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Oh Heavenly Father by Desmond Naaten O'keeffe (2) "Oh heavenly Father" -- Pamela Griffin, St. Louis, Mo. "Are you actually trying to blame God for all the misery in this world? How absurd! I suggest you read the Word before you try to condemn it with your poetry. " -- Monte. Lunarurbanizedinsight. by Martin De Leon (1) "I DON�T GET IT" -- ISELDAR. Free At Last by Arthur Henry Isaacson (2) "Rhythm and flow somewhat awkward but the words paint a clear picture. Been there; felt that; It's all so true." -- DK, Ohio. "Ah. My parents are going through a divorce. And I, as a witness, can say that these things are true. All I can say is that I'm glad I will be gone in a few short years. Nice work on the poem." -- Kimberly De Liz. Asleep At Last by Richard Koss (1) "Rich - Thanks for my review so I checked this out as you suggested. I like it. I can see the similarity and the we are on a similar wavelength. I will pour through your other work. Thanks gain" -- Neil, UK. When My Atlantis by Toni Jaquay Lynch (1) "Very lovely. You have talent... please, keep on writing :-)" -- Kimberly De Liz. My Unavoidable Hell by Erin D. Traynum (3) "Read this over and over but I can't find any depth, only words. Your bio says you want only to live life free of conforming. Most of the people I've known who never wanted to conform to anything, lived boring lives, were unimaginative, rarely happy, and are broke, alone,or dead - or all three. Be careful what you wish for. " -- DK, Ohio. "I've read other reviews by you and you seem to be the unhappy person that you are trying to portray me as. Maybe it's because you don't believe that you can be yourself in this world and because you are a puppet to society's ways. You need to re-evaluate the way you look at other people. From all of your reviews you seem to be very miserly, but if I'm wrong about you I apologize. And by the way, I'm young and full of life and only write because I like words. I am also very happy with my life and get along with just about everyone, so I do not fit within the bounds of your stereotypical non-conformist. If you need other postive examples why don't you do some reading about the Transcendentalist Movement." -- E.D. Traynum, Atlanta, GA. "If you are such a happy person, why do you constantly write about your struggle against those who would have your conform to something you are opposed to? I find The same underlying, boring message in almost everything you've written. I'm not trying to be mean or overly critical. I'm just telling you the truth. Or is that being too much of a conformist for you? You might try writing about someone or something other than yourself. By the way, Jesus also threw merchants out of the temple for gambling. They were also non-conformists of their own time." -- D Koss. El Vientre De La Mente. (Gray Noise) by Martin De Leon (1) "I read all of your work here and could spew forth empty compliments about your imagery, but the only one I can think of is that you remind me of T.S. Eliot, my favorite poems. Also, if it were possible, I would climax and reach an orgasm from your words. Loved your poems." -- E. D. Traynum, Atlanta, GA. No Title. (Verbalremixoflovepoem) by Martin De Leon (2) "Omigod! THAT WAS SO GOOD!! :):) Keep it up." -- Christy Mack. "This poem is like a crowded room swirling with unique and intense imagery...I loved it! Especially the like "imprisoning my mind in the moon's tongue/ so she may mumble my maybes...." " -- Amber B Shields. Go to page: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 |
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