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Definitely Beige by Camryn Chase (2)
"I definetly like it. It really conveys the feeling of living the same repetitive life while others pass you by. Good job." -- Meg.
"the rithm takes you on this circular journey trough "beigeness". it reminds me of " as good as it gets". excellent poem." -- iseldar kay.


Rose And A Lonely Tear by Vicky Kearney (3)
"I've never been particularly into poems, but these were really good, especially the first one. And the second one was so sad. And they are short, which I like when it comes to poems!" -- Paula S, Hamilton, Scotland.
"Keep writing Vicky! You are off the a good start!" -- R. Bennett Okerstrom.
"You have got real talent. Keep at it." -- Ian Goodall.


Ghost, A Love Story by Rebecca (Becca) Fitzgerald (2)
"my bad english unabbles an extense review altough i unerstood the poem. just some lines to say i loved it." -- iseldar kay.
" This is very good, I can never write a poem this long, I always get stuck. This sounds like it really came from the heart... I understand... keep writing!" -- Halle, OR.


Freefall by Rebecca (Becca) Fitzgerald (1)
"excellent poem. in love we are all icarus. " -- iseldar kay .


No Halter, A Collection by Cathy Wilde (3)
"That was great! For some reason this poem really spoke to me and I very much enjoyed it." -- Meg.
"Touching song. Please do more. ---The Welk" -- Welker, Cornish, NH, usa.
"I did not know you were a poet, but I think you are fantastic at it. Everything you touch you do well. I love you" -- mark henderson, Kapaa, HI, Kauai.


Live & Die by Dominique A. Thornton (6)
"VERY GOOD I THINK EVERY ONE SHOULD READ THIS. IT HAS LOTS OF FEELINGS & MAKES YOU THINK." -- PATRICIA THORNTON, MAYSVILLE , KENTUCKY, USA.
"WONDERFUL WORK GOOD WORDING !!!!!!!!" -- ALLY TOMSON, SPRINGFEILD, IL., USA.
"HOW DO YOU DO IT? READ THIS PEOPLE IT'S VERY WONDERFUL, THIS GIRL KNOWS WHAT SHE IS DOING!!!!" -- KELLY YOKES, CHAGICO, IL., USA.
"Ummm...I think that you need to re-submit this and take the caps out. It looks like something that a 5 year old would write." -- Becca Fitzgerald.
"I think your poem is the best it was really good. Good job!" -- Aleksandra, Chicago, ILLinois.
"I can remember how young you were when you wrote this. with life also follows with death. and one is left doing much searching within their heart trying to understand things. you expressed your thoughts wounderfully in your writing and i'm very proud of you. i hope you stick with your writing as a way to always vent your thoughts.may god keep blessing you my young one. mom" -- annieanna, tampa, florida.


Meg A Girl Who Has No Last Name by Patricia A. Thornton (8)
"hey was that about the review i gave that "friendship"poem? if it was, sorry! i didnt mean to offend! there was a review board so i reviewed!" -- meg.
"Ahahahahhaa....oh....oh, man. That's the funniest damn thing at the site. Whoo! ROTFLMAO! Ah, poor Meg...ahhaha....damn....let me catch ahold of myself for a minute...LOL-Oh, goddamn...that's the best. I have nothing to say about this poem (good or bad), but thanks for brightening my day. Ahaha, Meg's got a Hate Club." -- Tyrant.
"Tyrant, What is your problem?" -- Meg.
"I was tickled by the response one of your reviews got. I certainly have no room to talk, since I probably have eighty people here who want to see my dreams impaled on a spear, but for one to devote time to a poem about your bitterness just puts a smile on my face." -- Tyrant.
"Boring????" -- Blythe.
"Meg, pay more attention to what you say, then try to follow it, because For Us By Us is not going to get you a friend. Stupid, Stupid, Stupid" -- Santa .
"cheap psychology and chat room boredom" -- iseldar kay.
"This poem sucks and so does your spelling. Sorry, sad but true." -- Michelle.


Passing Thought, A Collection by Rose Trimovski (2)
"i never read poems titled "friendship" and this poem has just reminded me why i dont" -- Meg.
"nice poem rosie, now i want a bear now lol, nice poems :) i'm proud of ur work,doesn't matter how old they are but they are works of art and you are a very talented girl :)" -- Nelson.


Bittersweet, A Collection by Lissa N Metz-Gomez (4)
"Oh my God that is so perverted but so funny!hhahahahah" -- Meg.
"i read about 1/2 of all of your poems submitted and i wasnt dissapointed with any. i love your style and metaphors-keep it up." -- Meg.
"wow...I'm impressed! Wish u would post these seperately though. Would make for easier reading. Think about it. :)" -- Michelle.
"They were posted individually at first, but Storymania combined them into an anthology for some reason. Sorry!" -- Lissa, Fort Lewis, WA, USA.


Not Caring by Lewd Muse (2)
"I find it difficult to swallow that twenty have read this piece and none have reviewed. This review itself will probably ward others off from hitting the button and donating their two cents, but I post it anyway." -- Lewd Muse.
"At this very moment, there have been 62 visitors, my dear! Aren't I sweet? I review your work. I tell you I love it. Well, it is good. I'm not sure why people would not review it. "Not Caring" is my favorite, and I shall add it to my web page. Please visit there... hey_jenn_babe.tripod.com/jenn/ Love ya! " -- Angel (Jennifer), Baton Rouge, Louisiana, USA.


Invisible by Michael Hunter (2)
"Not only a master poet with intelligent thoughts and the ability to flow well inbetween stanzas, Michael Hunter is a man of the future. Copyright 2001? Well done. I'm a sucker for good poets, and you're of a rare breed. " -- Tyrant.
"This is good :)" -- Michelle.


Beyond by Rod L Bro (1)
"That was the worst piece of crap I've read in a while. Though I did like the short-but-sweet description." -- Tyrant.


Places In The Sky by Sebastian Ayalde (1)
"When I was a little girl I wondered the same-thing, until I was in a car accident and realized there is a place, it's called Heaven! I love this poem because it's nice to know I'm not insane, someone also believes." -- Rhonda DePietto Ocasio, Central Islip, New York, usa.


A Moment In The Dark by Stamper (2)
"Much better than any of the other crap at this site. Finally, a true poet. A good job at capturing the importance of misdirection, emotion, sadness, et cetera. " -- Tyrant.
"Braaavooo!!!!" -- Kate, FL, USA.


The Difference by Wayne F. Smith (1)
"Way to regurgitate what the Bible said in a gay children's poem and fail to shine light on anything new or enlightening. Bravo." -- Tyrant.


Fishing by Wayne F. Smith (1)
"You have a talent for forcing rhymes in harder than forcing a tin man through a keyhole." -- Tyrant.


Guardian Angels by Wayne F. Smith (1)
"I swear to God, these are written for children. And since you absolutely MUST rhyme in fluid simplicity with each of your lines, do change "They will not lead us astray" to "They will lead us not astray", as it flows better, in my humble opinion." -- Tyrant.


Alcohol Hallucinatons by Saskia Dodd (1)
"If I gave an award for a putrid assemblage of meaningless words which held fast behind a facet of pointlessness, I'd give it to your poem. While poetic brevity may be a virtue, it's high time you one-stanza'd wonders put some meaning behind these midget works. Two thumbs down, and another up your arse." -- Tyrant.


Bulimia by Saskia Dodd (1)
"Very good description of a bulimic. Been there, done that, overcome that. Thanks." -- Kate, FL, USA.


Only Pain And Love by Alex Mathew (1)
"Unbelievable! Every word was honest and true. I have been there and felt it too." -- Mandi Daddona, West Nyack, New York, USA.


My Battle With The Black Angel by Silents (1)
"excelent rithm and images. i admire your hunger for life, the value you give to it and the way you expressed it here." -- iseldar kay.


Emotion Of The Night by Silents (3)
"Thank God. That was one of the best descriptions I've read in a while. I've read a whole lot of crap on this site, and it's nice to see a good poet. Keep it up and try exploring, instead of clich�d love poems and such, philosophy, brooding emotion, et cetera. You might have a talent for it." -- Tyrant.
"My first thought is "WOW". I have been in your shoes before. Lying peacefully next to someone and admiring her while she sleeps. Your poem describes the last night I spent with the love of my life. Thank you." -- Alexander Barrett, Spanaway, Wa, USA.
"Thank you both for your comments." -- silents.


The Moon Doesn't Know What It Does by Michael Talbot (3)
"No shallow thoughts here. Keep it up. And no mistakes!erika" -- H. E. Henze, Mount Vernon, WA.
"Very interesting, written in an Allen Ginsberg sort of way. Keep up the good work." -- Kate, , FL, USA.
"Life is not a rehearsal. We should be thankful for what we have and remember those that are not so fortunate. Nice view points. The moon holds many secrets, as it looks down on those in need. skinsfan" -- Bob T., Palm Bay, Fl., USA.


The Love That's Left by Kate E Hillard (1)
"This poem is wonderful and these feelings are very common. But some of language is confusing and contradicting. but I thought it was great." -- Stacie Royse, Normal, IL.


A Love So Pure by Virginia A. Sheppard (1)
"This is one of the cutest poems I have ever read. It describes exactly how it feels to be in love and to have those feelings." -- mandy, normal, il.


Through My Own Eyes by Naadira Shante Rushing (2)
"I am really feeling her poem and can understand where she is coming from. I hope she continues writing poetry and never gives up this gift she has. you r great, not better than me though sike nah you know who this is bye sis" -- Irisha, Newark, NJ, USA.
"I LIKE YOUR POEM, ANDI THINK THAT YOU ARE VERY TALENTED KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. KILLA CAM" -- KILLA CAM.


Mislead by Naadira Shante Rushing (2)
"ok all of ur work that ive seen so far sucks. plus dont write in all caps." -- meg.
"I'am so proud of you. I like mislead and the poem you wrote on www.poetry.com I know you have a real talent. Shante keep working on writing and get into as many writing classes as you can, also enter in writing contest for scholarships I know you can do it. People want to here about what's really going on in the world with our youth and how we,and they can make it better, so get in a little deeper tell us what's going on in your community and in your mind about what you see and how it effects you and your future. Love Yah Mon " -- mon, Chapel Hill, North Crolina.


Ode To The Girl With An Unspellable Name by Tim Scaserini (2)
"That is a sweet poem; full of honesty and innocense." -- H.E.Gurlitt, Mt. Vernon, WA.
"i like that poem..it has nice rythm and it's not too sappy..those are the worst..." -- sahara.


The Mirror by Mandi Daddona (3)
"I loved this poem, and I found it to be so true. " -- Paula S, Hamilton, Scotland.
"i really like this one alot, it reminds me of me and you looking at each other... love you honey!" -- BOB, valley Cottage , NY, USA.
"I thought this poem was written well. It had a good point I could understand. It was not so abstract that I needed to talk to the writter to understand it which I like. It did seem a bit short though. Maybe you could make it longer. but overall not bad." -- Andy Howard, Normal, Illinios, USA.


The Shadow by Mandi Daddona (1)
"Wow!!! I have gone back and re-read it a couple of times and each time it touches me a different way. VERY GOOD!!!!" -- Alex Mathew, St. James, NY, usa.


The Infant by Gary Thompson (2)
"You must be a young guy- get closer to emotions that YOU feel- then our hearts will beat with yours. Keep it up, we all started somewhere. Erika " -- H. E Gurlitt, Mt. Vernon, WAshington, USA.
""Nobody wanted this yousgster to die" <--check spelling here! Otherwise, a well written poem! I like it! :)" -- C G L Davies, Cardiff, Wales, UK.


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