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Sweet Honeymoon by Dri Cook (3) "Nice work dri, As always you capture the scene and your visual aspect of the moment is wonderfully serene." -- Buxton. "beautiful Dri..." -- km. "thank you both, Buxton and km. Glad you enjoy my work." -- Dri. Your Sorrow by B Galindo (3) "well said..." -- km. "i really liked this - the word is relied on too heavily to mask bad behavior." -- just a guy. "Great !" -- Alvin, India. Wot, Do Guys Really Need? It's A Mystery. by Louisa Duncan (3) "LD--good rhymes; the message is clear. Whom you seek, may be in the Church, Dear." -- dw, VA. "Good work as always louisa! I like your freedom of expression in your work, im sorry to hear that the tears still roll, and the pain still crushes, but on the lighter note, Im sure it wasn't your fault. The person you write of has been blinded by his own single-mindedness, and hates himself for the pain he has caused, his thoughts are always with you I believe. I hope that you can still at least talk to this man, and not get dragged into a pit of empathy and weariness.X" -- Buxton. "A GOOD MAN WANT'S A GOOD WOMAN BUT WHAT MEN ARE YOU ATRACTED TO? ARE THEY GOOD MEN THAT MIGHT WANT A REAL RELATIONSHIP? OR DO THEY JUST WANT A GOOD TIME ONCE IN A WILE OR A PLACE TO STAY FOR A WILE , MAKE A MAN HAVE RESPECT IF YOU DON'T THEY WON'T, DON'T GIVE IN WHEN A MAN IS IN A RUSH FOR SEX MAKE A MAN WAIT IF HE DON'T YOU KNOW HES NOT THE ONE, EVEN IF YOU LOVE THEM. FROM A MANS POINT OF VIEW" -- K. POFFENBERGER. When I... by Lucy Midnight (2) "this poem sux " -- Clay Smith. "I have not had time to read all of your body of work. But what I have seen greatly impresses me. It is amazing that someone can write such honest and provacative poems and stories all out of the same mind. WHat I have read I like alot. Keep up the work." -- Collins, IN, IN, US. What You Took For Granted by Lucy Midnight (1) "Lucy, they say indecisiveness is the key to flexibility." -- dw, VA. They Came From Afar by Kennedy O Obohwemu (2) "good job KO, fine rhymes. have to think troubles can be traced back to the Garden and the human heart." -- dw, VA. "Hey i think i know what your getting at and maybe my Poem (Lets face the music en-trance )might help you find what your looking for .good work._" -- Stuart Eric Longridge, Belfast. The Plight Of Man by Skyler Drevan (2) "Depressing and cold yet inspiring...nice work." -- km. "Nice work! Bitter, cold, yearning, and true. Great stuff, will keep an eye out for your work, superbly written." -- Buxton. The Novel China Doll by Rae (1) "This is a very powerful piece...nice work" -- km. The Message In A Dream by Thomas Buck (1) "Hi all! I want to establish the same guest book. Prompt as?" -- Li, New York, NY, united states. The Glum by Marie Karr (2) "I liked the title but this poem is just too descriptive to make any sense and have any meaning. Tone down on the adjetives a little bit for your next poem. " -- Steven. "You lack alot of talent. How long have you been writing for? I would suggest trying something else because your imagination is very limited and you style isn't very good. Maybe you could try going to school again and seeing what you missed." -- Gary Kolarski, Arlington, Virginia, USA. The Apples Are Gone by Dri Cook (8) "When you eat the poison apple ...you are dead! and when you want a handsome prince, sometimes you must kiss a frog." -- Brian O Neil. "and they don't call it an " Adams Apple " for nothing!" -- Brian O Neil. "Frogs also have hopes and they also can become princes. It all depends if we believe in our dreams. Thanks for your review, Brian" -- Dri. "the first ten lines strike me hard--could be many of us; no further need of frogs and such" -- dw, VA. "yes, dw, it could be many of us. Thanks again for your review." -- Dri. "This is full of hope, it's upbeat & positive, your apparently an eternal optimist in love & life...and there is nothing wrong with that!" -- RAM, usa. "I am RAM, thank God I am an eternal optimist. Thanks again for your review. " -- Dri. "Hey Dri I'm finally back. Great piece you got here. I totally agree with your view on "Frogs"... awesome stuff. "can't you see the apples are gone?" That was really powerfull... it made me go "wow". Touching... I love it." -- ryan severud. That Which Heals All Wounds by Mike Schiller (1) "'after changes upon changes, we are more or less the same' - Paul Simon" -- dw, VA. Tangles Of My Heart by Lucy Midnight (2) "This is beautiful but it ends too abruptly...you should really consider finishing it. I like it alot and I am pretty picky when it comes to these things...*smile" -- km. "fix your typos, dummy." -- Harry. Rumbles N' Fights by Lucy Midnight (1) "your relationships are as sick as your work, what a suprise!" -- Harry. Realization by Louisa Duncan (1) "Simply briliant louisa" -- Buxton. Poetry, You'll Always Be Sweet by Dri Cook (2) "Indeed! How sweet a good thing is for the soul!" -- RAM, usa. "yeah, it is, isn't it? Thanks, RAM. And YOU know who told me to never stop writing with my heart, don't you:-)" -- Dri. People Who Should Be Phased Out by Higgins (1) "Why, Higgins, you really are Robin Masters." -- Thomas Magnum. Open Coffin by Sasu (4) "You should dedicate this poem to RRRRRalph !" -- Brian O Neil. "Who's ralph? " -- Sasu. "someone is using my name, I did not leave this Ralph review. But I will leave this...do you rhyme or not...it is very random. " -- Brian O Neil. "Hmmm quite. But on the other hand..Bite dick." -- Sasu. My Choice? by Thomas Buck (4) "TB - made me think a bit. so assert your power: don't be blue, choose anew." -- dw, VA. "you are so right! The one with power, no matter what type of power, seems to always win. How unfair, isn't it?" -- Dri. "Power is an allusion of desire especially in one sided relationships, let go of the desire & power loses it's base and can no longer manipulate you! You always have a choice. " -- RAM, usa. "Thank you all for your comments. A simple concept I think. When one person has a stronger feel for the other it can create a disadvantage. I have observed this in love and friendship. Thanks RAM. Sometimes its hard to get past the desire but I agree once overcome choice is regained." -- Thomas. Mirror Talk by Dri Cook (2) "Dri, believe you are the most prolific non native english speaking writer i have ever enocuntered--BRAVO! carry on." -- dwells, VA. "I'm flattered, dwells. Thank you so much!" -- Dri. Love At First Sight by Dri Cook (2) "I enjoyed this one lots Dri... I liked honesty in it, a free & open spontaneous write well done. Will email you some additional ideas for this piece Keep writing with your heart and you will never go wrong!" -- RAM, usa. "thanks RAM. I just posted the other one here. Thanks for the ideas. I changed the title into "IT was love at first sight" to have them both here, ok?" -- Dri. Lets Face The Music En-Trance by Stuart Eric Longridge (1) "i get the idea...but look more closely at mine...it's self-explanatory...great job though!" -- kennedy, abraka, delta, nigeria. Lame Overused Expressions by Higgins (1) "well constructed and funny too!" -- e. rocco caldwell. Kleidoscopic Sky by Buxton (1) "I love mind poems." -- Dri. Just For Today by Dri Cook (4) "Prose full of wisdom expressed eloquently & honestly! I share your sentiments with a humble heart. Thanks for writing this!" -- RAM, usa. "thanks, RAM! I'm glad you share my sentiments. What a crazy world we live, but not impossible at all to make it a little bit better." -- Dri. "The choice is yours to make but whatever you decide continue to write with your heart! When time permits I will send you "Frightened Little Bee" in quatrain for your review." -- RAM, usa. "thanks, RAM. Will be looking forward to it. And how could I not write with my heart? It is as if you were to tell a bird to fly without its wings..." -- Dri. Indigo Blood by Buxton (2) "I really like the title, but the rest of this is too out there for me" -- Steven. "I really like this, I can really relate to it. Although you may want to change the title. But other than that it's good." -- Lucy. Impulse by Marie Karr (2) "I like this very much and I don't impress easily so good job Marie!!" -- km (michelle). ""I might burst/ Like orgasm without poking" How poetic! It's almost Shakespherian!" -- Steven. I Love Words by Dri Cook (4) "would be a sad place without them, you use them quite well." -- Just A Guy. "thank you, JAG!Yeah...they are fun to be with! I can tell, they mean the world to me!" -- Dri. "GREAT!" -- kennedy, abraka, DELTA STATE, NIGERIA. "thanks, Kennedy...I too love this poem..." -- Dri. Hurt...... by Buxton (5) "boy...what a poem! I like the way your thoughts flow. This is so real! I can relate so well! It seems you are going thru the same I went!! If you get to read some of more writings, you might understand what I'm saying." -- Dri. "Thanks dri, I have read some of your work and find it very uplifting in a sense that we both relate to, thanks again." -- Buxton. "If you set this to music you've got yourself a #1 chart topping hit here" -- Steven. "Strong words Buxton ! I can see you really can't get close to anyone, I'm positive this person wasn't crying over you,but rather the missed opportunity. We all sometimes look back and wonder what might have been, and I cerainly have two places in my heart for two people whom I will ALWAYS love, it doesn't mean I want them back !!! I'm sure this person did not mean to smother you or make you run away screaming.Maybe she was just letting you know that she still thinks of you and is horrified that you have become so angry about it.However, this poem has certainly inspired me to say f*** off to the world, and I'm hoping your obvious anger does not ruin any fond memories. L x" -- Louisa Duncan. "you can't force a square peg in a round hole, some things aren't meant to be." -- Bryan Brazeau. Hidden Secret by Buxton (3) "nice. " -- Dri. "well done" -- dw, VA. "Cheers guys." -- Buxton. Goodbye My Friend by Thomas Buck (2) "This is a great poem Tom. It does a good job of showing how some of your greatest friendships can go sour in a minute and sometimes you don't know why or what you can do to save them, if you can do anything at all, other than say goodbye" -- Steven. "Very good, very good! perhaps the rhymes could be more consistent, but still enjoyable. thanks for offering it." -- dw, Va. Frightened Little Bee by Dri Cook (8) "bad that you were violated, good that you forgave,bad if you wrote about it, to take it to your grave. " -- Brian O Neil. "I'm afraid you did not understand this piece, Brian. It has nothing to do with being violated. I had to write it down, because I am living a very beautiful moment in my life that has everything to do with it. Thanks anyway, my dear. Your reviews are always welcome." -- Dri. "A creative & profound write, very well done!" -- RAM, USA. "thanks, RAM. Yes, you went straight to the target. It is one of my deepest writings so far." -- Dri. "I liked this a lot!! " -- km. ""thanks, km. Glad you liked it. This really happened to me during a therapy session. From that moment on, the feeling and the sensation that we're not a mistake grew stronger and I had to write it down not only to register it but also to share with people and perhaps to help them to understand that we are never just a coincidence. It was one of the most beautiful moments in my life ever." -- " -- Dri. "I connected with this piece the first time I read it & understood it's power & truth! The re-write offers a positive punch in the end. Just a thought, if you structured your stanza's into quatrains... it would be even more effective in my humble opinion. Wonderful write!" -- RAM, usa. "Wow... talk about DEEP... so was he the flower you took the pollen (love) from to go make the honey (home)? And found out he was the honey (home) afterall?" -- ryan severud. For The First Time... by Gwendolen McCloud (1) "Bravo! Wonderful write Gwen!" -- RAM, usa. Dreaming Nothing by Seth Jordan (1) "i think i hear you speaking Seth - so what if most don't for there are those who do - " -- dwells, VA. Digging In by Marie Karr (1) "again I am quite impressed with your work...more, more!!" -- KM. Chakras by Stuart Eric Longridge (3) "Nice work. I liked the flow of this, it also has good wordage and style. Good." -- Buxton. "This is a little weird but for some reason I liked it. It reminded me of that kids song "there's a little wheel turing in my heat" (least I think that's the name of it, I'm a lttle rusty wwhen it comes to the titles of kids songs.)BTW, what the heck is a chakra anyway? " -- Steven. "Bravo! Short, sweet and to the point. Good vision and a brightly painted picture. I would like to see this in lyrics." -- Brian O Neil. Back To Ashes by Karina Lizet Perez (1) "a few type-o's sorry" -- Karina. A World With You by Rae (1) "I love this Rae...I really like the last three lines "A different world, I'm afraid to visit afraid it takes too long to forget" It really made me think...thanks! " -- KM (Michelle). 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