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You've Taken My Breath Away (My Desert Moon) by Jayme Lynne Gloria (2) "really nice & sweet " -- mikel. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. Your Presence Brings Magic by Still Lovingyou (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. You Her And Me by Carla Thomson (3) "your special always" -- Matte, US. "I intended to write tonight, but instead read some of your work. I cant read any more just now as I am drained. Your work is so personal and I fear you have been hurt so much. You show a passion in sharing this hurt that is truly moving. I will be back...." -- Neil, Uk. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. When Were Together by Sara Thomson (2) "I like it :] Its veryy strong :]" -- Devin. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick " -- Aimee Friedland. Various Titles by Michael Perry (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. Too Close For Comfort by Brady Kalt (1) "Wow this is great I could never do even a front flip." -- Jeanette . To Walk Away by Michael Perry (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. Thrown Away by Jordan Holetzky (1) "MISTAKE: sorry but this is not a screenplay, it's a song." -- Jordan. Things I've Done With Him by Twilight Jasmine (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. These Tears by Still Lovingyou (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. The Time Junky by Michael Potter (1) "And.... This seems incomplete, unfinished. By the way, there is no "E" in metaphor. -" -- Richard . The Lie Of Beauty by Jordan Holetzky (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. The Gathering by Michael Perry (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. The Devil's Eyes by Chris Lockley (3) "Good work, I look forward to reading more." -- Cedric McClester, New York, NY, United States. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. "Wow thats good! Is this the Chris Lockley who played the role of Hamlet in the Hamilton Boys, and Hamilton girls school preformance??" -- TINA, NewZealand. The Beauty Of A Woman by Christina Darnell (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. Taboo by Vodka Ryuki Mint (2) "Beautiful :)" -- Jeffrey Pillow, Phenix, VA. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. Son Of The Sun by Sasu (2) "Sasu, free us from any more of the drivel you put on this site. Just because you write it, doesn't mean it must be read or seen. Write all you want, just don't pollute our senses with this drivel. " -- Morte. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. Simple Love by Brandon Daniels Murphy Murphy (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. Same Old Story by Katherine Smith (1) "This is good. In a few words you conjure a vivid dark emotional chaos.. This made me think long and hard. " -- Neil, UK. Protected In Your Sleep (Written By Him) by Twilight Jasmine (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick compared to mine: aimeefriedland[dot]freewebspace[dotcom]" -- Aimee Friedland. Poetry-Selections by Michael Perry (1) "hi emailed u already mr. perry! " -- bambee, USA. Please Smile For Me by Carla Thomson (1) "Carla, please don't add to the pollution on this site. Learn to write first.This is drivel, and you know it. " -- morte. Nothing Left -From 'lost Highways' by Doc (2) "Yep!" -- Richard. "Wow! In the end is just you against mister death...isn't it?" -- e. rocco caldwell. My Master by Twilight Jasmine (11) "Enjoy your submissive fantasy now because not too many years from now, your master will likely no longer be interested in your sagging breasts, stretchmarked belly, widening hips, fat ass, and sloppy snatch. Like all stupid women, you are easily replaced. " -- Lester. "Having been a victim of my own master, I have to agree with you Lester. I was very stupid. You are stupid too Princess if you think it will last. You really don't believe you are the only slave do you? Have some self-respect and get a grip! You should not be proud of this at all." -- Mary. "Boy, do you have issues! This is garbage!" -- Marie. "as a story this was quite well told, after all it did elicit some heated response. if it's real it's downright sad but it's your life and sometimes lessons are learned best from bad experiences. in any event don't stop writing." -- curious. "if you are a female writer then you are what most men would want to be with in the bedroom. keep going and enjoy your freedom of speech." -- Bruce, Bethlehem, PA. "Lordie, this is hot! I enjoyed readin it very mch" -- Oscar. "Well it's obvious all the men love a good whore! " -- Mayer. "well i'm sure u people were aware of the category (EROTIC) of this poem, did u really expect to read about mother goose? stop hating!" -- Kristie, Ontario. "This kind of garbage has no place here and there is no talent in writing this garbage. That's it. It has nothing to do with mother goose or hate. You're not very bright Krisite." -- Marie. "I must agree with Lester and Marie's comments. I'm not surprised at Kristie's comments, being from Canada. Like so many other ditsy, brainwashed young girls, she believes that the truth should be suppressed if it cuts or offends. Posting a diary about your personal sex and love life does not qualify you as being a writer nor does it deserve any serious literary criticism. This site now resembles an asylum being taken over by the inmates. I guess I should remind the handful of serious writers still here of the old quatation:"When fools reign, 'tis folly to be wise."" -- Richard. "Ah! It's so refreshing to see that the future of our country is nestled safely in the bosoms of such touchy feely, don't hate, amoral, promiscuous sluts like the author and Kristie from Canada. " -- Lester. More Poems Volume 3 by Michael Perry (1) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. Manuta by Nath (1) "the first stanza of the poem was powerful....minus the last line that seemed confusing....but the rest of the poem seemed to force a rhyming scheme.... Don't write poetry just so it rhymes. This poem has so much to say....don't boggle it down in forcing rhymes. Let it flow where it want to flow. Let it pour out of us....." -- e. rocco caldwell. Lost Highways - A Collection by Doc (1) "I liked how simple this poem is. It isn't trying to be deep, but it carries a deep meaning...we are impressed by others...we are developed by the words (music) thoughts of others. I think Jim would have loved this...." -- e. rocco caldwell. Just A Sweet Nothing Poem by Jayme Lynne Gloria (1) "Forget about writing poetry. Get a job with a corny greeting card company. " -- Lester. I Never Knew by Hannibal Kildare (5) "hold on to your aces chances are your intuition could be right." -- Deenah. "don't be acting like youre' desperate and watch out for rebound." -- Victor, Miami. "don't press your luck too hard and the best thing for you to do for now is give her time to heal completely. maybe she'll realize it is you all along. victor is quite right@ rebound. GOOD LUCK!" -- Shelley, Natick, Ma. "i think you're a bloody fool!" -- Phil, UK. "i love it! thank you!" -- Dream. I Am Me (Or This Is Me...) by Chloe L Batey (2) "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. "Thankyou Aimee... I can see that you're such a wonder at words... " -- Chloe. Hidden Beauty by Carla Thomson (3) "What is this superstar week? wow Carla that was awesome... wow.." -- Matthew Mark@, USA. "Great poem. we should always look around us as we miss so many things because we don't take the time, just to stop for five minutes " -- kate kerrison. "OMG what a piece of crap! Jesus! Youre work sucks my dick" -- Aimee Friedland. Goodbye Child by Twilight Jasmine (1) "Thought provoking little gem this. The child remains untouched but is gone.. I wonder, as I think you do, if a little piece of us regrets moving from childhood? Good stuff" -- Neil, Uk. Devoted To Losing You by Buxton (2) "Nicely done. I havwe always liked your stuff, Buxton!" -- e. rocco caldwell. "Thanks rocco. I appreciate all the comments you've left on my work over the years - they have most definately helped me along and in most cases have given me reason to keep on going. Thanks again." -- Buxton. Devil Tears by Boyer Doc (1) "Huh?? " -- Lester. Acecombat04 by Chris Lockley (1) "Higly creative. Write on young man" -- Cedric McClester, New York, NY, United States. A Night In Paradise by Erotique Jenn (3) "If you read one of these, you've read them all. Technically, this is neither prose nor poetry. Another one who posts her diary on this site. " -- Lester. "We should pity the poor insecure people who feel the need to clutter the site with this junk. Once again Lester, you are 100% correct." -- Mayer. "I disagree she gave you a fair warning -- and yet you still chose to read it. i found it really good made me so fucking horny I just fucked a remote controle. keep it up." -- anon. 4 More Poems by Michael Perry (1) "very good!!" -- Cecille, HW. 3017.9 Miles by Twilight Jasmine (2) "This site needs good poetry and short stories, not diaries about your love life. Stop using this site for your own self-centered gratification. Nobody cares about your personal problems, we all have are own to deal with. Call the suicide hot line. " -- Lester. "I agree with you Lester. There is nothing well written about any of the junk that "Jasmine" has posted. Tell it to a therapist Jasmine! It sure sounds like you need one!" -- Mayer. 2 Poems by Michael Perry (1) "Another beautifully written poems. I am a big fan of your work!" -- Bambee. 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