Truepoint (2)
Emmett O Saunders Iii

 

BRENDA
With no way back.

CARL
(grimly)
Looks that way.

BRENDA
At least we're safe in here.

CASSIE
Are we?

CARL
I don't think so. We can't wait here like
sitting ducks for slaughter.

BRENDA
Please…

CASSIE
Where do we go?

CARL
Anyplace but here. Let's get some provisions
and clear out before Scott catches up.


BRENDA
If he finds us …

CASSIE
(firmly)
He won't.

CARL
I'll make sure of that. We've got a good head start.
Ought to be able to find something before nightfall.

BRENDA
Out here? Away from the boat?
Do you think that's safe?

CASSIE
I don't there's anything safe on this island.

CUT TO:

EXT. BEACH
Scott is several miles away from the boat, standing on a dune, trying to see above the tree line.

SCOTT
C'mon, I know you're bound to be working toward the cliffs.

A sudden rustling in the jungle draws his attention.

SCOTT
(cautiously)
Hello?

A deep-throated growl sounds close by.

SCOTT
Shit…it's an animal.

He hurriedly scans for cover.

SCOTT
Not a damn cave in sight.

CUT TO:

ANOTHER ANGLE as he begins running for the shoreline. Bounding out of the jungle, a man-eating tiger makes a bee line for Scott and just misses the chance to nab him for breakfast. Scott wades out from shore, stripping off his shirt and plunging headlong into the waves to swim farther away from his adversary. The tiger quickly loses interest and goes back to the duffel bag to scavenge.

SCOTT
Now what? I need that stuff.

He flails at the water surrounding him, knowing he's helpless to prevent the tiger from taking anything.

CUT TO:

CLOSE SHOT as flying darts are visible flying at the tiger. None find their mark, but significantly irritate the animal to move on.

CUT TO:

ANOTHER ANGLE as Scott sees his apparent rescuers emerge from the jungle. They are tall, slender, with golden brown textured skin and stern, inquisitive features. All are pointing at him as struggles to maintain his footing in the undertow threatening to drag him farther away from the shore.

SCOTT
Looks like the rescue party has arrived.

He moves toward shore as several of the tribe members reach him. They grab him roughly.

SCOTT
Hey…I'm not here to hurt anybody.

HUNT LEADER
Sinchi Roca?

SCOTT
(warily)
Don't know the tongue.

He tries unsuccessfully to shake off the guards holding him. The hunt leader grabs his hair and pulls Scott's mouth open.

HUNT LEADER
O Mayta Capac?

SCOTT
(forces a grin)
Hey, guys. I'm just a man.

CUT TO:

WIDER SHOT as all the warriors freeze. Their faces are all searching the hunt leader for direction. The hunt leader is surprised, fearful, yet remains unemotional and in control.

HUNT LEADER
Man?… Manco Capac?

SCOTT
(smiles and nods)
Yeah, that's me…

HUNT LEADER
Manco Capac.
(subtitle: son of the sun god)

All warriors kneel, before the hunt leader motions for them to rise. The guards release their tight grip on Scott, but keep him in hand.

HUNT LEADER
(points toward jungle)
Vaya conselo Tillca Yupanqui.
(subtitle: You go with us to see Tillca Yupanqui)

SCOTT
(nods his assent)
Lead on. I'm right with you.

WIPE TO:

EXT. CLIFF FACE
Carl, Cassie and Brenda reach the summit of the cliff, and POV as they view the jungle below from the high vantage overlook.

BRENDA
It's beautiful.

CASSIE
(fearful)
Dangerous.

CARL
Sorry about the honeymoon.

CASSIE
(manages a faint smile)
We're together. It's all that matters.

BRENDA
And getting down from here.

They all smile briefly, then continue.

WIPE TO:

INT. JUNGLE
Various sights of plant and animal life draw Cassie and Brenda's attention as Carl moves steadily forward. Suddenly, he draws up short. Motions them down and they crouch, watching a line of tribesmen approach through the trees.

CASSIE
(whispers)
Are they human?

CARL
Quite. But not friendly.

BRENDA
They look Indian.

CARL
Yes. South American.

CASSIE
(looking intently)
Colombian, maybe.

CARL
Shh … they mustn't find us.

CUT TO:

ANOTHER ANGLE as the Scout Leader pauses to listen. He motions for the followers to fan out for a swift search.

CUT TO:

CLOSE SHOT of Carl, Cassie and Brenda.

BRENDA
(whispers)
We're done for.

CARL
(glancing sternly)
Shut up!

CUT TO:

WIDER ANGLE as the tribesmen begin beating the bushes. Suddenly, a lion's roar sounds very close. All of the group freeze, waiting instructions from the Scout Leader. He signals and they reassemble, moving quickly out of sight.
As they vanish, a large lion enters the clearing.

CARL
(whispers)
Let's hope it follows them.

BRENDA
(whispers)
Instead of us.

CASSIE
(whispers)
Wait, something's coming.

BRENDA
(whispers)
I didn't hear anything.

SPECIAL EFX as a rumbling begins. The ground shakes slightly, then begins a distinct more pronounced quake.

CARL
The island's unstable.

As if in response, the lion runs off into the jungle.

CARL
We've gotta get out of here…now!

POV as they begin running away from the site, along the same path used by the tribesmen.

CASSIE
Honey, we'll run into them this way.

CARL
They know the jungle. We don't.


BRENDA
Wish I knew a way home.

A branch snaps forward toward Brenda's eyes. As she reaches to push it aside, CAMERA ZOOMS to the branch.

CUT TO:

CLOSE SHOT of a branch being pulled back. It reveals a well-laid out stone hewn city, hidden in the thickest part of the jungle. Its primitive beauty is complemented by the inhabitants who are hard at work in all areas of the site. A huge pyramid, flat on top, overlooks the entire city.

CUT TO:

ANOTHER ANGLE as the Hunt Leader's tribesmen take Scott to the opening of a large temple area. POV as they enter. Scott glances around carefully, noting ritual fires illuminating the interior. An assembled group fixes its gaze on the newcomer and the Hunt Leader.

CUT TO:

DIFFERENT ANGLE as Scott rounds a corner of stone pillar, he sees the back side of a naked man, who has been chained to two identical pillars. He is facing the assembled group and doesn't notice Scott's entrance until Scott speaks.

SCOTT
What the hell's going on here?

The chained man's head turns slightly to identify the voice. It is Burke.

BURKE
(groggily)
Glad you could make it.

SCOTT
Burke?

BURKE
What took you so long?

HUNT LEADER
Mudo.
(subtitle: Silence)

SCOTT
Kinda busy with the others.

HUNT LEADER
Silenque!

The leader bows to the assembled council.

COUNCIL LEADER
Como se llama este?
(subtitle: How is this one called?)

HUNT LEADER
Manco Capac.
(subtitle: son of the sun god)

COUNCIL LEADER
Tanto desconcertado.
(subtitle: there is much confusion.)

HUNT LEADER
(points to Burke)
Quien este llamado?
(subtitle: who is that one called?)

COUNCIL LEADER
Manco Capac.

SCOTT
I'd just like to say …

COUNCIL LEADER
Silenque!

Motions to the guards who take Scott, strip him and chain him to the opposite pillar, across from Burke.

SCOTT
Hey, wait a minute. I'm an American citizen.

BURKE
Doesn't mean a damn thing here.

SCOTT
I want a lawyer.

BURKE
Wouldn't help, either way.

SCOTT
Either way?

BURKE
If we live … or die.

HUNT LEADER
Quien optar por este?
(subtitle: who decides upon this?)

COUNCIL LEADER
(glaring at both men)
Uno querer testarudo.
(subtitle: one will die.)

HUNT LEADER
(nods)
El verdadero dio quiero vivir.
(subtitle: the true god will live.)

COUNCIL LEADER
(vehemently)
Uno querer testarudo.

WIPE TO:
EXT. JUNGLE
Carl, Cassie and Brenda have stopped to rest beside a thunderous waterfall. The peaceful, idyllic setting reminds them of home.

BRENDA
Eden should have been this peaceful.

CASSIE
With Satan waiting.

CARL
Save comparisons for later.
We need to survive this nightmare first.

CASSIE
You think Scott's still tracking us?

CARL
Or the tribesmen got him.

BRENDA
Be a load off us.


CASSIE
And one less person on our side.

CARL
(quickly)
He was never on our side. All of it's my fault.

CASSIE
 Your fault? You can't take the blame for this.

CARL
Who then? The company?
I worked the promo.

BRENDA
Now who's unfocused?

CASSIE
She's right.

CARL
Sorry. Guess it's the heat.

CASSIE
Wonder how hot it gets here?

BRENDA
Too hot … already.

CASSIE
Water's cool.

BRENDA
Very.

CARL
There's no time to swim.

CASSIE
(agrees)
Tribesmen might be on the way.

BRENDA
(splashes a foot in the water)
Still …

CASSIE
(pleadingly)
Honey.

CARL
Five minutes.
I'll stand watch.

He goes to the edge of the clearing. Both women disrobe quickly and enter the water.

CASSIE
This is wonderful.

BRENDA
(looks around furtively)
Hope there's no snakes.

CASSIE
Ugh! You would think of that.

BRENDA
Hurry, we've only got four minutes left.

The women manage to swim quietly as Carl scans the forest. MUSIC UP as VARIOUS ANGLES show the placid beauty of the area. It's a somber, but exhilarating few moments of peace in the midst of all the terror surrounding them.

MUSIC FADES as Carl indicates they need to dress and move on.

WIPE TO:

EXT. HIGH MOUNTAIN AREA
AERIAL VIEW as CAMERA ZOOMS to show a line of tribesmen following the Hunt Leader. Scott and Burke are being carried on separate mats of poles between them. Both men are tied securely and modestly covered with loincloths. Neither are coherent, and when either tries to speak, a tribesman raises a gourd of coca leaf liquid to their lips, forcing the mixture down their throats. It is liquid cocaine and designed to keep them in a state of semi-consciousness until they arrive at their destination.

HUNT LEADER
Quedarse domido.
(subtitle: make them sleep)

TRIBESMAN
Por su mando.
(subtitle: by your command)

The tribesmen reach a ground opening with a tremendous stone slab set to one side. Lowering the pole mats, they cut Scott and Burke loose, drag them to the edge of the hole and lower them inside. Then working as a team, they raise the slab and deposit it over the hole, covering all but a thin sliver of space.

HUNT LEADER
Ahora mismo, el exacto dio queraba ascendo.
(subtitle: at last, the real god will arise)

The group turns and heads back down the mountain, leaving Burke and Scott groggily returning to consciousness inside the earthen tomb.

CUT TO:

INT. TOMB
Burke coughs as he regains his senses. Glancing around he sees the space is no larger than a small half bathroom for the two men.

BURKE
Man, that stuff kicks.

SCOTT
(holds his head)
What a buzz.

BURKE
(panic setting in)
We gotta get out of here.

SCOTT
(looks around)
What happened to the council?
Thought we'd go free.

BURKE
Wasn't debatable.

Scott manages to stand, but must hold the wall for support.

SCOTT
My feet feel numb.

BURKE
A lot more might if we don't get
out of here by nightfall.

SCOTT
Now what?

BURKE
Did some research for an ad campaign I just ran.

SCOTT
And?

BURKE
These people are part of an Inca tribe.

SCOTT
So? They're just savages.
BURKE
No, they're not. The Incas were highly
organized at one point in their civilization.

SCOTT
And this affects me how?

BURKE
It could affect both of us. A lot!
They put us in here together for a reason.

SCOTT
Hey, man, I'm straight.
Nothing like that's going on.

BURKE
Get your mind out of the gutter.

SCOTT
Ok, I'm listening.

BURKE
They had legends explaining existence
just like modern religions.

SCOTT
You mean like the seven days of creation,
Garden of Eden, that sort of thing?

BURKE
Right. But it's a little different.

SCOTT
Hell of a lot different, obviously.

BURKE
Their Sun God, Wiraqocha, sent his two children to earth to educate humans on how to create a culture.

SCOTT
Adam and Eve?

BURKE
No, these were brother and sister,
Manco Capac and Mama Ocllo. They rose from the
waters of Lake Titicaca like gods in human form.

SCOTT
That first one…

BURKE
Manco Capac?

SCOTT
Yeah, that's what they called me.

BURKE
Welcome to the club. Everybody started yelling
the same thing when I washed up onshore.

SCOTT
After I pushed you overboard. (sighs)
Man, I'm sorry about that now.

BURKE
Pity won't get us out of here.

SCOTT
So they think we're gods?

BURKE
Yeah, but they can't decide which
of us is the real one.

SCOTT
That's why we're in here.

BURKE
They had elaborate torture techniques.
Be thankful they used this one.
It's a bit more humane.

SCOTT
I don't get it. What's humane about torture?




BURKE
They mean for one of us to die.
Without passing judgment on a real god,
they left it to us.

SCOTT
So only one of us is supposed to
walk out of this tomb alive?

BURKE
Seems to be the point.

SCOTT
Won't they be shocked when both of us get out.

BURKE
Both of us can't.

SCOTT
What do you mean?

BURKE
If we leave together, we won't survive.
They're sure to have guards posted somewhere out there.

SCOTT
So we just sit and wait for them to leave?

BURKE
Not likely. Temperatures at this
altitude can get frigid at night.

SCOTT
(noticing the loincloths)
And we're not exactly dressed for cold weather.

BURKE
Bingo!

Both men begin digging around the thin opening of light overhead.

SCOTT
By the way…

BURKE
Yeah?

SCOTT
What else could have happened back there?

BURKE
Instead of this?

SCOTT
Yeah.

BURKE
For starters, they could have
made you an ideal bride.

SCOTT
Screw that.

BURKE
Same method, probably.


WIPE TO:

EXT. JUNGLE LATE AFTERNOON
POV as Carl turns from watching a mountaintop in the distance. Cassie is searching for plant life to serve as food. Brenda is gathering branches to build a fire later.

CARL
Ladies, I think it best to stay here tonight.

BRENDA
Suits me. If we're gonna die, might as well be together.

CASSIE
Stop it! Nobody's dying tonight. We'll be fine right here.

CARL
(chuckles lightly)
Don't know how accurate an assessment that is.
But I hope you're right.

CASSIE
Don't go giving up, too!

CARL
I'm not ready to cash it in, yet.
Would help, though, to have a weapon or two.
Kinda push the balance for our side.

Brenda, with a sharp intake of breath, draws her hand back from where she's been searching.

BRENDA
Maybe this will help.

She holds up a rusty bayonet.
CARL
(impressed)
Just what the doctor ordered.
Wonder who brought that here?

CASSIE
And if they're still around.

BRENDA
Anything's possible.

CARL
(examining the weapon)
Effective weapon.

CASSIE
(carefully sizing the sword)
 A little more than a foot.

CARL
Isn't that standard?

CASSIE
No. They varied.
American was 16 inches, French was 22,
British varied in World War I.

CARL
Guess that's settled. No way of
telling which war this came from.

CUT TO:

CLOSE SHOT of Brenda's face as she recognizes something on the back side of the handle.

BRENDA
World War 2. (points to the barrel)
My grandmother escaped one of these in that one.

CUT TO:

WIDER ANGLE as Carl turns the gun over and sees a blackened swastika emblazoned on the backside.

CASSIE
It can't be.

CARL
That's impossible.

CASSIE
I don't want to know.

CARL
All of that was a half a world away.

BRENDA
Weren't we yesterday?

CASSIE
She's right. If those people
are here, we don't stand a chance.

CARL
It hasn't been fired.

CASSIE
So?

CARL
Maybe the tribe took care of business.

CASSIE
That's what you think this is? Business?

CARL
I didn't mean it that way.

CASSIE
What other way is there?

BRENDA
Please, don't fight. It's getting dark.

CARL
Look, all I'm saying is maybe we don't
have to deal with this.

CASSIE
Right. There's enough other stuff out there to kill us. Without thinking about some deranged Nazi on the loose.

BRENDA
That's enough!

CASSIE
It could be just a collection.

CASSIE
Like the stuff in the other caves?

CARL
We don't know what we're dealing with.
Until we do, we've got to consider
all options for explanation.

BRENDA
There's no other explanation for that.
We're dealing in evil here. That's for sure.

CASSIE
With little or nothing to fight it.

CARL
All right, listen. We need to find
better cover … more shelter.

BRENDA
There's no protection against that.
For all we know …

CASSIE
Don't even think it.

BRENDA
But he could be here.

CARL
Don't be ridiculous. That'd make him
113 years old. He died April 30, 1945.

CASSIE
There was no positive I.D.

CARL
That would defy the laws of nature and physics.

CASSIE
Well, we didn't get here on the straight and narrow.


BRENDA
She's right. You know it's possible.

SOUND EFX as thunder booms in the distance.

CARL
(looks upward)
Like I said, let's find better shelter.

CUT TO:

AERIAL VIEW as it begins raining. The downpour drives all three up against a solid tree. EFX as lightning crackles overhead, then splits the tree down the middle. They run in different directions. Brenda falls, screaming into dense vegetation. Carl and Cassie jump and roll into the side of a hidden hut. They smash through a wall and roll inside, out of danger.

CASSIE
Carl, where are you?

CARL
Over here. Rattled but ok.

CASSIE
Brenda?

CARL
Don't see her. Heard her yell.

He starts back out through the hole in the wall.

CASSIE
You can't go back out there!

CARL
She won't stand a chance if I don't.

CASSIE
(lunging after him)
Don't leave me here!

CARL
(pushes her back)
It's safer. I'll be back.
He vanishes outside in the driving wind and rain.

CASSIE
NO!!

CLOSE SHOT of her face as she searches the gloom outside.

CUT TO:

ANOTHER ANGLE as Brenda slowly opens her eyes. She is held closely in the arms of a drenched blonde-haired man. He is older, muscular, moderately tall, though seated and has the most piercing blue eyes she's ever seen. Awakening with a jolt, she tries to pull away.

BRENDA
Let go of me!

ADAM
Hush! Someone's coming.

BRENDA
(managing to break free)
I said, leave me alone!

ADAM
Have it your way, then.

BRENDA
(noticing his accent)
You're foreign.

ADAM
German, yes.

SOUND EFX as the crunching of trees sounds close.

CARL
Brenda, can you hear me?

BRENDA
Yeah, Carl, over here.

ADAM
Friend of yours?

BRENDA
(brushes herself off)
Kind of my travel agent.

ADAM
(smitten with her)
Good, Brenda.

Adam pauses as Brenda gives him a look for being so forward. He just shrugs it off.

ADAM
So I just heard him call you.

DIFF ANGLE as Carl finds them. Adam helps Brenda to her feet.

CARL
I see you had help.

ADAM
She fell into my arms during the storm.
My name is Adam.

CARL
(shakes hands)
Carl. Good to meet you. Hell, it's
good to see anybody from back home.

ADAM
Back home?

BRENDA
You know, the other side.

ADAM
I do not follow.

CARL
How'd you get here?

ADAM
I don't know exactly. One of my father's
aides told me some things.

CARL
Your father's here?
ADAM
No. They said he sent me away before he died.

CARL
I'm sorry.

ADAM
Thank you. I never really knew him.

CARL
We'd better get back. Cassie's probably worried.

ADAM
And she is … ?

CARL
My wife. Ten years together.

ADAM
You are lucky.

CARL
So far … in this place.

They head back to the hut and enter using the door. Rain is still pouring outside and Cassie is startled by their entrance.

CASSIE
You're back.

She embraces Carl, then hugs Brenda. Stops short with Adam.

CARL
Thank God, Brenda didn't get too far.

CASSIE
(staring at Adam)
And you would be?

ADAM
Adam. Adam Brown.

CASSIE
Very nice to meet you.

CARL
He saved Brenda out there.

CASSIE
We're very grateful.

BRENDA
Boy, I'll say.

ADAM
This is my hut. (glances at the wall)
Or what's left of it.

CARL
Sorry about the wall. Of course we'll repair it.

ADAM
It may not be wise to stay here any longer.

BRENDA
What do you mean?

ADAM
Tribesmen get closer every day.
They were almost here before you arrived.

BRENDA
You knew we were here?

ADAM
There is very little about the island I don't know.
I've been here all my life.

CARL
You're not that old.

ADAM
Counting in years, 57.

BRENDA
Sure don't look it.

CASSIE
(whispers to herself)
Remarkable.

ADAM
I assure you, I've tracked every
sunrise since I was ten years old.

CARL
Is there any way off the island?

ADAM
You can go short distances in any direction.
But there's an energy field that prevents further travel.

CARL
That would be how we got here.

ADAM
You've been through the field?

CASSIE
Yes.

ADAM
Very few make it.

BRENDA
You've seen others?

ADAM
They wash up onshore sometimes.
After the storms.

BRENDA
You mean like this one?

ADAM
No, this is a natural phenomenon.
Something else happens when the field opens.

CARL
Like what?

ADAM
I don't know how to explain exactly.
The sky opens and you can see a
horrible black void behind it.

BRENDA
I didn't see anything like that.
CASSIE
We were preoccupied.

CARL
(to Adam)
Go on.

ADAM
Everything seems thrown out of the void by some great force. I was fascinated at first, but then, when
people died (pauses to collect his emotions)
I couldn't bear to watch anymore.

CARL
They all come through the same way?

 

 

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