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My Release by Jasmine P Batey (4)
"wowwee! scary! So real sounding! if you want some feed back than this is it: stanza number three needs some work... it ruins some of the flow you have already established. " -- Frankie.
"Thanks Frankie, actually I terrified myself while writing this poem... although that sounds a bit silly actually saying it.... thank you for your feed back though.... I just can't understand how some one could do it to themselves..." -- jasmine, The Auther.
"nice jaz. real nice." -- sam cracker, sydney, NSW, australia.
"is that a good or bad "nice"?" -- jasmine, The Auther.


A Little Colorful Art by Angel Of Hope (1)
"This is nice! And I have to say that I totally agree with what you are saying in the description, that whoever hits something should also write a review! Keep up the good work!" -- Charlotte Juliet Weasley.


You Thirst, My Pain by Veronica Habib (3)
"wow :) I love this one!" -- Chloe, Sydney, NSW, Australia.
"Thank you Chloe lets see if i can comment today Yay!!!- wrote this incase it actually worked lol" -- Veronica Habib.
"hahahhaha It worked :)" -- Chloe, Sydney, NSW, Australia.


You Are The Beat by Jasmine P Batey (2)
"Michael Jackson! I love this! Soooo good! Very very well done. " -- Frankie.
"ha ha correct! glad you could guess, glad you like it!" -- Jasmine, The Auther.


The Sun (Creation) by Misery (1)
"Really good.... I will have to think of another challenge for you." -- Jasmine Batey.


The Only Person I Want To Be by Veronica Habib (3)
"This is wonderful. I know exactly where you're coming from" -- C.
"Wow-wee, this is a major major major poem. Well lil gal, you have great talents, keep em all coming! " -- Rock.
"Ok lets see once again if this will actually work as i have tried like 100000000 times to comment.Thankyou so much the both of you I appricate it." -- Veronica.


The Cloud by Jasmine P Batey (4)
"hmm... I like it. BUT I think you've used one to many 'away' s in the first stanza. But good job girly!" -- Frankie.
"I agree... so i have changed it, any one else got feed back?" -- Jasmine, The Auther.
"Pretty...definitely inspiring." -- Kris.
"Thank you! I was a bit worried about this one..." -- Jasmine, The Auther.


That Summer by Misery (2)
"again, very emotive, the rhyming adds a cool effect too.... (effect or affect?) any way, really good, and Waiting to read more!" -- jasmine Batey.
"effect. Thanks Jasmine" -- Misery.


911 Blues. by Terry Collett (4)
"I thought this was a beautiful and touching poem. I love how this poem goes inside the head of a woman who became a widow on 9/11, and that combined with the dull rainy sky paints an excellent picture of the sadness that this country will always think of when 9/11 comes to mind. I am new to storymania, and look forward to reading more of your poems!" -- Allison Nastoff.
"This is for Allison who is new to this site. I am an old contibutor to this site and don't bother to visit much anymore, primarily because it has become cluttered with wanna-be's like Collett. But If you wade through the debris of hundreds of Collett's postings to "Siska and Knife," you will find my comments which apply to most everything posted by TC. 911 Blues is one of TC's better attempts but merely copies the tone and emotions found in the volumes written by many others before him/her. (I don't know whether TC is male or female because there is nothing in the author's bio.) Quantity of writings do not equate to quality and this is especially true in Collett's case. This is s self publishing site and apparently the number of submissions made by any individual is unlimited. Consequently, this site is now flooded with the ramblings and hastily written words of such contributors as Terry Collett and Cedric McClester. If you can dodge these two, there are some things posted on this site worth reading. " -- Richard.
"Allison, I misspelled the title of the poem that contains my comments. It should be Yiska and Knife. Collett has posted over 2500 submissions so it can become difficult to remember one specific title. " -- Richard.


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