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You'll Never Be Famous by Little Johnny (9) "You Are right Kid....I Am stupid and I know I'll Never Be famous. I try Not To Be so retarded but I can't Help it. I Live a Boring Life and this Site Is all I have..." -- Luke, USA. "That's cool, thats all you had to say dude. Water under the bridge" -- Lj. "Nice try whoever I never wrote this.." -- Luke, USA. "Ok Maybe I Did Write It. So What.." -- Luke, USA. "Ya a Moron kid" -- Luke, USA. "Thats what i've been telling your dumbass....can you not be creative at all. I think you really do have shit for brains. The only thing you seem to be able to create is more names for yourself. Your a catfish just like the lady in that movie. I know I make you mad and I love it! You know you can't do shit about it....Your just as unimportant as the rest of us ha ha" -- Lj. "I think Lj is right Luke, you are about as creative as a piece of drywall" -- L>O>N>D>B. "I hear a lid don't U" -- Luke, USA. "A lid?" -- Lj. The Day L Went To Catch As Lion by Saranjit Bhambra (1) "Your great at using imagery in your poetry" -- Lj. Sound And Silence by Meredith (1) "Reminds me of that line that Seth Green worked so hard on in 'Party Monster'....Reciting it with one hand and his nose in the air, One night....I dreamt....of Guacamora " -- Lj. Odd Work Of Art. by Terry Collett (1) "Man, have a twisted mind? Using it in a creative and productive way though. No comedy in this one though...." -- Lj. Meaningless Drivel For The Masses by D A Ash (1) "whoa!!!!" -- jojo. L Picked Some Flowers For The Woman That L Loved..... by Saranjit Bhambra (1) "Lovely poem, sweet and simple and made me think of loved ones. Great" -- Lj. Gordplatter's Analysis. by Terry Collett (1) "I always like how dark and visual your work is but man you got a lot of stuff. It takes FORever to scroll on down and find your newest one. Glad it's all free though" -- LJ. Faded U by Luke Mahossal (12) "This one shows exactly what I'm talking about. Thanks for being the pathetic bitch you are. Making fun of you is starting to be my favorite thing to do.....You know you spell "for sure" 4 shore in all your trash and now you think you have a girl too, please.....not even an ugly ass chick would hook up with an idiot like you. You are the number 1 retard on this site. You probably think you have some type of talent for getting feedback from poetry.com You probably even paid them to publish you. You are one weird fuck. Your like that lady from that movie Catfish. For real ha ha...That IS who you are! At least you can thank me for teaching you how to spell drivel" -- Lj. "Soon My Boy Soon" -- Luke, USA. ""4 shore" yo" -- Lj. "Luke, you make yourself look like a big dufus. You don't seem very clever or entertaining and obviously not very intellegant either. Lj your kind of funny though and your poetry is not that bad but what do you mean by catfish" -- L "actually a 200 IQ and attended best school in the country ty for ya comment kid." -- Luke, USA. "Oh a "200" iq, didn't know it went up that high. Well I guess I'm dealing with a genius then. Enlighten me Catfish genius. Make something clever up, hopeless idiot. Stupid ass bitch" -- Lj. "Soon I will know everything running files now." -- Luke, USA. "You know whats funny.....I'm on public access so even if there were a way for you to "run files" it wouldn't do any good...." -- LJ. " 4913 East 83rd Avenue Merrillville, Indiana 46410" -- Luke, USA. "Lie ya way to hell kid.. ha" -- Luke, USA. "Yeah, your one to talk. What you leave your address for you want me to send you a letter or something" -- Lj. "Nice made up address ha classic material.. satan awaits 4 U" -- Luke, USA. Another Face Poem by Little Johnny (10) "This really does suck lacks talent" -- John, Chicago, USA, IL. "Thank you "John" for your constructive critism. I'll be sure to throw some of your valid pointers in my next poem and use your skilled assesment to make my work better. I'll be sure to throw in some smaller words that your caveman intellect may be able to decipher. Hey Gill, my name is John too!" -- Lj. "Who? Get a Life Kid.." -- John, USA. "Click.." -- Luke, USA. "Thanks again retard" -- Lj. "This is your last warning before you are in court." -- Patrick, Chicago, USA. "Hey fuck you "Patrick"" -- Lj. "Luke, John, Patrick and Matt...All the same retard. Ok got it" -- Lj. "You will be served monday morning." -- Patrick, USA. "Hey LJ were served Monday morning? lmao!!!" -- me. 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