:) bmw" -- BMW, ..., ..., .... Levi, Too. by Ken Harbec (4) "There are some heartfelt expressions that could really be combined to make a good song, but there needs to be continuity and structure otherwise it becomes too drawn out...but good ideas!" -- Barry Hutchison, Sr., Nashville, Tennessee, US. "Barry, Thank You for your frank opinion. This is a lovely piano piece that is meant to be articulated in slightly over a whisper, as in a lullaby from a Mother to her Son. " -- pewd. "Mighty big words, I like your style. Heartfelt, genuine, deep. Kind of out of the box, very original." -- alexx. "Alexx, advice from a stranger, never live inside the box. Thank You for being so kind. " -- PEWD. I Keep On Falling For You by R Bennett Okerstrom (4) "I can actually see this being a song. Nice work. I will read more of your work. " -- Kendra. "Thank you Kendra. I enjoy reading reviews and I'm glad this touched you a little." -- R. Bennett. "omg! where have you been?? so good to see you posting again! welcome back." -- km (michelle). "Thanks Michelle. I've been really busy. " -- R. Bennett. Between Your Smiles And My Regrets by Tim D Ryan (1) "i REALLY REALLY like this.. i relate to it alot.. i like your style too.. " -- Carole. ...In Hell by Brian C Lebron (6) "Purely assumption on my part...but I suspect your little angel is in heaven?" -- Mattie. "No but it's been about six months since I've seen her and I feel like hell." -- Brian L. "Yes that would feels like hell...but I'm glad you still have her :)" -- mattie. "Thanx Mattie,it's the simple things I seem to overlook." -- Brian L. "Mr.L.; I find it so beautiful to see a man profess his love for his child. I hope she knows what a talented, loving Father she has. I possibly am one of the esoteric insiders. ? PEWD" -- PEWD. "Thanx,I'm glad you enjoyed reading it." -- Brian L. Your Love For Me Is Lost by Joe Peel (1) "This blows! Keep up the great work, Yeah!" -- Joe Blow. When Boys And Girls Cry by Amy Anderson (2) "love it!!" -- carole. "really like it" -- Joenads, Buckingham, Buckinghamshire, UK. Tears Are Your Gold by Buxton (1) "I liked this alot. except for one part..."when it was a healthy pink". When I read it omitting that line it flows better...my opinion :) " -- mattie. Still No Luck by Joe Peel (2) "hilarious man this sounds like my exgirlfriend boyfriend. He is such a loser." -- george. "This was funny. I never knew there were 19 year old boy virgins though. lol" -- Crystal Hughes. Staring Hard At That Empty Bottle And Coming Up With A Better Idea by Tim D Ryan (2) ""�ll take your hand, even full of nails and thorns." i like that. well done." -- ryan severud. "Good job man I like it." -- Brian L. Shackles by Angelus Rip (1) "Nice expression." -- Alvin. Salt & Pepper by Buxton (2) "this was so sweet... :(" -- km. "nice words and images you have going on it seems a little to wordy for music and the title is burried in your lines which makes it hard to remember anyhow it is nice writing" -- fh, canada. Referal For Suicide (Cape Coma) by Matt R Kellaher (1) "I really enjoyed this. I love how it flows. Continue doing what you do and don't stop!" -- Jamie Goetz, USA. Perfect Gift by Mark A Davis (2) "After reading this a month or two later i realized it is really bad" -- Mark . "Mark don't be so hard on yourself. I liked it, and you were just expressing yourself. There's nothing wrong with that. Keep writing!" -- Chassidy D Collins, Holden, LA, US. Nothing Safe by Brian C Lebron (2) "The hate fades...I think. Anyway, nice write, displays emotions well." -- Mattie. "Thanx Mattie,I'm glad you liked it." -- Brian L. More Famous Than Mona Lisa by Carole Brogden (2) "I have a friend just like this, too, so I can relate. Well written, I like it. " -- rae. "thanx rae... i love my michael.. its such a weird relationship but amazingly cool too" -- Carole. Love Hates Us by Amy Anderson (3) "Nice work Amy...I like the darkness of this piece even if you never meant it..You have skillz, keep up the good work." -- Buxton. "I want to thank lord Bubuza for restoring my broken marriage, my wife filed for a divorce and I couldn't help but cry daily because I was about to lose my family, I begged her but she refused and said her mind was made up. I spoke to my friend for help and he told me how Lord Bubuza restored his marriage with his spell after 2 years of divorce. I immediately contacted Lord Bubuza via WhatsApp: +1 505 569 0396. �I told him my problem and he responded, He promised to help me. I did just as he told me, and I following Lord Bubuza instruction and he cast the spell. I'm so happily today that the divorce was cancelled, My Wife begged me to forgive her and we are living happily together now. Lord Bubuza is a god on earth that solves problems with his spell, He has done it for me and he can help you too.. Do you need help ?? Contact him via WhatsApp: �+1 505 569 0396 or via e-mail: [email protected]" -- Jantina van Buuren Buuren, usa, usa, usa. "I want to thank lord Bubuza for restoring my broken marriage, my wife filed for a divorce and I couldn't help but cry daily because I was about to lose my family, I begged her but she refused and said her mind was made up. I spoke to my friend for help and he told me how Lord Bubuza restored his marriage with his spell after 2 years of divorce. I immediately contacted Lord Bubuza via WhatsApp: +1 505 569 0396. �I told him my problem and he responded, He promised to help me. I did just as he told me, and I following Lord Bubuza instruction and he cast the spell. I'm so happily today that the divorce was cancelled, My Wife begged me to forgive her and we are living happily together now. Lord Bubuza is a god on earth that solves problems with his spell, He has done it for me and he can help you too.. Do you need help ?? Contact him via WhatsApp: �+1 505 569 0396 or via e-mail: [email protected]" -- Jantina van Buuren Buuren, usa, usa, usa. Levi by Ken Harbec (7) "Did your baby die?I see the pain of a parent loosing their child.How long ago? I lost a kid in 1999. I feel for your loss. Best of luck to both of you. " -- orey. "WOW, is this about James? I recognized the name, call me. We can do it right this time. You are the reason Phillip" -- PhilV. "looks like the kid wasn't wanted." -- Marty. "Orey, there is nothing worse on earth, and my heart goes out to you also. Phil, the world has changed without us, and no I will not. Marty, you are so very wrong." -- PEWD. "Proots, I am sorry. You need to come back to us that love you." -- tjm. "hey,you need to tell me these things" -- meb. "Tammy and Maryellen; sometimes things are better left unsaid. This is something I have had to do my way. Give me a bit more time, I have never left you ;)" -- P. I Dont Just Wanna by Tess Tess (1) "hmmmm..." -- Tessa. Fastest Form Of Suicide by Carole Brogden (1) "this is great!!!!!!! read some of my stuff...we have similar styles..." -- km. Dreams Of Regret (Let Me Go) by Carole Brogden (2) "this is excellent...reminds me of Massive Attack..ever listen to them? great job!!!!!!!!!" -- km. "Pure, unadluterated soul went into this, I am touched by your pain and effort to control your situation. So wise for a 17 year old, but I was also there once. Good job." -- PEWD. Can You See Me? by Desi Williams (1) "Great !" -- Alvin Gladstone, India. Are You There? by Buxton (4) "Nice work, style was a little untidy but thats rock n' roll huh!! Still some good thought provoking messages in it. good job" -- Sasu. "Cool. " -- Alvin Gladstone, India. "Very emotional and true to the core. This is what one feels waiting and waiting perhaps till eternity" -- vishy, Bangalore, Karnataka, India. "Thanks guys, your words are most welcome. I hope I can return the favour." -- Buxton. A Deeper Blue by Brian C Lebron (4) "Very nice Brian L. :)" -- mattie. "Hey thanx Mattie appreciate the good review." -- Brian L. "MAN DATS CUTE " -- Logan, Meadow lake, Saskatchewan, canada. "i wrote a song like that b4.thats weird...the first verse is like JUST like my lyrics almost.read this: The earth has reached rock bottom. I am here,at the bottom of the well, Looking up at the tiny circle of light above. There is You, Yet I can't see you, Coming to help me, You are the light guiding me out of the well. I've lost You, But for some reason, You are still there." -- Keeper of Insecurities. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 |
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